"M.A.S. Anthem"- M.A.S. Word, peep this shit!!!! :cool:
 

aiight, me, Tizz, and Decree doin' this shit. first M.A.S. single, yo. word.... it's on Decree's SC cuz the M.A.S. SC waitin' for activation. :cool:


Intro: SPuL
First verse: SPuL
Second verse: Tizzle
Third verse: Decree
Hook: SPuL
Outro: SPuL
Beat: "Still D.R.E" by Dr. Dre ft. Snoop Dog

Song Link (CLICK!!!)

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Link 2

1st verse = good

2nd verse...not bad...vocals too damn arrrrrrrg loud I think
(work on flow)

3rd...decree sounds like ur talking...but ur lyrics are fine


pretty decent track dawg



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aiight thanks for feed.....

Q's always gotta hate lmao its funny cause people say i never sound like im talkin anyways...=1=

opener all ur yea its spul sounds the same lol
flow i think ur flow has improved alot lol alot of funny lines dope lines ur emotion has gotten alot better too
hook tight catchy
tizzle same for u alot of improvement from the last song of urs ive heard ur flow is on in this song u had no emotion on ur last song but i was feeling it on this one nice voice i like it tight
decrre u had the nicest lyrics i dont think u sound like ur talking dont no where that came from the only thing i think u could work on is emotion
but overall the best song ive heard from tizzle and spul and ive never heard any of decrees so prop to all of u i look forward to the cd

damn!, tizzle sounded wierd this track compared to me and his collab just like wierd ya know spul you did ya thing man, nice shit from you good flow nice hook, good job, tizzle idk you just seemed like you came weak this time, idk and decree shit hes not bad i havent really listened to much of his work but hes not bad, good flow emotion is decent yall put together a decent track yo,

keep it up 1

^^foo :shoot:

but weerd, thanx for feed

aah shit, hahha lmao @ the Blay line tizz :shoot:

i thought this was pretty decent for a first group track
i think ive heard all of u spit better, but shit was reppin OK and MAS 2 death :shoot:

Oh this was pretty good.

I'ma crit everyone indivisually.

Spul: your flow was consistant. As was the rest of the group. But
your flow was faster. No one wonder you need high tempo beats.
Your lines were funny. Like the fuckin your hand thing. Good shit I like.

Ltizzle: Oh worD I've seen the lyrics from this alot so I was rappin along to it. :cool:
Flow was slower the spul and decree's but u did it well. Like me :) Only thing
I see wrong you did was how you got delivery is in reverse. You start off loud and end average toned. Where u spose to start average and end loud Lol But I got used to it, but change that and you set.

Decree:
You little fucker. Your lyrics were ill. You tryna be like fab.(I'm nas now then fag)
Your flow was good too. But yeah decree you garbage like brendas baby. :)

Nice anthem. I still own all of you thoug. OK!!

listening:

Verse 1: nice, delivery's pretty nice.. and you go really good with the beat.. your verse is pretty smooth..

verse2: hahahah wow 2nd time i heard you rap.. and you got alot better than when you were before man.. much props lol.. you got alot better.. like seriously hahaha.. verse is good.. smooth verse.. n flow is good...but up your delivery..

chorus: its pretty cool

Verse 3: nice lyrics.. flow is good.. only a lil off jst a lil.. but try to show more emotion in the verse... and up your delivery a lil..

chorus

overal: its pretty tite... but u always use mainstream beats lol.. try using underground beats haha.. but pretty tite..

man, the only nice verse to me was Spul's.
his verse was decent, I usually dont like Spul's style, but in this song, he was kinda cool.
Tizzle
omfg
when you started rappin it scared the SHIT OUT OF ME.
Thats how horrible ya quality was.
because Spul's shit was all normal sounding, and then you like 'IM TIZZLE AND MY VOCALS ARE LOUD AND UNTAMED!!"
Decree, sorry, but you sound EXTREMELY white. Ya voice just wasnt appealing to me.
the chorus was aiigh, could've been more catchy.
but over all, the song is a tad below average.
the only thing thats stoppin it from being completely wack was spul's verse.
E-STY;E
E-STYLE
E-STYLE!!

^^lmao yea...quality is gay

but ehh, i do the best with what i got :shoot:

thanx for da feed

ima leave some feed on this...yall leave feed on my track too :(..

Spul..u sould ok..is that a slight lisp?o_O..flow is good tho on beat and everything..delivery is ok..reminds me of some TonySelf delivery..
chorus is ok....

