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Raw Killa vs schema
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20-30 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 08-12-04 at 04:04 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
schema has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 04:11 PM.
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raw killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 02:34 AM.
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who u 1st of n wut made u grow balls 2 challenge me? im sick of weakness n hatin come at me good luck peace n 1 luv
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ive seen your 50 million open mics and i know you worthless
so you can run ya mouth till you outta breath and i wont be nervous... my crews all gods so thats why all our flows so perfect yall like some fuckin babies to me and here goes ya burpin'... ya verse is like 5 minutes of nothing...ill take a nap if i wanna waste time the site gon crash about 5 minutes after you drop ya lame rhyme... its hard on the servers when someone gets 50 votes at the same time come up with some new shit...you got damn near 50 posts with the same rhyme... I come original...fake thug shit's played cuz believe it my shits so fresh you gotta update ya monitors to see it... hater...you get pissed at a hot verse every time you see it yall mad at my crew?...yall just hate it cause you wanna be it... im so tired of these pc gangsters runnin around like they biggie you sick of weakness? then you should prolly get this shit out ya siggy.. being wack as you battlin me is like tryin to get out a hole by digging you tryin to rap is like lil jon gettin on a track singing... you pussies cant rhyme...swear you gangsta but you not so hood yall all gettin clowned on by me just like i thought yall would... youre pretty nice at shit talkin...but rap...youre not so good so when you told ya crew youd beat me hope you knocked on wood... |
tha "frontline board"/post rape when i touch da keyboard/
"schema" claims he a "elevator going up" so im haltin his risin "elevator cords"/ nobody's fuckin wit my crew n quote me on dat/niggaz ego's higher than "top" hats/dis nigga gonna get stepped on like "front-door" mats/ima murk dis cat/wit "arial" text on rv's battle "template-format"/ my battle stradegy/causes "documented" battle tradegies/ in da booth blazin thosee maryjuana "cabbage" trees/ a savage teen/prone 2 attack damaged knees/wit bandaged knees/n damage-ravage mc's image g/ u could bribe a bitch 4 sex n still wouldnt "schema"/ "speilburg" does betta "works" n u's a "dream-a"/ only dayton's dis nigga rockin is those on his model bema/ im takin his air n food kinda like a bad case of as-balem-a/(asthma/balemic) i got "zerotoleranceman"4 fakes only thing he loadin is "aim"/ runnin lames out da rap game/dis a "allik war" n im a "raw killa" see da switch in style n split names/insertin "spam" 2 dis niggaz mainframe/these netcees battles toward me look da same/sum 1 say sumtin new bout da man behind da rap name/ charlie horse ya tongue n cramp ur spit/ even if i had a pussy u still couldnt fuck wit my shit/ ima leave dis "schema"/lookin like a cancer patient da way im givin him kema/im still rappin even if u bitches aint feelin my spit/(spits)drop da mic....fuck it i quit/ i saw u had a pretty good record so i worked harder on dis than previous battles good luck peace:gun: |
lol ur verse was pretty pointless bcuz i neva spoke 2 u or bout u since ive been on dis *hater*site second bitch i rhyme perfectly fine i kno people who big time who say 1
day ill shine i smell one hatin fake nigga bitch n dats u i neva new shit bout u or ya weak ass crew u wanna test prove gangsta n meet me bitch so wut ya record 14-4 n e can type bitch but i gurentee none of ur writin can fuck wit wut i write pussies all da same tlkn shit cuz they mad every1 goin 2 our crew first ta fuckin join get lives n live sumtin outside ya pc screen cuz nigga u aint hard u jus pissed at ya "keys".... dat wasnt a rhyme dats speakin da truth fuck u hataz n dick ridaz wun luv 2 da real kill da fake peace out n holla back pussies |
n by da way most muthafuckaz ive met from south carolina either rednecks or fags pussy ha ha....lmmao wanna b gangsta "board-walks" dont count 4 ya hardest streets
b honest onlything u reppin is dicks n da beach fuckin cornball insest mistake bitch wun lmmao:laugh: |
Voted For: schema
i liked Ss flow better and id say his punches connected good. Better vocab and word celection. return da favor and vote honest on ma battles. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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i dunno wtf u smokin but either u a crew memba of his or was bribed 2 vote cuz most muthafuckas when they say Quote:
mean they were asked 2 vote 4'em as a favor......betta b no fuckin dick ridin or hatin votes goin on n certainly no cheatin.....cuz dat gotta b 1 of da best battle verses ive ever writin..... KEEP DA HATE VOTES N DICK RIDAZ OUTTA DIS THREAD....UPPIN PEACE |
yo this aint no dick ridin yeah, i might be fuckin wrong some times, fuck that im wrong most of the time but fuck you i write return da favor like i ask yall to vote on ma shit cuz i did on yours, your fuckin bitter and yeah i probaby made a mistake, but dont try to force me to it.
