Thanx Mayne ......................... I Rtf Already

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Voted For: Stanza

i'll start with mandela's verse......nice multi's used but i felt that it lacked complexity and that because of the structure your flow was off.....but nice concept used......

stanza verse i enjoyed more.....he came complex with it and the vocab usage was real nice....flow was smooth....my vote goes to him

Thanx Gurlie

We Still Upppin Only Two More votes ..................Uppin

Voted For: Stanza

meh, i liked stanza's verse more....i liked his angle at the topic better, yours was good nels, but i felt you put most of your verse into capturing emotion, not imagery, and stanza did both pretty well.....so im giving it to him.......nels, you had some nice multies though, structure was off though, stanza, not a bad, short verse, enjoyed it, keep up

/stanxza

Thanx Man for the votes comin Yall Only one more vote then this is over Plain And simple nice drop though Nelson Maybe we will meet up next time

Voted For: Stanza

iught i aint too good wit topicals... but you easily took this... more emotion more of a story and it was dope! lol, i was feelin your verse alot man, flow was decent and vocabulary was good... nelson u had the vocabulary vut i wasnt really felin your verse... it was good but u nweed to have more emotion, flow was ight thoyugh keep droppin em pz...