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Voted For: Stanza

Wow, kinda sad that Stanza beat you with half of the lines.

Stanza- Aight this verse really wasn't that good, but you actually threw punches and didn't just self glorify. Work on putting in personals in your verses because just punches can be bitten and aren't as effective. Wordplay was ok, but don't use " ". Overall, work on personals.

Big- Aight, you have some pretty funny punchlines, but the prob is that they were more lines then punch. You were somewhat witty, but you self glorified a lot and also you just stated, you didn't punch. Work on more original stuff as well. Mase is played, never knew Ashanti had sideburns though.

"Stanza is too long let it be cut down to lines
It's not hard to find the purple dinosaur now a days"
^^Sometin like that, don't just state the personal or whatever. See how I just played off his name and colors? I didn't just say it. You have potential, but you need to get some help.

v-Stanza

yeah....the only problem with that bar^^^ is that its fuckin wack and played out so why would i say that lol??. i hope u dont really spit like that in battles..uppin for votes

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Voted For: Stanza

ight weak battle ny both ive seen better from u stanza....

stanza: ok here is how it goes... u stayed consistant throughout the verse man u had some good punches and some weaker punches never the less u kinda stayed on track... style switch at the end was good added a nice effect to it... wordplay was good thats bout it just try to thuink of better concepts for your punches

bog city: ight man sorry but i felt that quite alot of your lines were played man... like stanza think of some deceont concepts and fix up your structure and you'll be alot better ight man.....

not alot i can say in this but both of ya need to elevate but keep battling you'll get better within time...

v/ stanza for having harder punches and staying consistant throughout the battle and having better structure...

no hate... pzzz

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Voted For: Stanza

stanza, you should just retire, but don't copy Mase
or you'll get ya " sideburned" like Ashanti's face
thats not a punch....

you appealin to none, stop talking, start concealin ya tongue
cuz ya chances of winnin are about a million to one
ok..

ya feelin me son, ..im poppin hate in my jams
treat u a ya crew like Jews, and "concentrate on ya camp"
ok...

im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit
no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch
decent word-play.......

how u gon put me up against this punk phony Stanza
im about to show him "whose the boss" like i was Tony danza
nah played as hell.......

you small prick, how could a clique wit all dicks
be SO DAMN PUSSEY, did u get ya balls ripped?
nope nope!!!!!..........

aww shit, dont try and star, you'll get maligned and scarred
he cou'ldnt get an explosive verse, wit C-4 in ya lines and bars
ok...

u at a loss for words? thank god!, did ya verbals desert you?
niggas' will b askin "Where you at?" like a boost mobile commercial......its nothin dog
ok ending....

1st off u went ova the bar limit which hurts u it aint help, then ya punches wasnt that hard hitting or celever, u need more focus, and follow rules... it was decent but need more RAWNESS ADDED WORD...




IP:


You Think You Gonna Be the One To Put A Lost On My Wins
You So Soft Id Bring My Knife & Kill You With The Plastic End
kinda raw decent...

No Ducking..Rush-Me? Even though a Loss To U Wont Hurt
Cuz U known to be a "Fucking-Pussy" like "Prositute at Work"
ha i like it...

Big City Must be*Dead Crap*Bcuz Im Known to *RIP shit*
BC battle on Phones so match Numbers & Letters & Call Quits
nice word-play N hit... took a sec to get it.....

you must "Lust-For-Death" I'm "Dusting-Ya-Rep Hold-It-Son
U Know I Won Facin' me is like "Russian-Roulette"..............
ok ending could of went harder...

but u had decent punches that connected and u follow the rules so im gonna ovte on just the 8 lines that soopuse to be there and stanza took this one sorry if stanza would of match ya line by line he got this in the bag nice battle fellas and focus more ya next time....
With *fully Loaded-Guns*

Done You Betta Not Duck This time