ok i cant in rob as hes in ma crew n ma homeboy but i will do dj bananz later 1

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Checking the polls..

..because I'm cool like that.

ok y jus about all ya votes gettin takin away.....

Voted For: -UNF-

UNF im not violent.. so dont take this personal when i say i might kill ho'z
and i would say that your skills are kosher.. but i think ur more into Dill Doe'

vs.

IP:


Look, I'll Put Yu Six-Deep And When The Clips-Reap And Have Ya Skull Bone Touchin-Maggots
Slaughter With Automatics, Topicals On Hetro Sex When On The Real You A Fuckin-Faggot*
I'll Put The Lead-In-Waist And Have It Rip Thru Ya Dome And Knock Ya Head-Off-Place
Go For LightWeight Belt, Cuz Like Failures In Weight Watchers U Couldnt 'Cut It Wit HeavyWeights**

v/ unf

not a decent battle really. both came pretty weak. i felt unf came more consistant. apos i fink u had one punch that stood out from the rest.

unf you could use some better concepts..

pz

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yo i woulda given this shit UNF definately...its easy as hell to see that he took it...yo UNF wen i git in a battle...rtf

Voted For: Apostrophe

Easy shit for Apos. Let me break down what lost it for you UNF.

You try to be too hardcore, that whole online thug thing is not appealing. Aswell as your multis which in battles do not really matter whatsoever. You need to work on your punches. and try to fix your structure up a little bit man, its not easy to read.

Apos- Decent punches.... and was EASY TO READ. A few decent punches in there but some of them weren't all too great. First bar was about the best and all you really needed to beat him.

Just work on your punches UNF.

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who is this herb?? ur rec's nice.. but watch him get spanked this time..
and i know your eagor to get the win.. but kid im not doctor frankenstein..
^^ok wordplay but could've been used better
UNF im not violent.. so dont take this personal when i say i might kill ho'z
and i would say that your skills are kosher.. but i think ur more into Dill Doe'
^^hehe, ok
i'll strap on my kicks.. and just put the steal toed boots to your back..
and you could have some construction shoes and still be toe tally wack..
^^attempted wordplay not really logical, nice try tho
F.uck Y.our I.ntelligence shit kid you know that we are next to none...
So BQ give me a holla back girl.. cause its no doubt i've already won..
^^nah, unless there's some personal I'm not getting

vs.


Look, I'll Put Yu Six-Deep And When The Clips-Reap And Have Ya Skull Bone Touchin-Maggots
Slaughter With Automatics, Topicals On Hetro Sex When On The Real You A Fuckin-Faggot*
^^ok, but not too original, nice flow tho
I'll Put The Lead-In-Waist And Have It Rip Thru Ya Dome And Knock Ya Head-Off-Place
Go For LightWeight Belt, Cuz Like Failures In Weight Watchers U Couldnt 'Cut It Wit HeavyWeights**
^^played, but ok, but don't explain punches! If they need explaining they're worded badly or not based on public info
Why Run... 10 Feet And Im Like Lucifer I'll Leave Ya Staminia-Wrecked Each Glock Goes Bam-Thru-Ya-Chest***
Believe Me Dude TheOnly A's I Wud Even Come Close To Feel' Rests On Top Of Ya Girls's-Chest****
^^heh, ok punch, but ya rhymed the same word = bad

.:: Finish It ::.
Readily Holdin The Glock-Bitch Ready To Pop-Triks Intendin To Stop-Kids
Dude Underestimated Me, He Turned A Blind Eye On This Battle Like I Cut Out His Optics
^^kinda stupid wordplay, no diss

if I could vote it'd be v/apostrophe
please check this:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205714

Voted For: Apostrophe

-UNF-

Decent verse...nothing special...You had some multies, but thats not what wins a battle...punches and personals are...Although you had punches, you kinda lacked in the personals category, and the punches you had weren't all that nice or creative.

Apostrophe:

Decent verse from you as well. You had decent punches, but some could've been worded better, or been a little more creative. Threw in some personals, they were pretty weak, but you did have them. Both need to up your vocab.

Overall, this wasnt that good of a battle. Both need to be more consistent with punches, but Wet Willy gets my vote.

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checkin polls..

