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Young P vs Game Time
Aight like I said before.
Around 10 Lines. I'll match you. Or w/e. Just don't go overboard. Drop when your ready. Good luck. |
well im just checkin in...i'll drop whenever i sit and key..late
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You Set yaself up from the Very Beginning to get Destroyed Hence.. Quote:
...these Very Strong words from such a Young White Boy.. their Goes your End..career folds to that Quotes Extent u Had a Chance to Swing back... .................................till u Chose to Garment a Dress check P's Battles..he's truly Taken on that Feeding Touch.. Quote:
You're right.... ......U don't Really suck but You Sure Do Eat a Bunch.. I searched and searched to see if Kid was Worthy to Throw Down Discovered his Signature Move... .....................................When no Skill was Found.... So all in all...I guess He gon' Drop some Shit to Try to Match.. I'll be waitin on his Verse... .............................Till he gets his Hand Out that Rhino's Ass.. Now Thats diggin deep..So take ya Precious Time with No Rush.. so "Drop when your ready" and Uhh......"Good Luck"...-Young P If You Don't Understand Don't Vote |
I don't understand that first quote. Where'd you get that from?
Well I mine as well just ask you on AIM. I'm doing that right now. I'll drop in a bit. |
Is this a battle? Game Time Only about two of your lines ryhmed it sounded like you were just talkin Get off God Son's Dick and create your own style.
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the quote is real....
and goodbye art official.... |
damn...the beauty of dropping second..your whole game-plan changed didnt it..
drop...soon please |
Bye GameTime. *Waves*
Game doesn't even return favors anymore, like he got an easy dickride pass. So when I said I'll squash ya hopes, I shoulda expected a poke in the ass! I'm scared. This is one time I might not even be able to match Game's shit. Cause I asked him about his structure... nasisthebestever: ? .................................................. .....And even he couldn't explain it!! You lame with those rymes, no position, so ...dick... you tend to straddle. Told him to search for real skill... And he went back to my first battle!! And to think that I almost mistook you for a member of Deja Vu... Not because of your talent... nasisthebestever: my first verse ever was gayness! ....................And damn, you didn't think that your last one was too?! This is your fault, right?, cause you planned to battle me, it's a due stop. Its not just RB, even your avatar wasnt lookin forward to what u dropped! I don't search for my disses, so I was suprised to find this with my luck... Now I'm letting everyone in on the big secret, it's true... .................................................. ...................GAMETIME SUCKS!! |
Vote you fucking fuckers.
Special fuck you to feeble for warning me. Asshole. Lol. But he's at 100%, im at 73%! |
You Set yaself up from the Very Beginning to get Destroyed
Hence.. Quote: Originally Posted by Young P Fuck dat...i didnt bite nuttin nigga!....................................... ...these Very Strong words from such a Young White Boy.. their Goes your End..career folds to that Quotes Extent ^good use of a quote....get him on some eminem type shit... u Had a Chance to Swing back... .................................till u Chose to Garment a Dress check P's Battles..he's truly Taken on that Feeding Touch.. Quote: Originally Posted by Young P So I Am Voting For Chrit, And No I Am Not "DOWN WIT HIM SUCKIN HIS DICK"... I Eat His Asscrack Out... You're right.... ......U don't Really suck but You Sure Do Eat a Bunch.. ^well this was an intrestin quote but the punch was pretty weak... I searched and searched to see if Kid was Worthy to Throw Down Discovered his Signature Move... .....................................When no Skill was Found.... ^i like it lots of dots^eheheheh So all in all...I guess He gon' Drop some Shit to Try to Match.. I'll be waitin on his Verse... .............................Till he gets his Hand Out that Rhino's Ass.. ^play off the avy its all good....Ok punch Now Thats diggin deep..So take ya Precious Time with No Rush.. so "Drop when your ready" and Uhh......"Good Luck"...-Young P ^ok closer....another quote type thing....lol to the man who said his shit didn't rhyme... 17/20 Game doesn't even return favors anymore, like he got an easy dickride pass. So when I said I'll squash ya hopes, I shoulda expected a poke in the ass! ^meh.....you coulda opened better I'm scared. This is one time I might not even be able to match Game's shit. Cause I asked him about his structure... nasisthebestever: ? .................................................. .....And even he couldn't explain it!! ^hehe nice punch.....good stuff bitch move to use the aim convo though You lame with those rymes, no position, so ...dick... you tend to straddle. Told him to search for real skill... And he went back to my first battle!! ^hmm.....i didn't like it............ And to think that I almost mistook you for a member of Deja Vu... Not because of your talent... nasisthebestever: my first verse ever was gayness! ....................And damn, you didn't think that your last one was too?! ^nice punches off of the quotes.....still abitch move... This is your fault, right?, cause you planned to battle me, it's a due stop. Its not just RB, even your avatar wasnt lookin forward to what u dropped! ^meh this is like the punch in LLL rearranged....create son create...... I don't search for my disses, so I was suprised to find this with my luck... Now I'm letting everyone in on the big secret, it's true... .................................................. ...................GAMETIME SUCKS!! ^lol ok enough dots....?.....weak closer sorry i don like....it....gonna go with gametime on this one nice punches off of the aim quotes though...16/20 hit up one of the many slept on.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111163 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111150 ^up in Frontlines.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111170 ^topical in Elevated......peace |
Oh come on man.
