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Yeah Wateva Thats why You cant Vote ............LOL
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Dont get angry because I left honest feedback .
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?me Angry?
No ........Tanx N E way Though.......... |
man wtf would somebody vote on this shit damnn.....
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Voted For: Big City
stanaz: nice verse, good flow an punches, effective personals too ya verse was short n sweet, straight ta the point No Ducking..Rush-Me? Even though a Loss To U Wont Hurt Cuz U known to be a "Fucking-Pussy" like "Prositute at Work" ^^^ that second line is so fuckin basic but it had me like ''oooh'' haha, good shit!! ^^ that was the highlight of the battle im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch ^^^ i like the idea of the wilson wordplay, but it was very uneffective for a battle, maybe could of worded it better ta have more effect an turned it into a personal, ya feel me? city: ya closer was stretched, rest of the verse had some good flow too it, punches were good, but on some occassions u bigged yourself up alot, like in the bar i copied above ^^^ on the whole stanza had the much shorter verse but remained on point throughtout, where as big city had some good stuff an very creative, but in a battle some shit was not effective because of the self glory an not personal disses on stanza |
Thanx Man......................We still Uppin ........
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uppin this ish again, thanks for the honest vote Tephlon
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Voted For: Big City
this was a nice ass battle in my point of view Stanza you had some good punches at the beginning but you fell off towards the end.....you should've went for a longer verse and you would've had a better chance of winning with how you fell off at the end of your short verse....short verses....you have to have a TIGHT ASS verse if you gonna pull a win off with one....but you didn't do good enough to get the win BC you had decent punches all thru your verse.....flow was aight you can work on yours too lol....you had a lot of metas and shit....i don't even thin k need to explain why you won....you just....ripped him Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin this ish again, thanks for the honest feedback detrimental
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uppin this ish again, thanks for the honest feedback detrimental
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uppin this ish again, thanks for the honest feedback detrimental
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uppin this ish again, thanks for the honest feedback detrimental
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uppin this ish again, thanks for the honest feedback detrimental
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uppin this ish again, thanks for the honest feedback detrimental
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UppiN up in This Muthafucka.........................
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