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This was feedback posted for Big City
 

Big city had. one of the best verses i read. this is only feedback because i aint got 200 post yet. stanza yo verse was cool but lacked in alot of areas. no multis or puches that made me laugh as hard as big city's did.

thanks for the honest feedback ..............................

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Voted For: Stanza

Wow, kinda sad that Stanza beat you with half of the lines.

Stanza- Aight this verse really wasn't that good, but you actually threw punches and didn't just self glorify. Work on putting in personals in your verses because just punches can be bitten and aren't as effective. Wordplay was ok, but don't use " ". Overall, work on personals.

Big- Aight, you have some pretty funny punchlines, but the prob is that they were more lines then punch. You were somewhat witty, but you self glorified a lot and also you just stated, you didn't punch. Work on more original stuff as well. Mase is played, never knew Ashanti had sideburns though.

"Stanza is too long let it be cut down to lines
It's not hard to find the purple dinosaur now a days"
^^Sometin like that, don't just state the personal or whatever. See how I just played off his name and colors? I didn't just say it. You have potential, but you need to get some help.

v-Stanza

yeah....the only problem with that bar^^^ is that its fuckin wack and played out so why would i say that lol??. i hope u dont really spit like that in battles..uppin for votes

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Voted For: Stanza

ight weak battle ny both ive seen better from u stanza....

stanza: ok here is how it goes... u stayed consistant throughout the verse man u had some good punches and some weaker punches never the less u kinda stayed on track... style switch at the end was good added a nice effect to it... wordplay was good thats bout it just try to thuink of better concepts for your punches

bog city: ight man sorry but i felt that quite alot of your lines were played man... like stanza think of some deceont concepts and fix up your structure and you'll be alot better ight man.....

not alot i can say in this but both of ya need to elevate but keep battling you'll get better within time...

v/ stanza for having harder punches and staying consistant throughout the battle and having better structure...

no hate... pzzz

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