I would've payed you double what Game payed you. Lol. ;) Uppin again. |
Oh yea. And if your kinda not sure on a few lines, I meant on line 2 that his only hopes is d/r, so to squash his hopes, i'd havta sit on his dick. Get it.
Also, when I said he went back to my first battle...thats where he got that quote from. The first one he used. Shouldnt have to do this, but herbs these days are. So herbish. :) |
quick vote coz i gotta go somewhere but basically i think young p just pulled it off.. by a hair... gametime came good for a newb but young p managed to just edge it with the quoteable line flip........ but young p for pitys sake PLEASE SORT OUT YOUR STRUCTURE.. your lines are as stretched as fat kids on bungee ropes fortunatly your punches were just good enough to take this.. JUST... next time you may not be so lucky.....
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Thanks for the advice and vote Com.
................................................. Out for now... |
...these Very Strong words from such a Young White Boy..
their Goes your End..career folds to that Quotes Extent u Had a Chance to Swing back... .................................till u Chose to Garment a Dress check P's Battles..he's truly Taken on that Feeding Touch.. nah...most of this dont rhyme...It's not very hard hitting at all You're right.... ......U don't Really suck but You Sure Do Eat a Bunch.. I searched and searched to see if Kid was Worthy to Throw Down Discovered his Signature Move... .....................................When no Skill was Found.... aight, the end of this was ok So all in all...I guess He gon' Drop some Shit to Try to Match.. I'll be waitin on his Verse... .............................Till he gets his Hand Out that Rhino's Ass.. Now Thats diggin deep..So take ya Precious Time with No Rush.. so "Drop when your ready" and Uhh......"Good Luck"...-Young P wasn't feeling the rhino line....not really feeling the closer either I just wasn't feeling much of this verse. Weird rhyme scheme, weird structure, and not very hard hitting punches. Game doesn't even return favors anymore, like he got an easy dickride pass. So when I said I'll squash ya hopes, I shoulda expected a poke in the ass! nope I'm scared. This is one time I might not even be able to match Game's shit. Cause I asked him about his structure... nasisthebestever: ? .................................................. .....And even he couldn't explain it!! slight smile...this was aight You lame with those rymes, no position, so ...dick... you tend to straddle. Told him to search for real skill... And he went back to my first battle!! ok, this was cool And to think that I almost mistook you for a member of Deja Vu... Not because of your talent... nasisthebestever: my first verse ever was gayness! ....................And damn, you didn't think that your last one was too?! this was eeh, the streched lines and structure softened the punch...Could have been alot better This is your fault, right?, cause you planned to battle me, it's a due stop. Its not just RB, even your avatar wasnt lookin forward to what u dropped! nah, this is just a flip on the line that .:K:. used on Wise Ways I don't search for my disses, so I was suprised to find this with my luck... Now I'm letting everyone in on the big secret, it's true... .................................................. ...................GAMETIME SUCKS!! wack this had a couple decent punches...a couple nice concepts that should have been used better though.Also hade that weird structure. I've gotta go with P on this one, for better punches and concepts Vote: P Please drop an honest vote here: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111341 -W1 |
Cool. Some weird feedback, but nevertheless, thank you for the vote.
Upping again. Do people not see this or something? And damn. Panthers lost superbowl. Aint that some shit. |
i dont bitch young ...but Com's vote is a piece of shit...i mean..
why would he vote if he in a hurry?...ima have to IR this |
You Set yaself up from the Very Beginning to get Destroyed
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...these Very Strong words from such a Young White Boy.. ---meh this was weak their Goes your End..career folds to that Quotes Extent u Had a Chance to Swing back... .................................till u Chose to Garment a Dress ---decent your wording sucks though check P's Battles..he's truly Taken on that Feeding Touch.. Quote: Originally Posted by Young P So I Am Voting For Chrit, And No I Am Not "DOWN WIT HIM SUCKIN HIS DICK"... I Eat His Asscrack Out... You're right.... ......U don't Really suck but You Sure Do Eat a Bunch.. ---nope I searched and searched to see if Kid was Worthy to Throw Down Discovered his Signature Move... .....................................When no Skill was Found.... ---nice flip So all in all...I guess He gon' Drop some Shit to Try to Match.. I'll be waitin on his Verse... .............................Till he gets his Hand Out that Rhino's Ass.. ---ok Now Thats diggin deep..So take ya Precious Time with No Rush.. so "Drop when your ready" and Uhh......"Good Luck"...-Young P ---how is this dissing him??? Game doesn't even return favors anymore, like he got an easy dickride pass. So when I said I'll squash ya hopes, I shoulda expected a poke in the ass! ---played wack I'm scared. This is one time I might not even be able to match Game's shit. Cause I asked him about his structure... nasisthebestever: ? .................................................. .....And even he couldn't explain it!! ---this is by far the stupidest personal i have ever seen You lame with those rymes, no position, so ...dick... you tend to straddle. Told him to search for real skill... And he went back to my first battle!! ---so?? And to think that I almost mistook you for a member of Deja Vu... Not because of your talent... nasisthebestever: my first verse ever was gayness! ....................And damn, you didn't think that your last one was too?! ---nope This is your fault, right?, cause you planned to battle me, it's a due stop. Its not just RB, even your avatar wasnt lookin forward to what u dropped! ---lol finnally yay decent bar! I don't search for my disses, so I was suprised to find this with my luck... Now I'm letting everyone in on the big secret, it's true... .................................................. ...................GAMETIME SUCKS!! ---fucking garbage... gametime...your wording sucks a dick and a half...but you seem like you got good punches behind all of your wackness...keep an eye on your structure young p...your structure is horrible...those aim punches blowed basically you had one good bar and the rest were garbage and did not say shit...the only reason you lost is because you beat yourself... vote G now i want both you pussys to hit this up :) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110827 |
^I officially consider u an arrogant piece of shit....One
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Wishes he was good^ |
vote #3
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Ok.......
