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TheUnderRated vs. Doze
10-12 lines
20-30 blindspit normal rules check in |
safe manz, im gonna spit later on as its early in england and i need sleep...
Peace |
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Its 4:29am, i live in kent...i live in England..i do night shifts so im so fucking tired..i am not writting up now...why would i spend ages on 12 lines??
Peace |
drop when you can............................................... .................................................. ..............
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Doze flows are worse than no shows, cause he's never fucked with pros
CONStantly killin this villian i'm Mr fantastic like one of his avy's foes...... I wouldn't Marvel at this kids skill if doctor doom spit all his bars.... Pardon the insult dawg, but thats still a gradeschool avatar.... I'll make this bitch like the invisible woman when i spit my flow... You can see that Ima Old G Cause I know so much bout Fantastic fo This faggot eats dicks like Lays, Betchya can't eat just one Blows mo dicks than a pothead blows blunts I aint from the upper class but I spit high cause I'm dope Anutha rapper from england, anutha Great White Hope Kid answered my bitchslapped like bad sex you came too quick you ain't shit.............................................. ..........................bitch LMFAO AHHHHHHHHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA sPIT FOOL |
Ok man ive just woke up...gonna have something soon...
Peace |
That shits more weak than canibus biting Redman, cause im bleeding your equal rights,
Insulting your own pre teen writes defiantly shows that you dont reach vet heights/[1] Bout time TheOverRated wackness got shown what newbs can do when set to the topic, This boaster stated with lacking attempts, when this battle's already finished in my pocket/ Reposition your vision so you can see how wack your ambitions to hit grimey spits are, Ammunition for collisions not being needed as your actions touch lighter than a feather/ This wiggar talking to a nigga and thinking that hes real, Rated Please visit the future, Having a snigger when you figure who kills, Baited when your kiddie spits aint staging mature/ You think your Mr Fantastic but even if you added shine to your name you would clean me up, Bitch your a filler fanatic, adding in more played wackness than newbs on there first drop/[2] [1]Talking bout my avatar, but yours comes exactly from the same place... [2]Mr Shine is a cleaning product... Uppin On this MoFo’s...... |
UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! #1
Lets get some votes please.. |
aight.
underrated-- pretty good punches, i gotta admit i started laughing out loud when i read "This faggot eats dicks like Lays, Betchya can't eat just one". the next line was pretty good too, overall a pretty good verse. doze-- didnt really seem to flow well...not any punches worthwhile of mentioning. just pretty poor stucture overall. vote: theunderrated. return the favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101943 |
Uppin #2
Im sorry to say this but i use wordplay, i used personals on him about how he has played lines..my punches where ok...structure pfft so? your ment to be going on the text..people think when you vote... UPPIN |
my record: 1-0
your record: 0-1 who should be talking? besides, i did look at text. my vote is my vote. i write a quick synopsis, not a novel, so fuck your opinion. |
uppin this for votes............................................. .................................................. .................rap is fun
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Underrated took this...
Not too bad from the other kid but it seemed to be a little stretched at time Underrated takes it with better punches, etc. and showed more wit... Hit up my battle with arrogorn... *I'm too lazy to dig up the link* |
underated go tthis 1 with better punches and personals also he flowed better,
doze try and work on your flow your shit was abit streched man(but not 2 bad)............ hit up the battle in my sig now...............thx now.....now....................................... pz |
underated , got the betetr of the other guy, basically it was jus the level of punches an to a point fa'low, that got him my vote....
ayo return the favour....... vote honestly... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102154 |
uppin this for votes.............i think i'm on my thrid uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX333333333333333333333333333 33333333333 lets get these votes and get it closed......
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Breakdown:
punches under: CONStantly killin this villian i'm Mr fantastic like one of his avy's foes...very nice// doze... Having a snigger when you figure who kills, Baited when your kiddie spits aint staging mature/ metas under: Kid answered my bitchslapped like bad sex you came too quick// doze yours coulda been flipped better bro flow under: doze..try to shorten your bars playa personals both: both equally dissed eachother.. This faggot eats dicks like Lays, Betchya can't eat just one multies neither: both need to include some in your verses ya know overall under: overall better verse ................................................ ................................................. |
meta took the words right out of my mouth and ur bars are way too long doze. but TUR came stronger. youre getting there playa.
vote - TUR return da favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101623 & http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100587 |
i'm only on my third up now i thought i was on my thrid before but it was only my second...............should be closed already............poll your votes people.........................XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXX3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 33333333333
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holy shit people vote it up uppin it to get votedon lets get some viotes....XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX$$$444444444444444444 sleepin in front lines is a no no
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Underated had a better flow and structure. Both rhymers need to elevate. some more
Anyway check my battles out vote ang give feedback too links below |
yo soz man i need this battle voted on its bein slept on soz man http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...046#post1030046 could you as i took the time....thx man...............pz
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Undersated won this i dont wanan type it all out he took it in every category
peace repay favour man im getting slept on badly http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...176#post1030176 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...166#post1030166 |
alright yo i poled now repay favour
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...166#post1030166 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...176#post1030176 |
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