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Big City vs Stanza
Battle Rules:
8 bars max No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 04-29-05 at 05:05 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-27-05 05:09 PM.
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You Think You Gonna Be the One To Put A Lost On My Wins
You So Soft Id Bring My Knife & Kill You With The Plastic End No Ducking..Rush-Me? Even though a Loss To U Wont Hurt Cuz U known to be a "Fucking-Pussy" like "Prositute at Work" Big City Must be*Dead Crap*Bcuz Im Known to *RIP shit* BC battle on Phones so match Numbers & Letters & Call Quits you must "Lust-For-Death" I'm "Dusting-Ya-Rep Hold-It-Son U Know I Won Facin' me is like "Russian-Roulette".............. With *fully Loaded-Guns*
Done You Betta Not Duck This time |
Come on man Dont Bitch out You Dont Need all that time to post a verse
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Big City has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-28-05 03:36 PM.
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i didnt' say i did need all that time to post a verse, but i got important shit to do son, prom is tomm
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chea......dog its nothin
stanza, you should just retire, but don't copy Mase or you'll get ya " sideburned" like Ashanti's face you appealin to none, stop talking, start concealin ya tongue cuz ya chances of winnin are about a million to one ya feelin me son, ..im poppin hate in my jams treat u a ya crew like Jews, and "concentrate on ya camp" im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch how u gon put me up against this punk phony Stanza im about to show him "whose the boss" like i was Tony danza you small prick, how could a clique wit all dicks be SO DAMN PUSSEY, did u get ya balls ripped? aww shit, dont try and star, you'll get maligned and scarred he cou'ldnt get an explosive verse, wit C-4 in ya lines and bars u at a loss for words? thank god!, did ya verbals desert you? niggas' will b askin "Where you at?" like a boost mobile commercial......its nothin dog Just in case==== *peeps used to get on Ashanti cuz she had sideburns *Wilson makes basketballs *Whose the boss? is an old ass show *C-4 is explosives if u aint know |
i didnt duck hoe, i got shit more important than you lol
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This was feedback posted for Big City
You Think You Gonna Be the One To Put A Lost On My Wins
You So Soft Id Bring My Knife & Kill You With The Plastic End Set-up was eh, but punch was funny... No Ducking..Rush-Me? Even though a Loss To U Wont Hurt Cuz U known to be a "Fucking-Pussy" like "Prositute at Work" Eh.......not feeling it... Big City Must be*Dead Crap*Bcuz Im Known to *RIP shit* BC battle on Phones so match Numbers & Letters & Call Quits Nice.... you must "Lust-For-Death" I'm "Dusting-Ya-Rep Hold-It-Son U Know I Won Facin' me is like "Russian-Roulette".............. With *fully Loaded-Guns* Played concept, but good closer.. stanza, you should just retire, but don't copy Mase or you'll get ya " sideburned" like Ashanti's face Ha....nice connection, I'm still laughing about those semi-mutton chops.. you appealin to none, stop talking, start concealin ya tongue cuz ya chances of winnin are about a million to one OK... ya feelin me son, ..im poppin hate in my jams treat u a ya crew like Jews, and "concentrate on ya camp" Played concept, but aight... im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch Eh....so-so.. how u gon put me up against this punk phony Stanza im about to show him "whose the boss" like i was Tony danza Hah...alright you small prick, how could a clique wit all dicks be SO DAMN PUSSEY, did u get ya balls ripped? OK....... aww shit, dont try and star, you'll get maligned and scarred he cou'ldnt get an explosive verse, wit C-4 in ya lines and bars Played.... u at a loss for words? thank god!, did ya verbals desert you? niggas' will b askin "Where you at?" like a boost mobile commercial......its nothin dog Played... Some played shit, but both of you brought some good lines.. Don't have enough posts to throw a vote yet, but this was a good battle, I'm upping it so peeps can get a look.. |
Oh You Wack ass hell I Got This win
Go Lay Down SOmewhere Yo Wack ass and dont forget to tell them niggas who toke yo wack ass down |
hahaah son you're crazy, i raped ur sorry ass get on wit that
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Voted For: Big City
stanza loses you have to drop 10 lines or more to win on rv strobes rule Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Stanza
Oh, I dunno this was a close one. BC had him with lines. I think stanza was confused about the bars and lines thing. But stanza did come hard. The last line in stanza's verse prolly took it. I dunno though. This is a tuff one. BC had a lot of not so good lines and his punches werent all that. I can't vote though.........
