Black Queen vs K-Trin
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Loser gives up all thier posts
No votes by July 30th person wit the most votes win

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-13-05 at 02:06 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-13-05 01:06 PM.

K-Trin has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-13-05 01:15 PM.

Black Queen and cheddar's a myth,like stories about the moon
And this battle was neva tided/tied,liked the ocean at noon
Shaving her pussy is the only time a day she gets a raze/raise
Trappin her d/r's in a net is how she gets a catch phrase/praise
But somehow,her crew whack ass crew of fags stay the most wet
And I swear,she must be a bad model
.................................................. .....way she fails to 'pose' a threat!!!!!

You makin thread about you wantin to rape me i had to laugh a bit
So next time, why don't u actually love a girl who WANTS to have ur kid
Brought it back to the movies? ima “run-in shit” like Forrest Gump did,
K-Trini kinda like Lieutenant Dan, we know he aint throwin punches
So saiyonara, adidos, goodbye, chow ,basically its ur end ya bitch
I see thru this hoe too, and just like this closer.........it's endescript

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Voted For: Black Queen

You both suck but black queen sucks just a little bit less

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^^stop votin in my battles.I know ya Pacino/Predator...or wateva new name he made,So fuck off.That vote gettin removed.

Sayin we both suk?Please.I bet ur rhyme book got not one punch of this caliber.This is for the big-fish.So you stay out.

Black Queen.....ya shoulda put 100 posts to vote.

Once one of my battles close....expect a callout from me Juggler.

uppin............................................. ...

Voted For: Black Queen

Wordplay: Black Queen
Punchlines: Tie
Overall Flow Black Queen

You makin thread about you wantin to rape me i had to laugh a bit
So next time, why don't u actually love a girl who WANTS to have ur kid
---- Great way to open

>K-Trini was dissin Cheddar. You're battling Black Queen bro.

^^Omg....another newb......that is a hate vote.Why ya even bother droppin a vote?You walk around the whole forum callin me a cheater and think ya droppin a vote.Fuck off.Once strobe sees it....it gettin removed.

and cheddar is money you retard.U call urself a rapper without even knowing that?

she got u bro............................................

omg dis battle neva gettin closed uppin...........

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Voted For: K-Trin

checkin polls....................

Dude K-trin acts like a prick in forums.But he got some wordplay......

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^^ooh shit....my fault.....I'll report it.........

Voted For: Black Queen

this battle goes to black queen...
she obviously had better personals... trini didnt even have any
her punches were funny... the first and second bar were hilarious!!! trini's punches were a very very bad stab at wordplay... i mean, just because two words start wit tha same letter doesnt mean you can make wordplay out of them...like "tided/tied"<< wtf???
BQ got this one easily...nothing in trini's verse was any good... it was all just played concepts... like tha pose a threat line... anyway
V/ BQ
RTF here...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=198898

This was feedback posted for Black Queen
 

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