Tizz..=\ quality is meh..flow is straight tho for starters..delivery could be betta tho lol..its ok tho...

Decree quality is meh too..flow was straight..delivery is better then Tizz..lyrics is straight lol..some of it is meh some of it is played..

like i said tho leave feed on my shit :(

aiight thanks for all the feed.upp

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First verse - SPuL ripped it like pancakes nah mean? Quality was cool.. flow was pretty nice.. your emotion in the tracks has gotten better.. decent delivery..

Second verse - lmfao @ how the quality is trash.. vocals are a little too loud.. ehh.. flow is decent.. your emotion has improved..

Third verse - quality is decent enough.. flow is pretty good.. you need to work on your emotion and stuff.. its all good though..

Hook - pretty catchy.. nah mean?

Overall, decent track.. I got to say SPuL had the best verse and shit.

But, its all good like pancakes nah mean? (FUCK SAUSAGES)

^lmao.... thanks for feed, like sausages nah mean? (FUCK PANCAKES!!!) :shoot:

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ight listening...classic beat..
quality is crisp..
the 1st guy flow is dope, sounds west coast..
good emotion, at times lacks but its still there..
chorus is cool..crew thing..i feel ya lol..
2nd guy, hmm,, his quality is not that good,
his flow is cool but the emotion is lacking, sounds like hes bored..
last guy sounds like a computer...good punches tho..
and his flow is ok..

overall solid track...1st guy shined

peep my shit..
peace
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^thanks man. appreciate your feed. drop a link anytime, and i'll peep your shit. upp,....

bop.......................

1,2,3, you uou yuy

lol..........the chorus is nice & the verses are nice too
haha everyone gettin on Tizz bout his quality.. maybe
its his first time? shit.. but anyway u had a good verse
too.. at first u sounded weird n' shit, but w/e & decree
liked that Kanye West line.. shit was aight.. but overall
all of u had nice verses...................keep it up bitches

Intro: SPuL- good...
First verse: SPuL- pretty good lyrics, i liked
Second verse: Tizzle- too loud, but was good, just work on flow
Third verse: Decree, i like how he sounds..and the kanye line was funny..
Hook: SPuL- was ight, liked it though
Outro: SPuL- good...

thanks aiight uppin...........

this shit isn't bad.... let me break it down


1st verse - flow was polished but maybe just a lil too animated for the beat... but ya lyrics were nice......

2nd verse - nice verse nice delivery nice lyrics just a problem with the quality but i'm not gonna criticize that cause i mean that could all be changed with the right amount of editing and what not...

3rd verse - i loved this verse so many metaphors and wordplay it was nuts i liked it loved the brenda's baby line keep it up man


overall nice collab shit was good and keep doin ya thing people later holla at me if ya ever wanna put me on a track later...

^yea, thanks for feed, man. And yea we'll holla, jus gotta finish a few more group tracks, and i'll holla. word. thanks tho. upp

whoa?...........

yo...i'm feeling this fam, yall boyz came off on it, good drop duke and stay up

easy

i wanna join M.A.S. *cries*

^so that means you liked it? :) lol you can join Organized Krime tho. Which is like the "label" if you might, that M.A.S. is under. ~_~

^^what spul said....:shoot:

is it a crew?...if so im with TE.....but if its not a crew or whatever....yea thats cool

it's a real life shit. Not a RV crew. Cuz I'm in TE too. It's like real life shit. Like Tizz got connections. So we doin' an O.K. mixtape and all that shit. It's real life shit. So if you down, jus PM me if you want in, and i'll get you password. ~_~

whoopi goldberg.........

riseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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break down..........


beat was good choice for a anthem.....

spul on the hook..... ??? first time i peeped you in audio nigga... saight...
i liked your hook better than your verse.... but it wasnt that bad
keep droppin doggie

tizz... gotta work on that flow doggs..... but lyrics was aight

decree.... lyrics was fresh mayne.... mad quotabales up in here..... solid verse.... only thing is maybe a lil more emotion on the track.... feel me... the verse was solid.... juss needed a lil more umph.

overall yall did ya thing.....

hook was kinda catchy :thumbup: like Tha 'Q's "i say hey"

lol.....

7 and 1/2 outta / 10

^aiight thanks appreciate feed yo. You got any songs you want us to peep, jus drop a link. aiight... upppp.......