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Voted For: Still Motion

Troop- Alright The best Aspect of this verse was "Imagery". I liked the details you went. The Emotion should be upp a little. Vocab was good, you had a good balance. To me this was more like basic, didnt have no metaphors, no lots of emotion, just plain imagery. Which was good, but to me it was more basic vividly portrait though. The Appraoch was kinda played out to me, the concept wasn't too good as well.

Still Motion-I liked your verse. The Best Aspect was the imagery. Which was very detailed More poetic. You Had Vocab, which was good. THis was a good battle in the category of "Imagery"...Word


Conclusion- This was a hard decension but I vote for Still Motion. Basically his Concept was more better, and the approach was more better. The imagery Gave the concept and the approach, More Greater. Troop, You had a good verse but the concept was Un-Creative, the approach was good but the concept was just bleh, I liked your imagery very Much Detailed. So I had to vote for who had the best Concept....and Approach Plus creativeness.....V/ Still Motion

Voted For: T.r.oo.P

Troop
WOW....this was a good peice.At first,at beggining,I was like..what the fuck is this man talking about?But when the end came,I realized you were talking about suicide.DOPE concept here.As for the wording,it was ight.....not perfect though...could use some improvement.Just try to make it so the lines appear to made for each other.Your vocabulary was nice.So was flow.Those a more complex rhyme shceme would be nice.

Still Motion
Umm....your wording was horiible.You were all over the place.It was a mess.Vocabulary is good thing when used correctly...but I felt you used it bad.Also...you shoulda made it longer to try to describe it more.Big words alone doesn't make it dope.

Vote-Troop
RTF BELOW PLEASE
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203668

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you another one em who doesn't return favors....shit..last time I vote in 1 ur battles

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Eating Steel Sheets sounds like a pretty gay topic to me..

Voted For: T.r.oo.P

Checking polls nice one fams,..

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I will get that removed,.. good luck both,...

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checkin the polls troop...........................

Voted For: Still Motion

Wow this was and orgy of words... really liked the imagery in both verses... really liked SM's word usage over all... with that being said both verses had a very nice flow... and both stuck the subject though one was notedly far more creative... all in all the was one of the best topical battles I've read in awhile... good shit from both of you

Opener: SM
Closer: SM
Imagery: SM
Structure: T.R.O.O.P.
Vocab: SM
Creativity: SM
Complexity: SM
Enjoyment: SM

Vote: SM

Voted For: Still Motion

troops pretty gay, he ducked me

Voted For: Still Motion

i vote for motion u had better rymes and flow

troop wasnt feelin ur rymes tonite and ur flow but good structure

no hate u both did good