Battle Rules:

12-16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No d/r
No bullshit
3-0 KO
4-1 KO



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-08-05 at 06:17 PM

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Win by 3-0 KO

Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-05 04:45 PM.

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-05 05:12 PM.

welcomed in a crew due to narcotics,and he askin for a battle wit me thinkin it'd be exotic and erotic
this guy walks around tryna bag-dads(Baghdad),but flip his name in reverse and he's patriotic*
runnin to victory?,how,when i'ma pistol whip yo shin,and blast a missle throw your chin
he's got the brittle strings cause we all know that the 'midgets' are the ones concerned about 'little things'
stan loves babbling about havin a girl,but how sad he's only talking about his hand & pornography
but this man ain't winning this,cause he couldn't even spell 'before' correct in his biography**
he's tryna park without feeding the meter first,pissed off cause tony green gave him a fever and it hurts
but givin credit,I'll say his crew's groundbreakin
.............................................cause it's the first one where the leader is the worst!!
i can tap you on your head and make you bleed,but fags like you retalliate by spreadin out they seeds
but at least your not in denial,cause even you know that tephlon's way ahead of your league
flirting around with the monsieur in circles,snortin and snortin when you rap,a cross between urkel and merkel
cause tell me what straight emcee,that fucks girls,reps his crew,avatar,and font color with purple
stanza fails to breathe hot,like rejected pneumatics,he reps me in his sig,trust me,i never forget the fanatics
beggin for a record reset,cause he's ash-aimed,like snipers lookin to killin cigarette addictics
he turned prey/pray like converted non-believers,so he ain't kiddin me with gray
making a thread about whackness but himself he four-gets,like 3 yr olds on the 365 day


READ HERE
couldn't put hypher links due to amount of lines I guess....so gotta explain here

1st bar-"Stanza' flipped in reverse is az-nats...as-nats(nationals)

2nd bar-one hyper link i was able to get in...

3rd bar-He got 'before' spelled 'befor' in his prof...but he probably gonna change it now..
Here's stanza babblin about girlfried
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...76&postcount=49

4th bar-ez
5th bar-Stanza talking about "why am I battlin teph?"
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...91&postcount=54

6th bar-look at his profile..he put his user font color,the color in which he reps his sig,and his avatar(a big purple ball or sumtin)...all in purple.If it not like that anymore...the faggot changed it.

7th bar-Stanza askin for a record reset...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189930
and in his sig he got an Open Mic with me in it(if he didn't change it)

8th bar-Stanza makin a thread about whackest drops..yet forgets himself..LOL
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192427

HAHHA......................

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Damn Homie I knew You Was Wack but This Takes The Cake

Voted For: Stanza

NK
welcomed in a crew due to narcotics,and he askin for a battle wit me thinkin it'd be exotic and erotic
this guy walks around tryna bag-dads(Baghdad),but flip his name in reverse and he's patriotic*
original nice
runnin to victory?,how,when i'ma pistol whip yo shin,and blast a missle throw your chin
he's got the brittle strings cause we all know that the 'midgets' are the ones concerned about 'little things'
nice word play
stan loves babbling about havin a girl,but how sad he's only talking about his hand & pornography
but this man ain't winning this,cause he couldn't even spell 'before' correct in his biography**
weak
he's tryna park without feeding the meter first,pissed off cause tony green gave him a fever and it hurts
but givin credit,I'll say his crew's groundbreakin
.............................................cause it's the first one where the leader is the worst!!
tHIS WAS HARD damn!!!!!
i can tap you on your head and make you bleed,but fags like you retalliate by spreadin out they seeds
but at least your not in denial,cause even you know that tephlon's way ahead of your league
this was good but to me Stanza=Teph they both nice
flirting around with the monsieur in circles,snortin and snortin when you rap,a cross between urkel and merkel
cause tell me what straight emcee,that fucks girls,reps his crew,avatar,and font color with purple
LOL good one
stanza fails to breathe hot,like rejected pneumatics,he reps me in his sig,trust me,i never forget the fanatics
beggin for a record reset,cause he's ash-aimed,like snipers lookin to killin cigarette addictics
aight
he turned prey/pray like converted non-believers,so he ain't kiddin me with gray
making a thread about whackness but himself he four-gets,like 3 yr olds on the 365 day
good
this was a great verse i give it a 8.7/10(structure 4/10)cause of the ok punches and the great oiginality and creativity but your structure was horrible

Stanza

Yo

Im Bringin Nuttin But "Badluck" Into Yo Drops as if I Casted a Spell
And Crossin The Alphabets What The Only Time Youve Ever Excelled (x'ed l)
Nice!!!!
This Is a Punch for Punch battle Here Yet Noones Heard From You
They Say I Attack Like a "Pokemon" Because all i Do Is "Pic-At-chu"
played concept but i liked it
Your Shit Has No Kind Of flow control Like a Babies Ass Wit No Daiper
And You Shouldve Jus Left Your Pitty Ass Drops In That *Text Cypher*
some wont get this but this is true and funny LOL
This Is How It End With Me With The Win...Even Stevie Wouldve Saw
He Mad Bcuz He Was To Wack To Get In The Crew Battle Against RAW
Damn nice personal
8 Lines Done They Know Yove Been Sunned Like Bitchez On The Beach
Watch Me Knock The Flava Outta Ya Ass Like You Was Shittin Out Bleach
nice creativty
This Is It man Im Done With You and I Didnt Have To Crack a Joke
Spillin Crack in Yo Pocket Was The Only Time You Ever Drop Dope
aight finisher
This was a preety good job i liked the creativity and personals 8.7/10(structure 9/10)

if i had to vote it would be a tie but since ill decide to vote ill decide my vote on the structures cause the verses were both preety good but NK's structure was horrible

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

hmm......so a pikachu/pokemon line beats my shit?......RiGGGGGGGHT........w/e

Cant vote part crew
just checking da polls
ya kno

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