Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-11-05 at 06:33 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

EC Stunna has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-09-05 08:22 AM.

DC, I hope ya prepared to be killed by my verbal attack//
My rhymes are HIGH over ya head, like they on crack//
Ya name's DoContinue- please, DoContinue to be wack//
Yeah, this fire I'm spittin's too much for you to handle//
The way you destroy rap, I should call you a vandal//
This verse as hot as a bonfire, you're hardly a candle//
So you'd easily be extinguished by a few drops of rain//
And my rap's a hurricane, so you're battling in vain//
In the world of hip-hop, you only amount to a stain//
I bring lyrical detergent, to wash you out the game//

DoContinue has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-11-05 06:10 PM.

i'll mix this pina colada, i got this bitch shocked, he's scary
it's this fruits' first battle, so its time to pop the cherry
its easy to send this fool runnin, he neva battled so why start me?
i'd tell him to pack his bags for the road trip but he's still new to RV
im a big tymer while this dude is only a dumb runner
i'll baby this man just to call myself the number one stunna
time to roast, be a baker, try to ice this fool and shut this cake up
and fucka a stun, i'll leave you paralyzed from the waist up
tha east coast hold thunder? i wont roll under, you neva stoppin mine...
one spot in RV's best for tha stone cold stunner.... AND THATS THE BOTTOM LINE!

i dunno what the fuck the other dude was doing but u took dis one hey maybe we can get a battle goin'

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Leader: Tha Reason

Voted For: EC Stunna

lol . . . alright . . . now i got explain this :

battle was pretty close i guess . . .

wordplay, puches, personals etc ---DoCOntinue
fav line:
i'd tell him to pack his bags for the road trip but he's still new to RV (and i bet 20 bucks somone is gonna be like what word play--- RV also stands for Recreational Vehicle-- u take them on long trips)
Closer and Opener-- Hands down Stunna

I think those were the two major up points of the battle-- some work needs to be done tho . . . Stunna gets my vote cause he close it out better last impression is a lasting impression . . . desent drop by both . . up ur game tho both of u

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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff

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and ur laughing because u know i whipped ur ass??

yo kid that was really really wack ....lmfao i dont know how you came up wit that wack shit

Voted For: DoContinue

Yeah DoContinue won in every aspect of this..EC, you sorta got the right idea, but on a real n00bish level.. Remember with text to always set it up in sets of two lines which have the same rhyme at the end, and possably more rhymes in the middle. But dont just tell him your verse is hot, you need to be using proper diss concepts and making sure that your fucking with this guys emotions.. Also dont ever use the // at the end of lines, thats played out like whoa years ago. Just keep it real straight up punches.

Do continue, you know what ya doing.. Should try and come harder on the punches but you didnt really need it here. Easy vote. Peace.

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out of curiosity, who beat the system in a text batte?