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P.S. I dont even know ma self wut im smokin its a new breed. If i knew you id pass some.
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quit your fucking swaying pussy...youve already posted 2 things after your verse swaying to try to get votes...ive never even heard of that dude that voted for me fuck outta here...if you lost then you lost deal with it...you keep swaying im gonna report it and youll probably get dqed...take it like a man...^^uppin^^
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first bar:check his status under his name...... second bar:self explainitory third bar:his name is schema so da 1st line was sayin he couldnt bribe a bitch even if he schemed her....steven spielburg does dreamworks movies...otha parts should self explainitory.....if not ur a retard..:laugh: fourth bar:check his profile his screen name is:zerotoleranceman on aim.... my original/other rap name is allik war n than of course raw killa.... las 2 lines basically tellin da truth every1 who battles me or disses me or w/e says da same shit...... fifth bar:first line self explainitory unless again u r retarted :laugh: same thing self expalinitory unless u stupid :laugh: yea basically all self explainitory on las bar unless u a hatin,dick ridin dumbass :laugh: uppin dis fuckin battle lets go hot shit :shoot: |
Voted For: raw killa
this battle was a good one punches both metaphors raw killa multis raw killa vocab both personalz schema flow both structure both vote raw killa Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: schema
This was a real close ,,but you came with some good shit all the way around,,,, So I''l point out what i likeD the most,,,,,, ive seen your 50 million open mics and i know you worthless so you can run ya mouth till you outta breath and i wont be nervous... my crews all gods so thats why all our flows so perfect yall like some fuckin babies to me and here goes ya burpin'... ya verse is like 5 minutes of nothing...ill take a nap if i wanna waste time the site gon crash about 5 minutes after you drop ya lame rhyme... its hard on the servers when someone gets 50 votes at the same time come up with some new shit...you got damn near 50 posts with the same rhyme... That way I explained my self an vote better,,,,I think you had a nice drop,,,all together,,,but hey I got to point out something i liked out of it all,,,, I GIVE YOU A 7-10,, Bcause your shit was tight as hell,,,1 god bless all |
I tried to vote for raw killer....So make the switch...
I didnt understand the voting panel,,,because it was a little different from the way it use to be done,,,,,,,,So remove that vote heres my responce to raw killer post this is what i liked about yours,,,, tha "frontline board"/post rape when i touch da keyboard/ "schema" claims he a "elevator going up" so im haltin his risin "elevator cords"/ nobody's fuckin wit my crew n quote me on dat/niggaz ego's higher than "top" hats/dis nigga gonna get stepped on like "front-door" mats/ima murk dis cat/wit "arial" text on rv's battle "template-format"/ my battle stradegy/causes "documented" battle tradegies/ in da booth blazin thosee maryjuana "cabbage" trees/ a savage teen/prone 2 attack damaged knees/wit bandaged knees/n damage-ravage mc's image g/ I think your opener was better,,,but dont get me wrong you both was tight as hell and your word play has really took an elevation from good to tight,,, I give raw killer a 8-10,,,,, Vote- RAW KILLER So make the changes,,,,Sorry for the mistake,,,1 God bless all 1 Fixed |
how da fuck was dat inadequite feedback 4 1 he aint crew at da moment 2 he does it how every else does a fuckin vote......n sum1 fuckin damn change da otha vote from 5 mic dat he describes damn well who he voted for damnit no cheatin bullshit
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^^uppin for votes^^ 3 down 1 to go...
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u wish 3 down 1 2 go homie.....da tallie still 1-1 n no one votin....probly cuz all da hataz i got n dick ridaz who vote 4 me 2 lose r black listed.....lol so hopefully i can have a battle get real honest votes....:laugh: uppin dis shit holla back
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let me rephrase...3 members of your wack ass crew merked, 1 to go...uppin
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Voted For: raw killa
killa came raw wit fasho the wordplay and metahs were killin and though i've never seen the structure style before i was feelin it nice flow seemed tah me tah be original and complex ... schema i like yah verse but compared tah what killa brought to the table today you rime style was too simple some attepmted personals but yah punches just weren't hittin like killa's this time ... Both stay up stay active Vote often Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
thanx 4 da love n vote ill check yo shit n return da fava of peepin dis battle.....
schema u may have "merk" my crew but u jus met yo match ...lol jus call me da golden child....lol 3 more votes standin strong...n my crew aint wack jus 2 many hatain bitches in dis site wun love holla back uppin 4 honest feedback n votes peace |
This was feedback posted for raw killa
whoa this was a good battle but i gotta vote raw kill, he was very complex with punchlines...schema had a nice flow and i like dat, but had some weak punchlines.
