thanks man and yeah ill return the favor

uppin thisssssss

uppin this shitt

Voted For: *Antic*

though atleast 1 of Antic's personals was one hell of a stretch and an awful force... I think over all he had the harder hitting punches in this battle, coupled with a better structure and stronger flow...

Opener: Antic
Closer: D523 (I fucked with the audio line)
Punches: Antic
Personals: Antic
Creativity: Antic
Complexity: Antic
Vocab: Antic

Vote: Antic

Though it doesn't look like it from my breakdwon I think this is the closest battle I've seen Antic in at this site yet

for the love of everything holy.............vote..................post a link and I'll RTF.....................

This was feedback posted for *Antic*
 

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=216873
first of all return the fav on my battle
i think u got him knock him out the box rtf

how about we get some votes up in hea

Voted For: *Antic*

Like comics and jokes his name is funny but his 'material's not'...
D523? I'll "bar" and code his name on tha side of a 'cereal box'//

Like unexplained votes ya can't "count" his numbers or 'letters'...
His style like rotten flesh fallin' off cuz my bars fuckin' this 'lepper'//

I'm 'certain it's fact' my style a slave driver fuckin' 'workin' this fag'...
His style's a book and I'm Hitler cuz of the way I'm 'burnin' this cat'//

Vs

It’s like the amazing race dawg, and it’s impossible to Pass me
I’ll leave you in the past, instead of antic, people be callin u antique
It’s like we was back in school, when I bulled him and took his lunch
But now he takes the batman approach, you know, “Wack” “Punch”

V/antic......came wit more quotables...an had a more consistent verse that had some decent concepts.....RTF in the sig

Voted For: D523

..Audio is pronounced Odd-e-oh, not Out of yo....forced.

Get that shit out of here now...it was a mistake. BTW, weak ass battle.

Voted For: *Antic*

antic u one this battle u had better rymes and flow
d5 u rymes we ok but not as good but ok structure
antic i dont hate u man
u either d5

rtf
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