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Old 08-06-04, 10:25 AM   #1
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Raw Killa vs LyrikalGladiator

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5 - 10 barz
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Old 08-06-04, 10:31 AM   #2
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Old 08-06-04, 01:34 PM   #3
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Old 08-08-04, 04:54 AM   #4
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lyrical gladiator da name fits him,cuz da only swords he swingin is "sharp" pens,raw killa challenged 2 anotha battle again tryin 2 prove betta than them

mic's r replaced every time itouch it cuz i kill da mic,while niggaz like lyrical gladiator mistake'em 4 dildo's cuz he's a dike,
da type,puttin chrome on da trainin wheels of his bike,claimin his ride is tight,infect n get unda his skin like rabbid dog bites

im stickin c4 in dis bitches stomach n grant his wish of bein all ova da streets,n da only thing shinnin in dis niggaz mouth is my piece clenched tight in hi teeth,sneez im sick when da triggaz released,splatter his jaw n everything near out his fuckin cheeks,but dats how i do it round here like memphis bleek,im sry bout how abnoxious my pistol is when it speaks

lyrical is lyrically inclined,so here dog its kool take a bite of mine,at least u can truly read it n weap at da battle's startin line,i give words black eyes when i "punch" a-line,only time,dis nigga comes close 2 "bark-in" is when he writes on "pine"

battlin me is like aids n white blood cells,winnin will neva happen,ya rhymes r 2 weak 2 rely on rappin,drop ya pen n step away from da mic,save ya self from bein murdered 2nite
n jus listen 2 da dj in da back scratchin,cuz condoms da only thing u w-rappin
 
Old 08-09-04, 02:25 AM   #5
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damn anotha no show wtf?
lmmao
K-----------------------------------------------O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 08-09-04, 01:03 PM   #6
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man fuck it im grounded and shit but whatever

after this battle, tell me how it feels to be MURKED by a "newb"
its funny how you claim veteran but..as a newb im betta than you /1

check yourself dude....callin me new-b......ur just hatin
this nigga ouldnt spit fire if he traded vocal cords wit SATAN /2

fuck waitin.....my rhymes have ur head spinnin like Daytinz
I'll have this nigga finsihing second like his name was Clay Aiken / 3

nigga fakin.......you shoulda just stayed solemn
cas ur small compared ta me, like ur loss to ur win column /4

u couldnt rhyme hot it u were "on fire" like Lloyd Banks.....so u try to use gun fire but ur so weak ur "n-spired" to "spit blanks" / 5

usa "damn shame"....wit a damn "weak name"......niggaz record shoulda told him that he dont belong in this "rap game" /6

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Old 08-09-04, 01:09 PM   #7
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Voted For: raw killa

yo sry to say but Lyrikal u alsmost had it but u lsot it dawg,

yo good battle to both of u i liekd both of ur verses,

Raw Killa- yo u had da flo and da punches, they came ahrd and hit directly, ur flo was on tact and u neva lost track of ur opponet

Gladiator-yo verse was hard and well planned but yo vocab was a lil off dawg u have to get more beta wit yo vocab and also yo strcutre was off i cudnt figure out line from line n sumtimes u dint evn ryhme, but good battle yall,


v/Raw Killa

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Old 08-09-04, 01:10 PM   #8
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finally he post wut ya grounded for?
lmmao
i dont need a battle record 2 kno im hot
n by da way nigga....im on anotha site 2 dats in da top 50 rap sites in da world....
n oh my 3rd day i made mod......n got my own crew startin holla back nigga
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Old 08-09-04, 01:16 PM   #9
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ight thaz coo.....i was just battlin

and im grounded from tha comp cas i got a virus and my parents freaked...but its gone now

and im still grounded so goodluck to u too
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Old 08-09-04, 01:19 PM   #10
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uhhhh...how were his punches that good.....all he talked about was me being a dike

and dum shyt like that....thaz bullshit kid......his struc was wrose than myne (i think) but w/e a votes a vote
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Old 08-09-04, 05:28 PM   #11
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no hatin but u crazy if u think ur punches were betta but let da rv people's b da voters of dat now come on rv holla wit sum votes honest 1 peace uppin^^^^^^^^^
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Old 08-10-04, 09:43 AM   #12
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^^^^how tha fuck am i crazy fa sayin ur punches were weak....they were

and i only saw 2 maybe 3....u were talkin bout gunz and blowiin my head off and sexuality and shit what tha fuck is that???? but w/e think as u may

UPPPIN fa SOME GOD DAMN VOTES!
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Old 08-11-04, 06:36 AM   #13
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Voted For: raw killa

Gotta go with raw on this one...

lyrical gladiator:your flow was nice,vocab lil basic but ok, structure was kool, punches and personals were decent, opener was weak,closer was better

raw killa : flow was nice,punches and personals hot, vocab was cool, opener and closer were both real good, ur structure can be better tho...

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Old 08-11-04, 06:53 AM   #14
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"lyrical gladiator da name fits him,cuz da only swords he swingin is "sharp" pens,raw killa challenged 2 anotha battle again tryin 2 prove betta than them"

ayt i kno ya'll heard of da pens made by sharp.....it was a good metaphor i should of explained it but yea his name is lyrical gladiator hence why i did dat line think of it....

sry dude u think i didnt have good punches we'll do a re-battle after dis but uppin dis bitch thanx 4 da honest votes peace
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Old 08-11-04, 06:59 AM   #15
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Voted For: LyrikalGladiator

aiight nice battle but LyrikalGladiator got this for better punch lines and his opener was decent but the closer sucked

Total for Lyrikal: 65/100
Total for Rawkil: 55/100

Lyrikal also had better structure


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