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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

nice battle
winner-marvjay

flow-tie
punches-jay
multies-tie
finisher-jay
opener-tie

favorite lines

queen
IP:

He lacks new flows , so Imma clown on jay’s rhymin’ disadvantage
cause he’s known to re-use ‘more lines’ than coke recyclin’ addicts

that was hot

jay

yung boys be gas her like black cum a make ya hair grow properly.
look at "sig" she said 1nce i start suckin dick "deres no stopin me"

this was a killer punch

u 2 are pretty even

return the favor please

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uppin 4 more votes muthafukkaz

Voted For: Black Queen

I almost gave this too jay. In fact i was typing my response in his voting box and then i thought about it and changed my mind cause i wasn't really feeling his jokes. Not to say his punches weren't good but i'm looking for punches not jokes. His personals were good but that's all i was really feeling was his personal. His multis were good but i wasn't feeling what it led up too. Black queen had no personals or multis but i was feeling her punches required a little more thought than marv's. otherwise structure was a tie. This was close yall good battle.

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Voted For: Black Queen

i think black queen took this one because she came wayy more original. marv, u had a nice verse, but i think some of tha lines and barz were a lil bit played. but it was still nice...Didnt i read this battle b4? what happened, but whatever. black queen came harder wit tha punches, and wordplay. i think she lacked vocab tho, but i seen a lotta nice mettas in there that gave her my vote. marv-u had good structure, but ur verse was uninteresting. and i feel u fell off near tha end of ur verse, when u started off sick...elevate on that fam. NO HATE tho...u got skillz, and u got some dope punches, but i dont think u came hard, punchline wise in this battle.
overall this was a close battle, but i feel BQ came more interesting and original to get tha win. yall should still elevate, and i think yall should work on multies, and then when u master that, combine that rhyming style into ur old rhyming style, and ur verse will be hot...just my opinion...and coem interesting. good battle

PLZ return tha favor on battle in sig...against CJ, cause i took my time out to vote on this. and plz make ur vote xplained

keep elevating

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

This battle was straight....

Marvjay-

*ima exspose ya wait dis hoe's a fake just check da bar's!....
2 get "rid of black queen" i aint gota "throw away a deck of cards"*

^that was nice play on words and a smooth punch^
dis chick lyin rv she neva b...handlin drugs..start panacin cuzz
u scary hoe dat get "shook" more than a "celebirty hand in da club"*

^this line was forced but still landin a quick jab ta gut!!..
-"shook" more than a "celebirty hand in da club"*-that was
NICE!!!!!

*she 15 n luv da suck dick ya'll dis childs a freak.....
believe i'll damage ya u like a "d-block calender" ya "style(s) is week"*

^that was BLAGGHHHHH!!!!no good at all what so evah!!^^

*yung boys be gas her like black cum a make ya hair grow properly.
look at "sig" she said 1nce i start suckin dick "deres no stopin me"*

^BLAGGHHHHHHHH^

*u oughta write flows..cuzz mj yeah i slaughter trife hoe's!....
nice? u even saught a..in rap u'll "neva c me" im saught of like "strobe"*

^^^Didnt connect..???????^^^

BlackQueen-

*He lacks new flows , so Imma clown on jay’s rhymin’ disadvantage
cause he’s known to re-use ‘more lines’ than coke recyclin’ addicts*

^^if its true...still wouldnt had hit hard,an it didnt really make sense^^^

*This herb is useless..he isnt postin first he wants the worst abusements
Ya not original..the way ya been feedin off writtens like nervous students*

^^^that was nice wit good multi's but really no punch..but still nice enough ta get tha point^^

*Like atheists there’s no faith for ya.. prayers wont save you from this loss
Cuz you gotta ram ya fists through God to get ya punches 'a-cross'*

^^That was killah..I like tha -God to get ya punches 'a-cross'*-that line was ill^^

*U always admired me, ever since u came here u wack hoe
But since u dont go out, i never worried bout u always in my shadows*

^^^BLAGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!3rd grade foolishness!!^^^

*Sad...u da only one who can never have played name flips
& u knew u were gon’ be served, shit a plate is what you came with*

^^^plate is what u came with....HAH!!!CONNECTED!!^^

overall-MarvJay got this because I felt his punchez out weighed blackqueens!!!

this battle couldve been stronger...but still..it is what it is!!!

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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009

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This was feedback posted for Black Queen

nice drop i c u know how 2 hold down ur own keep up da good verses

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Voted For: Black Queen

He lacks new flows , so Imma clown on jay’s rhymin’ disadvantage
cause he’s known to re-use ‘more lines’ than coke recyclin’ addicts
good opener, punch landed
This herb is useless..he isnt postin first he wants the worst abusements
Ya not original..the way ya been feedin off writtens like nervous students
uh, pretty decent punch
Like atheists there’s no faith for ya.. prayers wont save you from this loss
Cuz you gotta ram ya fists through God to get ya punches 'a-cross'
good
U always admired me, ever since u came here u wack hoe
But since u dont go out, i never worried bout u always in my shadows
nah, don’t like this punch
Sad...u da only one who can never have played name flips
& u knew u were gon’ be served, shit a plate is what you came with
pretty good closer here

Overall you had a good drop, punches were on point,
Structure was good, and the flow was on point also

ima exspose ya wait dis hoe's a fake just check da bar's!....
2 get "rid of black queen" i aint gota "throw away a deck of cards"
good punch
dis chick lyin rv she neva b...handlin drugs..start panacin cuzz
u scary hoe dat get "shook" more than a "celebirty hand in da club"
nope, not feelin this one
she 15 n luv da suck dick ya'll dis childs a freak.....
believe i'll damage ya u like a "d-block calender" ya "style(s) is week"
pretty decent punch line here
yung boys be gas her like black cum a make ya hair grow properly.
look at "sig" she said 1nce i start suckin dick "deres no stopin me"
good here, punch was on point
u oughta write flows..cuzz mj yeah i slaughter trife hoe's!....
nice? u even saught a..in rap u'll "neva c me" im saught of like "strobe"
closer was aight here

Overall you had a good drop too, structure was okay here,
The punches were pretty decent all thru, and the flow was
Okay here too

But to me I think that Black Queen took this one by a hair
Though, punches seemed harder hitting and they landed
But good drop to both of you…no hate to both…