Waiting on votes guys.......... Please? |
V/Gametime
Young -- I liked your creativity w/ the punches, seen a few familiar concepts but you flipped them quite well. your punches were creative but nuttin worthy of wow!! overall your flow hurt you here coz i had to pick it up a lotta the time Gametime--Structure works for some but not for you..the quotes took me off balance sometimes n once again i had to pick up the verse again but your punches were well thought of and some had potential to hit really hard. jus concentrate on that more than structure pz P.S----COM does vote for P in nearly all battles he's having l8ly I'll be watchin it out for anymore pz |
LOL^.
*Searches COM's last ten pages. 3 of my battles. Woot woot. |
Game... you got skillz, punches were good but the ugly structure fucked it all up for me. That shit was a task to read... not enjoyable when I have to study the damn thing... still a good drop, just not quite enough... really close though
P, you came dope as usual... I swear I'm gonna find out who ghosts for you LMAO but you took this hands down with consistant, albeit somewhat played, punches. vote - p yall hit up my shit with Lyric in this forum. pz -edited to correct a misspell |
You Set yaself up from the Very Beginning to get Destroyed
Hence.. Quote: Originally Posted by Young P Fuck dat...i didnt bite nuttin nigga!....................................... ...these Very Strong words from such a Young White Boy.. ok, not too powerful tho their Goes your End..career folds to that Quotes Extent u Had a Chance to Swing back... .................................till u Chose to Garment a Dress ok check P's Battles..he's truly Taken on that Feeding Touch.. Quote: Originally Posted by Young P So I Am Voting For Chrit, And No I Am Not "DOWN WIT HIM SUCKIN HIS DICK"... I Eat His Asscrack Out... You're right.... ......U don't Really suck but You Sure Do Eat a Bunch.. lol nice I searched and searched to see if Kid was Worthy to Throw Down Discovered his Signature Move... .....................................When no Skill was Found.... ehh ok So all in all...I guess He gon' Drop some Shit to Try to Match.. I'll be waitin on his Verse... .............................Till he gets his Hand Out that Rhino's Ass.. lol ok personal Now Thats diggin deep..So take ya Precious Time with No Rush.. so "Drop when your ready" and Uhh......"Good Luck"...-Young P kinda a weak closer Game doesn't even return favors anymore, like he got an easy dickride pass. So when I said I'll squash ya hopes, I shoulda expected a poke in the ass! lol I'm scared. This is one time I might not even be able to match Game's shit. Cause I asked him about his structure... nasisthebestever: ? .................................................. .....And even he couldn't explain it!! nice You lame with those rymes, no position, so ...dick... you tend to straddle. Told him to search for real skill... And he went back to my first battle!! ehh ok And to think that I almost mistook you for a member of Deja Vu... Not because of your talent... nasisthebestever: my first verse ever was gayness! ....................And damn, you didn't think that your last one was too?! lol nice This is your fault, right?, cause you planned to battle me, it's a due stop. Its not just RB, even your avatar wasnt lookin forward to what u dropped! ok I don't search for my disses, so I was suprised to find this with my luck... Now I'm letting everyone in on the big secret, it's true... .................................................. ...................GAMETIME SUCKS!! played, but still gave me a laugh I have to go with young P ion this one. He jus came with mad personals that had me rollin. Game came wit too many played lines and didn't hit hard on some of his punches. Please drop an honest vote here guys. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112157 |
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Lol. Damn man, I told you already. It's a combination of the lines Feeble, Walter, and Av don't use. One more vote? *I'll get at your battle Lyric/Spit |
this was a nice battle
game-u came with a nice verse u had some good punches and personals...and u used those quotes very well...also u had some nice creativity....good verse....8/10 young-u also came wit a nice ass verse....your punches connected well and u had some nice personals...this was a good verse....i really felt your punches connected well......tight verse...9/10 vote/young......this was very close....both of u had some nice personals and punches...game u came wit a nice verse but i feel P just out punched u by a hair....that is why my vote goes to him......but this was a nice ass battle props to both |
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