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Chinese Food----------!
Chinese Food Lol I was just eating some the other night and… I don’t know…haha just check it… Just imagine, through all the noodle slurps and Kung Pao burps… Those Dumpling squirts til your stomach stretches and hurts… The Succulent taste of that Peking pork held in that plastic spork… Chicken Fried Rice on that fork, Better than Steaks from New York… That Sweet & Sour pork, leaving your shirts with nasty stains… That’s not what’s on your brain, Orange Chicken coming in the main… Next the Chow Mien, But don’t forget that soothing green tea… Washing out those green peas, carrots and Chicken Teriyaki… That kind by Mr.Miyagi, Found in China Town with Fried Calamari… Has to be cooked, won’t eat that shit raw like Caviar Rolled-Sushi… How bout that Rice Bowl for 3.49, With Soy Sauce that’s Divine… Best Friend askin for some of mine, better go recycle for 35 dimes… Some of that Spicy Chicken, that’ll leave you Finger Licken… Second course is on its way & comin, get ready for pot-sticken… With Asian waiters always serving, fresh fish from the reef… C’mon this stuff will even make SPuL eat Broccoli and Beef… Its like a plague on my Stomach, yet a Shakespeare in my mouth… Like the Bible, this Stuffs heaven up top, but disastrous down South… |
Washing out those green peas, carrots and Chicken Teriyaki…
That kind by Mr.Miyagi, Found in China Town with Fried Calamari… ^^^ LOL, Nice bar Its like a plague on my Stomach, yet a Shakespeare in my mouth… Like the Bible, this Stuffs heaven up top, but disastrous down South… ^^^ LMAO, The closer KILLED IT This is by far the CRAZIEST Peice ta ever be dropped on RV, Its...DIFFRENT A Whole verse on the wonders of chinese food, GOTTA LUV IT Very creative sic, 10/10, AWARD FOR THE O.M OF THE MONTH GOES TOO CLASS.SIC, Nobody can fuck with this lol Humour, creativity, multies, an ALL ABOUT CHINESE FOOD, I Love it hahaha! |
nice i love chinese food.i just never knew anyone
passionate enough to write a damn verse on it but wat you said was all fact |
lol.........thanks for the feedback fam...uppin for more..
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Its like a plague on my Stomach, yet a Shakespeare in my mouth…
Like the Bible, this Stuffs heaven up top, but disastrous down South… ^Oh so true! Loved the concept 'cause I'm practically addicted to Chinese food so nice to see someone write piece about it (was about time!). Vocab was hot, you used the right terms and everything...Was feeling your flow which was improved by multis you were using. Like the tempo of your piece, kept me focussed throughout the entire thing and now I'm in the mood for some Chinese thanks to you. Good creative thinking and nice to read for a change... Delicious drop...(damn, I gotta get Chinese tonight!) DQ |
nice shit dude. pc out
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can i get somemore feed/critique plz....
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wasn't there a crew called Class sic, man?
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way back when........
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way back when...
but yea, u r stupid for this 1!!! lmao...i am hella hungry now :laugh2: good shit mayne, nice multis and wordplay and vocab u half aziin bastard!...lmao...fuck im really am hungry :laugh2: 10-10 hands down Quote:
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uppin 4 feedback............................
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opps......................
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uppin for feedback yo....maybe a nomination...:smile:
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dis is dope as hell...now im hungry too...creative...like tha whole flow to everything...if there is an award for crazy OM's u won it...if there is an award for deep OM's i won it...*self glorification*...lmao through tha whole thang...peep my OM...click tha second link...its tha deepest piece on RV like dis is da craziest piece on RV...stay up fam...~1~
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hold on...i was just about to go to your new open mic, but its about your son? how old are you?
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im 15...he 8 months...my lil nigga sick as hell wit tha flu right now...but peep dat shit homie
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aiight fa sho....ill leave feed back so dont trip...:thumbup:
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iight.....................
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uppin...wont be uppin this much longer...
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i have to see you get an A+ for creativity and effort...but this piece disapointed me...not because it wasn't good..but because it was so hyped up...i heard from everyone and there mothers that this was so funny....and everything else.and it wasn't that funny...it was just about chinese food..nothins funny about food...the last bar was humerous..but not clever enough for me to call it funny....this wasn't bad...just not what i expected at all..stay up tho
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haha really? everybodys talkin about it?...ha...but um yeh thanks for the feed...maybe you woulda thought more of it if it wasnt so hyped ya feel...pz
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nah..like i said..i don't think it was bad...the hype doesn't make it worse..it's just a dissapointment...the piece itself didn't disapoint me..the fact that peoiple hyped it up disapoints me...btw...check some of my OM's...like.....100 years from now..love letter...reincarnation..any of those
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pretty good i have to say but the flow was what kinda fell off in my point of veiw or im usto my type of flow but the stucture is great the imagery is fuckin GOOD the creativty in some of that shit was un thinkable for me not to much vocab but this is chiese food your talkin about haha, but yo the story was good just on topical well, i was feeling this
rtf on my one with prilifik links in the sig ight, pz |
This was awsome, it was funny as hell lmfao. Props to you on this.
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aiight ill rtf when i get a chance...but for the time being...uppin..
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nice shit good creative azz shit
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haha thnx fam...hot open mic comin soon.....uppin..
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wow...interesting...definetly different and creative so you get points for that...it was actually good too...good ish man, keep at it kyd...check my drop "Picture Perfect" that I'm about to post...
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ok feedback is gettin smaller and smaller...so can we get a lil more feedback....uppin!1
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blah, didnt likt the title, but the shit was aight tho
nuttin much here tho...7/10 |
last 4 lines were the best, i think, thats fuckin mint though, i was feelin that, haha, had some chinese yesterday actually, nice drop class, it was sic
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I liked it...and people are talkin bout it so I figured why not chek it out...it was creative definately and it was different..I think it was in a way funny but I wasn't laughing..but I see how it could be...anyway it's aiight 7/10.
return the favour yo...\/ heat of the moment- adrenaline and d-bagz NOK x-clusive... |
yo that has got to be the funniest open mic i have read so far. You've captured the feelin of chinese food so well. yo man how come you didn't mention sweet n sour chicken balls.lol.man i'm hurt...
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Yo That Shyt Was Crazy ....i Cant Believe What I Just Read...i Gota Read It Again To Make Sure My Eyes Are Seeing Right....chinese Food!!!!.....your Fucken Genius...10/10 Bro...omg I Cant Believe That Shyt....keep It Comen `~1~
Oh And That Last Bar Killed It .....2 Thumbs Up |
lol...thanks i guess....but anyways....uppin this old ass ish..
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funny...lol..............did this end up wiinnnnin the award?
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this shit made me so fuckin hungry creative drop fam ~1ne~
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