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thankx 4 da love but ya'll vote u gotta do it categories n give a small explaination or they will b dq'd thanx 4 da love also make sure u hit post vote when eva ya votin who u do vote for peeps of RV holla back looks like we both dq'd votes schema but lol im winnin...lmmao:laugh:
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Voted For: schema
yo schema got this 1 cos as for me he had harder punches...and his verse was simply tight..no complications and shit to get his personals...his rhymes were tight too and his flows were better..yeah raw was good too but i just fell schema's shit alot more... I come original...fake thug shit's played cuz believe it my shits so fresh you gotta update ya monitors to see it... hater...you get pissed at a hot verse every time you see it yall mad at my crew?...yall just hate it cause you wanna be it... im so tired of these pc gangsters runnin around like they biggie you sick of weakness? then you should prolly get this shit out ya siggy.. being wack as you battlin me is like tryin to get out a hole by digging you tryin to rap is like lil jon gettin on a track singing... ^^^^^^^^ thats was a very tight partd of ya verse schema.... and this battle was good..very very good vote schema |
gracias...uppin
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i see only 26 replies which really isnt dat either......since half wer eme n schema.....
i see dat 265 people who have viewed this thread now y not vote? were everysingle wun of them newbies w/o 20 post or sumtin i mean c'mon i look at a lot of people shit all da time ya'll cant return da favor? leave ur feedback n vote for us will return da favor wit an honest vote on 1 of ya'lls battles or leave sum feedback in 1 of ur post holla back uppin dis bitch peace out 1 luv |
yo u people need 2 quit sleepin on my battles vote these fuckas make sure u do it rite no matta who u votin 4 so it doesnt get dq'd i kno yall viewin dis shit drop an honest n ill return da same holla back uppin dis bitch^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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^^uppin...quit sleepin^^
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Voted For: schema
ight... You both came with your own, but the way the flo wa sworking with the bigger vocab n direct punches..the other homie didnt do anything wrong, jus not enough.. Schema takes the vote, return the favor: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143713 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: schema
schema ripped this kid.. i know u can come harder but i dont think u really had to with him... raw killa ur verse was ok but ur structure and flow was wack.. so schema wins by better punches and personals Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: schema
haha schema takes dis dis my fav line its hard on the servers when someone gets 50 votes at the same time come up with some new shit...you got damn near 50 posts with the same rhyme... *****you did exactly what u said bout him SICK flow was on point too punches stuck and left a dent too just some brudal shit right here you ILL BOI don't quote dat in yo sig lol but you take this and dis NOT DR so don't waste time reportin it ~1~ |
yea bullshit dis aint dr...my fuckin whole verse was on point n his sry ass punches didnt leave no types of fuckin dents n e where im reportin u fuckin cheatin ass bitches
i kno damn dis is dr fuckers jus helpin out ya butt buddy so dis thread is closed u fuckin pussies r retarded fuck u all NO MORE FUCKIN DICK RIDIN DICK SUCKIN HATIN VOTES FROM CREWS OR HOMIES STR8 GODDAMNIT REAL FUCKIN HONEST VOTES IM REPORTIN UR SRY ASSES |
go report it...first of all its not gonna get closed so cross that off your wish list...what will happen is theyll come in here and delete the unexplained votes (btw i dont know any of these people so you can get that "youre cheating" shit out of here)...then it will be another whole week of waiting for more people to come in here and vote for me...you can go report it if you want but if I were you id just quit bitchin and take the L...you lost fam accept it...
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This was feedback posted for raw killa
i think this goes to raw killa because he came stronger and he laid you out schema he had punches and personals i think he jus came stronger
schema was ok i think but i dont know it was alrite your verse was kind of ba d schema get better! to bad i cant vote but if i could raw would have it |
^^herb...
Uppin for win........................ |
Voted For: schema
yo man shcema had it cuz of punches personals structure for both flow for shcema and shcema had good punches damn... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
ha ha i dont care how long dis battle is open oly true explained real fuckin votes im sick of people like u thinkin u can gain a win dat easily walk on me peace uppin dis shit wun luv
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youre just sick of losing...i didnt ask any of those people to vote for me...^uppin^
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