RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > Fresh From The Lab > Textual Releases
Reload this Page Tha Heat of tha Moment (Adrenaline & Doe Bagz)...NOK x-clusive!
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
Page 1 of 2 1 2 >
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 03-01-05, 12:58 PM   #1
Ma$fit
Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
 
Ma$fit's Avatar
 
Posts: 1
Joined: Jan 2005
From: DETROIT IN DIS BITCH!!!
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-1
Tha Heat of tha Moment (Adrenaline & Doe Bagz)...NOK x-clusive!
IP: EAE8 4AFC

*outside of tha bank*
d.bagz: ayo adren
adren: whats up?
d.bagz: im ready for dis shit
adren: oh now u ready?
d.bagz: hell yeah fam..u got me right?
adren: no doubt homie..hold it down
d.bagz: duh!..u know tha deal cuzzo..im goin in first
*d.bagz walks into the bank, takes out guns...time freezes...*

[verse 1: Doe Bagz]
nigga i'll blast my way through anythang..
see my tec-9 up close and personal like a nasty bitch da sings
makin shit pop off for no reason, it aint no thang..
talk shit back and its gone be some metal pieces to ya brain
i got my crew witta nigga, we da new rapverse..
next generation is dis bitch, yeah its flows we disperse
see a bitch and i shoot her first..
have a hoe thinkin bout a nigga when she through dat do
they say my ryhmes too clever cuz im hot in da streets..
gotta a bunch cock swabbin niggaz comin after me G
like BLACK, he was a cool nigga, he rolled wit me..
got demoted and changed his name now he all against me?
whatz ya real motive nigga, please let me know..
cuz last i heard u was real excited when u got in my show
and dont try to lie bout da fact dat u a fan my man..
cuz everytime i drop a verse dis nigga is after me like da klu-klux-klan

[hook]
(in the heat of the moment) bitch niggaz actin tuff but dey lame
(in the heat of the moment) point blanc- we put da gat to ya brain
(in the heat of the moment) Mc's back down if dey aint got no game
In the heat of the moment that's when u die,u no longer remain
Doe Bagz;Adrenaline, we just Nok Out Kingz man...
{repeat 2x}

[bridge: a voice sings...]
when it comes to the time to prove yourself
you lose ur strength and you got nothin else
it could all be lost but only time truly knows it
it's all up to you in the heat of the moment
cuz it's all up to you in the heat of the moment

[verse 2: Adrenaline]
*walks in..cracks knuckles..unloads*
In the heat of the moment aint nobody stoppin me,explode da mic and rock a beat
Im a knockout King(yaa boy!)so fuck a gat u know my punchlines pack some heat(ya nigga!)
rhymes like a tek and my mind's like a trigger
use a HK on a nigga just to write my signature
I make brains malfunction quick like old computer systems
when I be spittin sick like a virus killin intruder victims
If a nigga wanted beef then im sorry I missed him
cuz I keep rockin rhymes that kills distilled rhythms(haha)
dont mess wit da NOK or u'll surely find ur life at steak
I crack spines like kit kat so niggaz learn to take a break
dey fake,cuz when it comes to that played shit they make
we clown y'all niggaz and spice u up like shake and bake(what?)
hot shit dat am givin u, I shatter skulls at da climax
my rhymes rearrange and change more insides than midas
we ridaz cuz in the heat of the moment we just grind tracks
and fine tax on any bitch nigga who want his life back(haha)
mothafuckaaaz!!

[hook]
(in the heat of the moment) bitch niggaz actin tuff but dey lame
(in the heat of the moment) point blanc- we put da gat to ya brain
(in the heat of the moment) Mc's back down if dey aint got no game
In the heat of the moment that's when u die,u no longer remain
Doe Bagz;Adrenaline, we just Nok Out Kingz man.....*fades out*
{repeat 2x}

*shells hit tha ground..time thaws out..police neva find a suspect..but they blame it all on 50 Cent..lmao*
[whateva beat u thinkin of, now fades...]
__________________

Ma$fit
Send a message via AIM to Ma$fit   Reply With Quote
Old 03-01-05, 01:31 PM   #2
Adrenaline
unknown legend...
 
Adrenaline's Avatar
 
Posts: 889
Joined: Oct 2004
From: Tdot
Status: Offline
Text Record: 7-13
IP: 0F40 8178

yo DOE...that's fuckin hot maan....NOK REPPIN ay y'all uppin dis shit...u know the business...
__________________
Unknown Legend...
  Reply With Quote
Old 03-01-05, 04:01 PM   #3
Adrenaline
unknown legend...
 
