10-12 lines
20-30
blindspit
normal rules
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safe manz, im gonna spit later on as its early in england and i need sleep...


Peace

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Its 4:29am, i live in kent...i live in England..i do night shifts so im so fucking tired..i am not writting up now...why would i spend ages on 12 lines??

Peace

drop when you can............................................... .................................................. ..............

Doze flows are worse than no shows, cause he's never fucked with pros
CONStantly killin this villian i'm Mr fantastic like one of his avy's foes......
I wouldn't Marvel at this kids skill if doctor doom spit all his bars....
Pardon the insult dawg, but thats still a gradeschool avatar....
I'll make this bitch like the invisible woman when i spit my flow...
You can see that Ima Old G Cause I know so much bout Fantastic fo
This faggot eats dicks like Lays, Betchya can't eat just one
Blows mo dicks than a pothead blows blunts

I aint from the upper class but I spit high cause I'm dope
Anutha rapper from england, anutha Great White Hope
Kid answered my bitchslapped like bad sex you came too quick
you ain't shit.............................................. ..........................bitch


LMFAO AHHHHHHHHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA sPIT FOOL

Ok man ive just woke up...gonna have something soon...



Peace

That shits more weak than canibus biting Redman, cause im bleeding your equal rights,
Insulting your own pre teen writes defiantly shows that you dont reach vet heights/[1]
Bout time TheOverRated wackness got shown what newbs can do when set to the topic,
This boaster stated with lacking attempts, when this battle's already finished in my pocket/
Reposition your vision so you can see how wack your ambitions to hit grimey spits are,
Ammunition for collisions not being needed as your actions touch lighter than a feather/
This wiggar talking to a nigga and thinking that hes real, Rated Please visit the future,
Having a snigger when you figure who kills, Baited when your kiddie spits aint staging mature/
You think your Mr Fantastic but even if you added shine to your name you would clean me up,
Bitch your a filler fanatic, adding in more played wackness than newbs on there first drop/[2]

[1]Talking bout my avatar, but yours comes exactly from the same place...

[2]Mr Shine is a cleaning product...

Uppin On this MoFo’s......

UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! #1




Lets get some votes please..

aight.

underrated--
pretty good punches, i gotta admit i started laughing out loud when i read "This faggot eats dicks like Lays, Betchya can't eat just one". the next line was pretty good too, overall a pretty good verse.

doze--
didnt really seem to flow well...not any punches worthwhile of mentioning. just pretty poor stucture overall.

vote: theunderrated.


return the favor:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101943

Uppin #2

Im sorry to say this but i use wordplay, i used personals on him about how he has played lines..my punches where ok...structure pfft so? your ment to be going on the text..people think when you vote...

UPPIN

my record: 1-0
your record: 0-1

who should be talking?

besides, i did look at text. my vote is my vote. i write a quick synopsis, not a novel, so fuck your opinion.

uppin this for votes............................................. .................................................. .................rap is fun

Underrated took this...

Not too bad from the other kid but it seemed to be a little stretched at time

Underrated takes it with better punches, etc. and showed more wit...

Hit up my battle with arrogorn...
*I'm too lazy to dig up the link*

underated go tthis 1 with better punches and personals also he flowed better,
doze try and work on your flow your shit was abit streched man(but not 2 bad)............


hit up the battle in my sig now...............thx now.....now....................................... pz