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The Warriors Path
The Warriors Path
…On a Warriors Path…This Militious Journey Begins…
Eyes Wide…Spy’n Heinous Visions Deeply Embedded... Realizin’ Inevitable Course Of a Treacherous Journey Ahead… Travellin’Darkness…Anonymously With Blades Set to Dred… Equipt to Slice an Imbed Anatomies Reformed as Recent Dead… Habitually Bound to This Martyr’d Massacre Since Adolescense… Mind Permanently Fixated on Death…No Longer The Innocent Presence… Wieldin’ Weapons With Forseen Relevance… ...Prowlin’ In Shadows… Undetected…Like a Panther..Mystifyingly Elegant… Enlisted Several Severe Attack Tacticals…Beyond Phenomina’s…Magical… Destined to Rampage Like Savage Animals…Engage In Battle Vice’d..Satanical… Shogun of Darkness…Devourin’ Pedestrians Whom Grace Path With… Wrath Like Disasterous Massacres an Renactments of Macabre type Vivid Contractions… Embraced...I Stab Grim…Rippin’ Abdomens…Forward Ginsu Thrust Reactions …Enter This Warriors Path… Im Slashin’ & Lavishly Thrashin’ Last Limbz..Brutalize’n Patrons with Gashed Chins… Body Blows..Enduce..Re~Enacted Hearts Sufferin’ Consecutive Contraptions.. Legions of Ramparted Souls Outlasted..I’ve Effortlessly Outlasted Themmmm… Greetin’ Soulless Opposition With Infinite Smite…Deadly as Ancient Parasites… Left With Spines Spiked…Like Quadraplegics…Paralyzed..Miserable in Spite… Destined…To Be…Brutefilly…Plus Brutally… Antagonized with Such Ferocious Delight… …Paused In Eternal Darkness...Poised To Strike… Sporadically..Im Slicin’ with Hominous Materiels… Enlisted New Age Removal of Bar Codes to Scratch Off Ya Seriel… The Superior Delivery of My Deadly Actions Remain like Venereal… Skew an Shish Ka Bob Lacerated Corpses Like Satanic Miracles… Victims Of The Dark Shogun Left With Disfiguatively..Misplaced Physicals… Keen as Witch Docta Slash Elite Ninja’s…Abductin’ Individuals....Spiritual… Performin’..Visceral Excercises that Damage Brain Properties Drainin Minerals… Dicin’ an Simultaneously Slicin’ Victims Veins In Consecutive Intervals… In This 3rd Eye Dimensional…Monumental Journey of Life… Objectives Ahead…Remain Lethal As Darts Sent to Encrypt Bodily Chemicals… Attacks Remains..Easily Sewn..By The Crouchin Dragon Fist with 12 Arm Tentacles… …This Warriors Concieved as Implicit… Poised to…Step n Reverse Double Flip Kick… Expressionz.. Explicit… Shifted…Thrusted…Ellicitly Delivered..Samurai Sword Rifts… …Palm to Fisted…Claw’d Attacks Incrediously Rip… As Concoct’d Moves Instantaneously Land…Hit…In MilliSeconds… Anatomies Split… …Trekkin’ Thru Wastelandish OutFits… The Cats Eyez…3rd Eye Visionarie…See’n Like Its Permanent Night Vision Equipped… Iris..The Color Of Spilled Plasma…Swingin’ Shattered Swords…Spasmicly as Shards Of Steel Defile Fists… feeded on http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204852 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204852 |
ayo man WERD man get a record deal or some high type of shit man sell some singles and get it out there yo!!!!DAMN whole shit was hot man WERD yo.............all ur OM's man damn hall of fame!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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meh.......^....not all of em but thanks anyway..................
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dat was long and some deep shit
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<--- :D Mine is better! - dances. - You'll probably join me in the Hall of Fame for this one.
Let me get serious here: it was deeper then an abyss leading down to UPN's headquarters, the emotion was as vivid as a man newly introduced to vast amounts of estrogen produced from his ovaries, and your imagery was off the hook like fishing with a straight piece of metal. I'd almost chop down a tree to see another verse as shiny as this, and not even my superpower could gild this anymore, like I was some kind of owner of the justice league who could recruit anyone he wanted. Basically, poopdeck. 9/10 (I'm nominating.) |
thx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!upping
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lol rofl thx a lot!!!!!!!!!!!! |
OM hall of fame damn you fire fam
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thx........................................
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Yeah This That Polittically Correct Shit Yo Son The Rap People Wouldn't Give You A Plug Nickel For This Guess It All Right For The Higher Ups But Hell The Real Ghetto Will Laugh In Your Face Believe Me
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rofl at your gayness ...................uppin
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erm this has been nominated for hof bitch n jus wait a few days n u will be banned!!!!!!
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yeah now there now i'm not ducking you're the one ducking the truth this type of script now is not on top believe me kid so what you ban me so you can duck the truth
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nope i ban u cause peeps gettin sick of uy stop freeposti in ma thread bitch
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how r u not doin poetry fam? on the real, if this was in poetic scriptures u'd get as much love in there as i'm gettin now. really feelin this. hope u get hof wit this.
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Ok Poetry Damn Sure Ain't Rap
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^^wackness isnt too
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Speats STILL TALKING AND MY DISS CHANGED THIS BITCH RIGHT HERE WHOLE LIFE STYLE HA! HA! HA!
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this was hott man felt it a lot keep it up man
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thx........................
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rofl at speats damn your kool!!!n madd dumnass it aint poetry
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uppinfy...............
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up-diggity!.....
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Everything that isn't into madd's style of 'rap' is poetry. No duh. Car mechanics are poetry if you don't use multis.
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LMMFAO..................car mechanics lol wurd! up diggity 1
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upping..................
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upping..fuckers
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Uppp The Fuck Bitch!!!!!!!!!!
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upp diggity.....
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word. i was the first to read it when you sent this man this is a very good piece emotion an imagery was real good i loved it best om
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wooooooooooooooooooo...thx upping
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upping................
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Aight...lemme break this down...
The concept first of all was very interesting and allowed you to put a lot of imagery combined with raw emotion in it. I love how you divided it into different parts expressing several aspects of the path of a warrior. The vocabulary was excellent, you had a high level of complexity yet it remained understandable. The flow was a bit off here and there but nothing too bad. The emotion was definitely there, it had a very powerful vibe to it. The imagery was the best though: very vivid. It was as if I was in the middle of it all myself. Definitely HOF :thumbup: |
WOOOOO here that^^some kats know wot it is fuckin maddrapper bitch anyway dram thx a lot!
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upping fuckaz..i will rtf
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uppin bitches...pz
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Yeah this was nicew drop liked the vocab and emotion to this I imagined it like I was thier but in all this was coo 8.5/10
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hell yeah...this was a tight ass piece...vocab was xcellent besides its lil complexity..the immagery was dope and concept was clear..i like the was u structured the whole piece mayne that gave u a plus the only thing that went wrong was that in some places ur flow went off bur fuck it that could be irrelevant the shit is tight...keep 'em comin...
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