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Check in by: 04-29-05 at 05:05 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-27-05 05:09 PM.

You Think You Gonna Be the One To Put A Lost On My Wins
You So Soft Id Bring My Knife & Kill You With The Plastic End
No Ducking..Rush-Me? Even though a Loss To U Wont Hurt
Cuz U known to be a "Fucking-Pussy" like "Prositute at Work"
Big City Must be*Dead Crap*Bcuz Im Known to *RIP shit*
BC battle on Phones so match Numbers & Letters & Call Quits
you must "Lust-For-Death" I'm "Dusting-Ya-Rep Hold-It-Son
U Know I Won Facin' me is like "Russian-Roulette"..............

Done You Betta Not Duck This time

Come on man Dont Bitch out You Dont Need all that time to post a verse

Big City has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-28-05 03:36 PM.

i didnt' say i did need all that time to post a verse, but i got important shit to do son, prom is tomm

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chea......dog its nothin

stanza, you should just retire, but don't copy Mase
or you'll get ya " sideburned" like Ashanti's face
you appealin to none, stop talking, start concealin ya tongue
cuz ya chances of winnin are about a million to one
ya feelin me son, ..im poppin hate in my jams
treat u a ya crew like Jews, and "concentrate on ya camp"
im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit
no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch
how u gon put me up against this punk phony Stanza
im about to show him "whose the boss" like i was Tony danza
you small prick, how could a clique wit all dicks
be SO DAMN PUSSEY, did u get ya balls ripped?
aww shit, dont try and star, you'll get maligned and scarred
he cou'ldnt get an explosive verse, wit C-4 in ya lines and bars
u at a loss for words? thank god!, did ya verbals desert you?
niggas' will b askin "Where you at?" like a boost mobile commercial......its nothin dog



Just in case====
*peeps used to get on Ashanti cuz she had sideburns
*Wilson makes basketballs
*Whose the boss? is an old ass show
*C-4 is explosives if u aint know

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i didnt duck hoe, i got shit more important than you lol

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You Think You Gonna Be the One To Put A Lost On My Wins
You So Soft Id Bring My Knife & Kill You With The Plastic End
Set-up was eh, but punch was funny...
No Ducking..Rush-Me? Even though a Loss To U Wont Hurt
Cuz U known to be a "Fucking-Pussy" like "Prositute at Work"
Eh.......not feeling it...
Big City Must be*Dead Crap*Bcuz Im Known to *RIP shit*
BC battle on Phones so match Numbers & Letters & Call Quits
Nice....
you must "Lust-For-Death" I'm "Dusting-Ya-Rep Hold-It-Son
U Know I Won Facin' me is like "Russian-Roulette"..............
With *fully Loaded-Guns*
Played concept, but good closer..

stanza, you should just retire, but don't copy Mase
or you'll get ya " sideburned" like Ashanti's face
Ha....nice connection, I'm still laughing about those semi-mutton chops..
you appealin to none, stop talking, start concealin ya tongue
cuz ya chances of winnin are about a million to one
OK...
ya feelin me son, ..im poppin hate in my jams
treat u a ya crew like Jews, and "concentrate on ya camp"
Played concept, but aight...
im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit
no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch
Eh....so-so..
how u gon put me up against this punk phony Stanza
im about to show him "whose the boss" like i was Tony danza
Hah...alright
you small prick, how could a clique wit all dicks
be SO DAMN PUSSEY, did u get ya balls ripped?
OK.......
aww shit, dont try and star, you'll get maligned and scarred
he cou'ldnt get an explosive verse, wit C-4 in ya lines and bars
Played....
u at a loss for words? thank god!, did ya verbals desert you?
niggas' will b askin "Where you at?" like a boost mobile commercial......its nothin dog
Played...

Some played shit, but both of you brought some good lines..
Don't have enough posts to throw a vote yet, but this was a good battle, I'm upping it so peeps can get a look..

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Oh You Wack ass hell I Got This win


Go Lay Down SOmewhere Yo Wack ass and dont forget to tell them niggas who toke yo wack ass down

hahaah son you're crazy, i raped ur sorry ass get on wit that

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Voted For: Big City

stanza loses you have to drop 10 lines or more to win on rv strobes rule

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Oh, I dunno this was a close one. BC had him with lines. I think stanza was confused about the bars and lines thing. But stanza did come hard. The last line in stanza's verse prolly took it. I dunno though. This is a tuff one. BC had a lot of not so good lines and his punches werent all that. I can't vote though.........

Voted For: Stanza

Stanza's verse.
You Think You Gonna Be the One To Put A Lost On My Wins
You So Soft Id Bring My Knife & Kill You With The Plastic End
Couldve been worded wayy better, but a nice opener

No Ducking..Rush-Me? Even though a Loss To U Wont Hurt
Cuz U known to be a "Fucking-Pussy" like "Prositute at Work"
Almost played, but you worded it wayy better. good punches/diss here

Big City Must be*Dead Crap*Bcuz Im Known to *RIP shit*
BC battle on Phones so match Numbers & Letters & Call Quits
Kinda forced this one to make since, but it was just ight for me


you must "Lust-For-Death" I'm "Dusting-Ya-Rep Hold-It-Son
U Know I Won Facin' me is like "Russian-Roulette"..............

With *fully Loaded-Guns*
This was dope. Your best bar. This was worded good, and unexpected. I think this one prolly got him

Your verse was pretty descent. Kinda a slow start, but you picked it up near the end of ur verse, and started dropping some nice lines. Ur structure was on point, and your verse flowed together pretty good. Some hard punches, not too many personals, and a few good mettas. Nice verse. You take it in my opinion


Big City's verse

stanza, you should just retire, but don't copy Mase
or you'll get ya " sideburned" like Ashanti's face
Worded bad, and off wit structure, but a nice bar if the voters can understand it

you appealin to none, stop talking, start concealin ya tongue
cuz ya chances of winnin are about a million to one
Again, this was worded kinda off, but an overall nice punch

ya feelin me son, ..im poppin hate in my jams
treat u a ya crew like Jews, and "concentrate on ya camp"
Worded bad, but it was still dope. This was ur best so far

im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit
no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch
hahaha..creative. And definately not played. Nice

how u gon put me up against this punk phony Stanza
im about to show him "whose the boss" like i was Tony danza
ehh. This was wack to me. No hate

you small prick, how could a clique wit all dicks
be SO DAMN PUSSEY, did u get ya balls ripped?
Kinda the same concept as eminem. If you wouldnt have said this first, it wouldve been mad dope, but because em played off this dick/pussy line, it took some points outa tha creativitie category for you

aww shit, dont try and star, you'll get maligned and scarred
he cou'ldnt get an explosive verse, wit C-4 in ya lines and bars
Stretched a lil, but still understood. Descent

u at a loss for words? thank god!, did ya verbals desert you?
niggas' will b askin "Where you at?" like a boost mobile commercial......its nothin dog
Ok ender. But still a lil stretched.

Your verse was kinda stretched as you should know. It was ight though. It made your flow look/seem kinda terrible, but besides that, creativitie in this wasnt all that, but a few punches were nice and wouldve landed right if worded correctly. I think you should work on that. But this was a nice verse. Made it a competition, but I dont think you took it. If personals were placed somewhere it wouldve been a win[/b]

Nice battle.