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Voted For: Stanza
Stanza's verse. You Think You Gonna Be the One To Put A Lost On My Wins You So Soft Id Bring My Knife & Kill You With The Plastic End Couldve been worded wayy better, but a nice opener No Ducking..Rush-Me? Even though a Loss To U Wont Hurt Cuz U known to be a "Fucking-Pussy" like "Prositute at Work" Almost played, but you worded it wayy better. good punches/diss here Big City Must be*Dead Crap*Bcuz Im Known to *RIP shit* BC battle on Phones so match Numbers & Letters & Call Quits Kinda forced this one to make since, but it was just ight for me you must "Lust-For-Death" I'm "Dusting-Ya-Rep Hold-It-Son U Know I Won Facin' me is like "Russian-Roulette".............. With *fully Loaded-Guns* This was dope. Your best bar. This was worded good, and unexpected. I think this one prolly got him Your verse was pretty descent. Kinda a slow start, but you picked it up near the end of ur verse, and started dropping some nice lines. Ur structure was on point, and your verse flowed together pretty good. Some hard punches, not too many personals, and a few good mettas. Nice verse. You take it in my opinion Big City's verse stanza, you should just retire, but don't copy Mase or you'll get ya " sideburned" like Ashanti's face Worded bad, and off wit structure, but a nice bar if the voters can understand it you appealin to none, stop talking, start concealin ya tongue cuz ya chances of winnin are about a million to one Again, this was worded kinda off, but an overall nice punch ya feelin me son, ..im poppin hate in my jams treat u a ya crew like Jews, and "concentrate on ya camp" Worded bad, but it was still dope. This was ur best so far im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch hahaha..creative. And definately not played. Nice how u gon put me up against this punk phony Stanza im about to show him "whose the boss" like i was Tony danza ehh. This was wack to me. No hate you small prick, how could a clique wit all dicks be SO DAMN PUSSEY, did u get ya balls ripped? Kinda the same concept as eminem. If you wouldnt have said this first, it wouldve been mad dope, but because em played off this dick/pussy line, it took some points outa tha creativitie category for you aww shit, dont try and star, you'll get maligned and scarred he cou'ldnt get an explosive verse, wit C-4 in ya lines and bars Stretched a lil, but still understood. Descent u at a loss for words? thank god!, did ya verbals desert you? niggas' will b askin "Where you at?" like a boost mobile commercial......its nothin dog Ok ender. But still a lil stretched. Your verse was kinda stretched as you should know. It was ight though. It made your flow look/seem kinda terrible, but besides that, creativitie in this wasnt all that, but a few punches were nice and wouldve landed right if worded correctly. I think you should work on that. But this was a nice verse. Made it a competition, but I dont think you took it. If personals were placed somewhere it wouldve been a win[/b] Nice battle. |
Voted For: Stanza
Stanza's verse. You Think You Gonna Be the One To Put A Lost On My Wins You So Soft Id Bring My Knife & Kill You With The Plastic End Couldve been worded wayy better, but a nice opener No Ducking..Rush-Me? Even though a Loss To U Wont Hurt Cuz U known to be a "Fucking-Pussy" like "Prositute at Work" Almost played, but you worded it wayy better. good punches/diss here Big City Must be*Dead Crap*Bcuz Im Known to *RIP shit* BC battle on Phones so match Numbers & Letters & Call Quits Kinda forced this one to make since, but it was just ight for me you must "Lust-For-Death" I'm "Dusting-Ya-Rep Hold-It-Son U Know I Won Facin' me is like "Russian-Roulette".............. With *fully Loaded-Guns* This was dope. Your best bar. This was worded good, and unexpected. I think this one prolly got him Your verse was pretty descent. Kinda a slow start, but you picked it up near the end of ur verse, and started dropping some nice lines. Ur structure was on point, and your verse flowed together pretty good. Some hard punches, not too many personals, and a few good mettas. Nice verse. You take it in my opinion Big City's verse stanza, you should just retire, but don't copy Mase or you'll get ya " sideburned" like Ashanti's face Worded bad, and off wit structure, but a nice bar if the voters can understand it you appealin to none, stop talking, start concealin ya tongue cuz ya chances of winnin are about a million to one Again, this was worded kinda off, but an overall nice punch ya feelin me son, ..im poppin hate in my jams treat u a ya crew like Jews, and "concentrate on ya camp" Worded bad, but it was still dope. This was ur best so far im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch hahaha..creative. And definately not played. Nice how u gon put me up against this punk phony Stanza im about to show him "whose the boss" like i was Tony danza ehh. This was wack to me. No hate you small prick, how could a clique wit all dicks be SO DAMN PUSSEY, did u get ya balls ripped? Kinda the same concept as eminem. If you wouldnt have said this first, it wouldve been mad dope, but because em played off this dick/pussy line, it took some points outa tha creativitie category for you aww shit, dont try and star, you'll get maligned and scarred he cou'ldnt get an explosive verse, wit C-4 in ya lines and bars Stretched a lil, but still understood. Descent u at a loss for words? thank god!, did ya verbals desert you? niggas' will b askin "Where you at?" like a boost mobile commercial......its nothin dog Ok ender. But still a lil stretched. Your verse was kinda stretched as you should know. It was ight though. It made your flow look/seem kinda terrible, but besides that, creativitie in this wasnt all that, but a few punches were nice and wouldve landed right if worded correctly. I think you should work on that. But this was a nice verse. Made it a competition, but I dont think you took it. If personals were placed somewhere it wouldve been a win[/b] Nice battle. |
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