Adrenaline's Avatar
 
Posts: 889
Joined: Oct 2004
From: Tdot
Status: Offline
Text Record: 7-13
IP: 0F40 8178

put dis back on top.....y'all vote on dis rite now..................
__________________
Unknown Legend...
  Reply With Quote
Old 03-01-05, 04:01 PM   #4
Ma$fit
Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
 
Ma$fit's Avatar
 
Posts: 1
Joined: Jan 2005
From: DETROIT IN DIS BITCH!!!
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-1
IP: EAE8 4AFC

hell yeah...had to change it a bit adren...uppin dis shit!!!
-Doe Bagz
__________________

Ma$fit
Send a message via AIM to Ma$fit   Reply With Quote
Old 03-01-05, 04:33 PM   #5
PrahJect
Champion
 
PrahJect's Avatar
 
Posts: 3,044
Joined: Feb 2005
From: BedStuy
Status: Offline
IP: 92E6 7769

yall dis was gd, gd lines and hot verses holla at me return the favour:

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1994128
__________________
www.soundclick.com/dollaback
Send a message via AIM to PrahJect Send a message via MSN to PrahJect   Reply With Quote
Old 03-01-05, 04:39 PM   #6
**GHOSTE**
Lyrics + Crunk = GHOSTE
 
**GHOSTE**'s Avatar
 
Posts: 601
Joined: Feb 2005
Status: Offline
Text Record: 4-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 55A9 982B

good shit here...nice verses both...8/10
Send a message via AIM to **GHOSTE**   Reply With Quote
Old 03-01-05, 06:44 PM   #7
Dirty Nigga
E-Style, Bitch.
 
Posts: 6,728
Joined: Aug 2004
Status: Offline
Text Record: 33-18
IP: ECB3 36A0

pretty dope shit, solid verses an the hook was a'right too, reppin the famlay, shit was decent as hell, 7.5/10...keep 'em comin' y'all
__________________

People Hate What They Can't Conquer
Send a message via MSN to Dirty Nigga   Reply With Quote
Old 03-01-05, 07:58 PM   #8
Ma$fit
Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
 
Ma$fit's Avatar
 
Posts: 1
Joined: Jan 2005
From: DETROIT IN DIS BITCH!!!
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-1
IP: B6F3 F93A

thanx yall...uppin
-Doe Bagz
__________________

Ma$fit
Send a message via AIM to Ma$fit   Reply With Quote
Old 03-02-05, 11:30 AM   #9
Adrenaline
unknown legend...
 
Adrenaline's Avatar
 
Posts: 889
Joined: Oct 2004
From: Tdot
Status: Offline
Text Record: 7-13
IP: 928B 1485

put dis back on top man....upppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.. .i want like 5 pages on dis...

--NOK
__________________
Unknown Legend...
  Reply With Quote
Old 03-02-05, 01:14 PM   #10
Adrenaline
unknown legend...
 
Adrenaline's Avatar
 
Posts: 889
Joined: Oct 2004
From: Tdot
Status: Offline
Text Record: 7-13
IP: 0F40 8178

put dis back on top y'all............................................. .............
__________________
Unknown Legend...
  Reply With Quote
Old 03-02-05, 01:32 PM   #11
Germ
in your system
 
Posts: 7,619
Joined: Jan 2005
From: Adanac
Status: Offline
Graphics Record: 1-0
IP: 9E2F CDE8

^not bad of verse, liked the chorus and shit, first verse, flow was a little bad, but lyrics and vocab were, i think that the poor stucture/flow took away alot of the effect thou, just up that shit....second verse, i liked that one...creative and had better flow which was nice to read, and picked up the pace of the drop a little more, but still, in some places....wordplay coulda been better.....7/10
__________________



this world is a drug, and everyone's selfish



FLY FREE
Send a message via AIM to Germ Send a message via MSN to Germ   Reply With Quote
Old 03-02-05, 03:13 PM   #12
Adrenaline
unknown legend...
 
Adrenaline's Avatar
 
Posts: 889
Joined: Oct 2004
From: Tdot
Status: Offline
Text Record: 7-13
IP: 928B 1485

thanks yo...^^see dats wat am talkin bout...honest feed.....put dis back on top............................
__________________
Unknown Legend...
  Reply With Quote
Old 03-02-05, 04:20 PM   #13
Adrenaline
unknown legend...
 
Adrenaline's Avatar
 
Posts: 889
Joined: Oct 2004
From: Tdot
Status: Offline
Text Record: 7-13
IP: 0F40 8178

return the favour when I give my input u damn people...........back to the top......forever uppin.....
__________________
Unknown Legend...
  Reply With Quote
Old 03-02-05, 05:00 PM   #14
Thrill_Kill
New to RV
 
Thrill_Kill's Avatar
 
Posts: 16
Joined: Mar 2005
From: Cherokee County, OK
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-0
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 12D9 403E

pretty good shit man, record it, get yo' self paid
__________________
Laugh if you will, it's alright I can deal,
cause when it's all said and done,
last man standing is always Thrill_Kill

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179770
  Reply With Quote
Old 03-02-05, 07:54 PM   #15
Ma$fit
Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
 
Ma$fit's Avatar
 
Posts: 1
Joined: Jan 2005
From: DETROIT IN DIS BITCH!!!
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-1
IP: 64E4 848D

^^^yeah...maybe, lmao
-DB
__________________

Ma$fit
Send a message via AIM to Ma$fit   Reply With Quote
Reply
Page 1 of 2 1 2 >

« Previous Thread | Next Thread »

Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes
Linear Mode Linear Mode

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 11:20 PM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.