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This was feedback posted for Roy Merkem
 

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Voted For: Roy Merkem

this battle seemed close to me. the punches were rather even and the structure for both was good. no multis so this came down to a punchline battle for me. the line that caught my eye for a.k.a was the finding nemo line. and although that was good i actually laughed out loud when i read too good, a.k.a also known for suckin my dick. so that line took it for metaskriptz. good battle yall.

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Voted For: A.K.A.

aka took this wit better more complex punches....
better wordplay and vocab....he had a better all around verse.da otha dude had decent punches but sum of dem i didnt really get like da teeth thing..ne ways

vote:aka
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Voted For: Roy Merkem

A.K.A.
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay was weak as all hell.. a few, at best, of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Roy Merkem
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay is decent at some points.. a few of ur punches connected.. attempted personal..

Overall
both had a good structure and flow.. neither had multis.. Roy Merkem had better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and an attempted personal.. so basing off of that.. Roy Merkem gets my vote..

VOTE - ROY MERKEM