E.c vs Adrenaline
Battle Rules:
10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-27-05 at 03:34 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
Adrenaline has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-27-05 03:07 PM.
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I got 15 minutes...
chek i'll murk u before u even begin to rhyme,u faggit i'll have the people sayin one more time/ Im like tupac cuz the greatest is in check,if u were biggie u still wouldn't see life after death/ I aint even gotta use personals to diss,or horribly dismiss,ur the only one going to the abyss/ I know ur a bitch as a matter of fact we all do,I saw ur raps and u rhyme like fuckin caillou/ kid ur really retarded if u ask me...what kind of name is EC?/ winnin u will be easy even the peeps see,if u cant win me then let the beef be/ I only gotta spit 5 bars just to merk u,ur old like 2-weeks tofu/ im givin u a driveby and it's already started,so stop b4 I leave u retarded// |
E.C has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-27-05 03:20 PM.
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uppin...if he shows!!
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you no-showed the first time i dont no why you even try,
its such a shame to see your illmatic lyrics at at short supply, you aint no unkown legend wel... you got the first word right, it's like, how come adrenaline dies everytime he fights, take you back to school, give you a better education, becuz your unemployed, and suffer from premature ejaculation, ill terrorise you across the nation, a 17 year old homo-sexual bitch, i got an arm full of tricks, for this faggot who got an arse full of dicks, two more lines to hit you hard, i suppose you'll be coming weak, your inilliterate saying you got a bird... well u got one with a beak... explanations... *in our first battle he no showed * he is unemployed hense the school and education *he is 17 years old * in his sig it says illmatic lyrics *in his sig it says unknown legend *a bird in english is a girl but he takes it as a bird with a beak hope you like... |
uppin...15chars
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u have a problem wit rhyming your bars need to rhyme not just 1 line
upiinnnnnnn |
actually ur completely wrong...I only rhymed like that cuz I was under pressure..im not use to 15 minutes...chek my battles my bars rhyme!!
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i think that was prewritten... 5 minuts to do that and you couldnt post a battle in 15... hmmmmmmmmmm or was that your verse from before
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Voted For: E.C
punches-EC persnals-EC struck---EC metals---None vocab---EC open:EC close:Tie multis:None both was kind of weak but EC took this way easy..... |
ight mayne thnx for vote.... uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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u don't know how wrong u are...Im obviously way better at rhyming than this battle...im still gettin better at freestyling but if that was a pre-written it would sound nuthing like that...those didn't have multies or anything...hahaa that's not me... |
i think you are going to lose again... then it will be 1-7 lol
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This was feedback posted for E.C
just check'in polls for C.S re-views...............
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Voted For: E.C
i like ur shit mayne, nice vocab iight structure better punches, adrenaline not enough vocab and punches were weak and very poor structure....my vote is for e.c. please return tha favor mayne |
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adrenaline imma give u some feedback yeh.. only battle if u are sure you have a chance of winning |
told ^^get on im and change ur sig to 2-0............
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Voted For: E.C
E.C took this battle for creativity... sorta with the personals. His punches were also better because they flo'd better. the biggie line was adrenaline's only good line to me. e.c's verse had a nice flo with better punches and some personals. this one goes to e.c return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174830 me vs. Mafia http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173417 me vs. os1ris http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174024 me vs. Intensify Effect http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171308 me vs. nightmare |
Voted For: E.C
Adrenaline take off the /s at the end of ur lines.. its mad newbish.. structure is pretty bad.. all of ur lines are stretched.. flow fell off due to the stretchness.. u had good multis.. wordplay was mad weak.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals.. E.C. dont explain all of ur punches.. its mad newbish.. structure is good.. flow is on target.. u had a few multis.. wordplay wasnt very good.. it was attempted though.. a few, at best of ur punches connected.. most of them were played though.. u attempted a personal.. Overall Adrenaline had more multis.. E.C. had the better structure.. the better flow.. better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and an attempted personal.. so basing off of that.. E.C. gets my vote.. VOTE - E.C. |
Voted For: E.C
EC Won This One.Adrenaline Started Off Strong But Got Weaker Thru The Rest Of His Verse.EC's Verse Stayed Strong Thru The Verse.He Dind Have Too Many Strong Punches But He Did Have Some Solid Personals. |
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