YoungSoulja vs SR$
 

Battle Rules:

8 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 12-15-04 at 08:37 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

YoungSoulja has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-14-04 08:38 PM.

SR$ has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-14-04 08:53 PM.

yeah,imma kill dis cat,yo

while im wil'in out dis cat strugglin on his azz
his name is-suck and ride fo cash
dis dude just loves to play tag
he likes it when in football you grab his flag
i slit and cut dae call me niptuck
S tick in R od loves to get raped and booty fucked
read mah name its dangerous to da eyes
youngsoulja will stab ya twice before you can unblick ya eyes
guys,only pussys die
well i guess dats why his mama had to bury him alive and disguised,oh
like Nas said der 6millions ways to die,
i say lyrically,im killin dis cat before evnen jadakiss,could say why
why would i,why should i,cuz i have nuthin else to do wit mah life
excpect kill dese niggas dats soft,i'd say dats good bye
cuz where he goin he aint neva returin
so now his mama imma be re-asurrin'
.............could stop at 16 lines but.......
lyrical bullets im slurrin' why all deaths accurrin im da cuz of dae feat
fuck a beat,you couldnt rhyme even der was a .22 pointed down yeah thoat
like a hoe,ya girl was der,yeah dat was her ya saw wit da
13in pipe goin deep thoat
you know its ova homie you've met defeat
walkin' out wit style i'll leave you da mic
just control yaself,and dont try on me dat shit,Jackson
mich
holla

okay, i wanted to battle, guess i got it//
no hate, but i honestly think youngsoulja is a faggot//
wanna battle me back back, what? nigga you so crazy//
i knew i shouldnt have let yo moms have dat baby//
now you got tha my blood and got my spirit//
but in lyrics nigga you wack, i aint tryin to hear it//
now you probably gone hit me back bout whoes to blame for yo birth effects//
blame yo bitch ass prostitute momma, cuz im tha nigga dats perfect//
*see you when i see you nigga*

Voted For: SR$

Both verses came kinda weak, but Sr$ came better. Souljas verse was too messy and it didn't flow good..some of the punches made no sense. IN SR$'S verse, I didn't really like the, i shouldnt have let ur mom have that baby line...was kinda played having moms in the verse, but nonetheless he camemwith stronger punches, and a better structure.

pz

i got two ways dat i can dust you off da map//
i could use my mechete or use dis gat//
i guess i'll use da knife cuz i wanna cut deep//
my plan is to slit yo throat, wrist, and tha tan line across yo feet//
man im gone win this one, all hands down//
cuz when i spit people feel it, and everybody else just laugh at you clown//
nigga just rethink dis rappin stuff, pull off a Young Buck//
stab yoself in tha lungs until i feel like finishin ya//
fool

This was feedback posted for SR$
 

yo i really think u ripped this dude. good luck all da rest uv ur battles

uuuuppppiinin come on people yall need to vote
where da hell yall at

Voted For: YoungSoulja

V/young soulja......he had better vocab an multi's his punchs were more creative....sr$ u had a good opening but u weren't consistent wit the diss's
punchs=young
multis=young
vocab=young
structure=Sr$
overall=young soulja
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

This was feedback posted for YoungSoulja
 

checking pollz.........................................

Voted For: YoungSoulja

I give the vote to YoungSoulja... He definately had better punches, definately a better range of vocab, and better structure... The best rhyme was:
i say lyrically,im killin dis cat before evnen jadakiss,could say why
why would i,why should i,cuz i have nuthin else to do wit mah life
excpect kill dese niggas dats soft,i'd say dats good bye

Please return the favor/vote @ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=166119

What Tha Fuck Is Wrong Wit This Guy Man?....yo...let me back at dis nigga G...yo

man im tha greatest cant nobody fuck wit me guy//
young was better than me? please dont make a tear form at my eye//
im blowed right now, yeah tha boy is high as tha sky//
so i'll let this pussy shoot first, kill me and i come back havin him sayin "how" and "why"//
i could care less bout his punches cuz he aint "hook"in at all//
he mad at me cuz i fucked his chick and he sittin back wit blue balls//
he gots to be tha new Ru Paul cuz all he do is drag out verses//
reality of him is non-existant, he just a perkiest//
a fuckin posin ass nigga swearin he'll shoot at me//
but too bad im tha last dragon catchin bullets wit my teeth//
after this he'll be mad at me, but who gives a shit?//
i got many enimies already, whats one more prick? bitch//
im sendin him to an early grave 4real//
let em keep being a posin ass trick bitch nigga, i'll grab tha steel//
peel his muthafuckin cap futher than his girl pubic hair line//
its SR$ nigga...read this over and study my ryhmes...bitch//

niiga da battle iz over stop flowin
you makin ya self look bad by tryin to hard
fareal

uuuuuuuuppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnn,RV,we needs dese
votes,can we get some please

Voted For: SR$

SR$ took this one..i felt that his punches were
harder, tha structure needs improvin, tha flow was aight
and the vocab was pretty decent, but overall SR$ took
this one... YoungSoulja u had a decent drop but ur punches
could've been harder tho...both of u elevate a little more..
.
.
.
.
.Out.

fasho homie thanx fo da feed and dat vote :thumbup: now if we
others............damn people wake up

c'mon RV upppin for mo votes

can yall vote please

uuuuuuuppppppppiiiiiinnnnnnnnn for votes
c'mon RV

vvvvvvvvvvvvooooooooootttttttttttttttttteeeeeeeeee

Voted For: YoungSoulja

u won man..............................................

Voted For: SR$

u came trash SR$ but YS was fuck'n worse

got dam dis was weak

SR$-garbage, u had 3rd grade kiddie punches, u really need help

YS-worse, u r trash as hell

wateva nigga i dont care dat you voted fo him but dont be jumpin in
up in here disrespectin no one and dick ridin muthafuckas niggas
get back

This was feedback posted for SR$
 

yo boy u know u cant mess with the best , confessions off ur mind but bullets still stay in ur chest//u da worste i ever herd couaght up in da mix my crew pop 2 in ur mouth like twix//running around talking bout mamas , but u couldnt do shit, faggot ass get layed out liek a blue print//u ask me ur shit and u know i cant solvem , leave more bullets in u then jay-z got probalems//only question is , da feds gon charge , nigga get thrown on da tracks like metro cards//
BEAT THAT SHIT!!!

yeah dog i was you trippin homie you come in here,yall trash yall trash yall garbage,we dont do dat to yall,if you time for all dat shit,why dont you vote next time,so then our TRASH wont just be sittin here in yo way aiight
holla

uppin dis shit for votes.......c'mon RV
vote
vote or die niggas lol
just vote

uuuupppppiiiinnnn dis shit c,mon yall i need dis
so come and vote and make da world a better
place for you and me,yall c,mon

Voted For: YoungSoulja

young soulja took this. neither of them had great punches but youngsoulja attempted wordplay and i was feelin the charisma he sorta tried to put behind it with the line "so now his mama imma be re-asurrin'
.............could stop at 16 lines but.......
lyrical bullets im slurrin'"
his structure was a little funny but other than that i think he took this one. sr$'s punches were just weak, i didnt feel he put anything behind them and he didn't attempt personals or word play. He didn't have multi's but then again youngsoulja's weren't good so that ain't a factor.

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Voted For: YoungSoulja

this was not a very hot battle at all. both of yall structure is fucked. work on that cuz it really makes u lose points if ur verse is annoying to read nah mean. but young soulja won this battle cuz he had better punches sort of lol. and more creative n better wordplay
sr didnt even try in this battle. u gotta come harder than that homie..1
RTF
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