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upp'in............................................ ............................
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yo up this man stop sleepin on this battle yall
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Yo up this man what's goin on wit these voted send it up to the top till we get some votes in here
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Voted For: Blackmage
hmmm, this was a close one to call...Black had some really nice wordplay and a lotta pretty good personals... howeva, unfortunately for black, some of ya shit...(SOME) was a bit played... you came good wit wordplay and some funny punches... i think this was a nice, elevated drop IE came alright with his punches in his verse... his whole drop was basically mediocre punches and no personals, black's punches and wordplay outweighed IE's punches handing him the battle... V/ Black best line... Black- talk glochs you won't shoot you no brute your flo's cute and if i'm a full blown herb what's that make you a "square "root" ^that shyt was funny |
Voted For: intensify effect
Blackmage- Nice flow. Punches was good. Personals you picked was good. Punches was good, but need more effect.Wordplays was good. I.E- aiiight man, nice punches. Good wordplays. Flowed ok. Wordplays and punches is wat stood out in ya verse. Overall=Both heads are good. Punches from blackmage was good, effective and decent. Wordplays was nice too. I.E punches was decent and more effective, with some good ass wordplays. My vote goes to I.E for some hard hitting punches with some decent wordplays. Blackmage, keep doing ya thang, just add more effectiveness in your punches. Add dope wordplays too. |
uppin for the deciding vote yall next vote wins.........................(suspense)
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yo up this man i got shit to do come on..............
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Voted For: intensify effect
Breakdown... Name:Intensify Effect Verse: u act like u a, savage for life? more like average for your whole exsistance... like leg-less marathon runners, i just can't see you going the distance... flowing persistant and your caught at a stand still... a hard verse for u just takes up space like land fill... i merk you dawg...shit...i leave you stuttering, shook... your lines get no attention, like blind kids coloring books.... now look at u taking ya time, with more extension then a hair-salon... plus u couldnt "Pull" on a WIN... place'in ya verse in a water bong... *now lets finish him* my style so cold that i froze ya-line... with punches n flow combined... ya mind-designed so empty, beat'in u in da head i'll sound like a drum-lines... just face it, u got more played parts then samuel.L.jackson... take acttion?, why when u'r style more ut dated then IRAQ mapping... it's over, no votes are needed...cuz he even dout -he's-won-it..... cuz ya ideas of punches are more empty then ethiopian-stomachs...... Need/Don’t need to work on:WAsssup I.E, sorry bout all the beef, i mean if you wanna be straight we straight, but if you think there is any beef, then lemme know, but im done with the beef with you...anyways...nice drop keep droppin them fam. :thumbup: Stats.. Punches:8/10 Metaphors:7/10 Wordplay:7/10 Structure:6/10 Personals:6/10 Multies:4/10 Total:38/60 ----------------------------------------------------- Breakdown: Name:BLackMage Verse: I "Intensify" the "effect" of my "Eternal Illness" just so we clear special "effects" are fake they lack realness your sentences are sentenced to death i'm the ropeman i'll beat you like a junkie tryin to steal from his "dopeman" talk glochs you won't shoot you no brute your flo's cute and if i'm a full blown herb what's that make you a "square "root" I "intensify" my pencil-eye precision for fast collision you challenge me you'll get the "third degree", bad decision you lack masculinity i pack "mass" like divinity your wack you're into me i don't son you dog we're trinity Need/Don’t need to work on:yo B...i think you got potential...i mean you coulda had him if your punches connected more ya meen...keep ya head up fam....pz Stats: Punches:4/10 Metaphors:3/10 Wordplay:4/10 Structure:6/10 Personals:3/10 Multies:4/10 Total:21/60 RTF in the Sig Against J DOT...i personally felt like i won and so did 4 other people....hopefully you feel the same way...pz |
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