Voted For: -UNF-

Look, I'll Put Yu Six-Deep And When The Clips-Reap And Have Ya Skull Bone Touchin-Maggots
Slaughter With Automatics, Topicals On Hetro Sex When On The Real You A Fuckin-Faggot*
^
Nice line, should have used a personal 6//10

I'll Put The Lead-In-Waist And Have It Rip Thru Ya Dome And Knock Ya Head-Off-Place
Go For LightWeight Belt, Cuz Like Failures In Weight Watchers U Couldnt 'Cut It Wit HeavyWeights**
^
played but still it woz funny lol so 7/10
Why Run... 10 Feet And Im Like Lucifer I'll Leave Ya Staminia-Wrecked Each Glock Goes Bam-Thru-Ya-Chest***
Believe Me Dude TheOnly A's I Wud Even Come Close To Feel' Rests On Top Of Ya Girls's-Chest****
^^
good punch connected well 7/10

Readily Holdin The Glock-Bitch Ready To Pop-Triks Intendin To Stop-Kids
Dude Underestimated Me, He Turned A Blind Eye On This Battle Like I Cut Out His Optics
^^good line dope wordplay n yeh its true i think he did underestimate you

aight verse sen betta but w/e good use of multis n personals n hard hittin punches got this for you good 1


who is this herb?? ur rec's nice.. but watch him get spanked this time..
and i know your eagor to get the win.. but kid im not doctor frankenstein..
^ aight erm played tho rec personals are played n not really a personal 4/10

UNF im not violent.. so dont take this personal when i say i might kill ho'z
and i would say that your skills are kosher.. but i think ur more into Dill Doe'
^rofl nice funny punch connected well 7/10



i'll strap on my kicks.. and just put the steal toed boots to your back..
and you could have some construction shoes and still be toe tally wack..
^you should have worded this better but ok punch 5/10

F.uck Y.our I.ntelligence shit kid you know that we are next to none...
So BQ give me a holla back girl.. cause its no doubt i've already won....
erm.....self glorifiiny n wtf is bq got to do wid any thing???

nice battle verse but ya went off at the end you jus seemed to wreck it but w/e good flow n a few nice multis but not ya best unf took this just

Voted For: -UNF-

I am liking this battle..but i gotta give this UNF..the battle...hes got some nice punches....not sure on the personals...the struc on both verses was off..all togheter nice battle..but i like unf..on this 1...wit the punches

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Voted For: -UNF-

Look, I'll Put Yu Six-Deep And When The Clips-Reap And Have Ya Skull Bone Touchin-Maggots
Slaughter With Automatics, Topicals On Hetro Sex When On The Real You A Fuckin-Faggot*
(Ok)
I'll Put The Lead-In-Waist And Have It Rip Thru Ya Dome And Knock Ya Head-Off-Place
Go For LightWeight Belt, Cuz Like Failures In Weight Watchers U Couldnt 'Cut It Wit HeavyWeights**
(Aiight)
Why Run... 10 Feet And Im Like Lucifer I'll Leave Ya Staminia-Wrecked Each Glock Goes Bam-Thru-Ya-Chest***
Believe Me Dude TheOnly A's I Wud Even Come Close To Feel' Rests On Top Of Ya Girls's-Chest****
(Nice personal)
.:: Finish It ::.
Readily Holdin The Glock-Bitch Ready To Pop-Triks Intendin To Stop-Kids
Dude Underestimated Me, He Turned A Blind Eye On This Battle Like I Cut Out His Optics
(OK)

vs.

who is this herb?? ur rec's nice.. but watch him get spanked this time..
and i know your eagor to get the win.. but kid im not doctor frankenstein..
(Ok)
UNF im not violent.. so dont take this personal when i say i might kill ho'z
and i would say that your skills are kosher.. but i think ur more into Dill Doe'
(LOL NICE)
i'll strap on my kicks.. and just put the steal toed boots to your back..
and you could have some construction shoes and still be toe tally wack..
(Decent)
F.uck Y.our I.ntelligence shit kid you know that we are next to none...
So BQ give me a holla back girl.. cause its no doubt i've already won....
(Self Glory...but decent)

UNF came harder....and Apostrophe....you got nice wordplay...but the punches are not really hard hitting...so good job you both...decent battle...

v/UNF

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Voted For: -UNF-

Better punches...but Apos...you got nice wording...now punch harder...you were makin statements..for harder punches and personals....

v/UNF

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