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GameTime 3 37.50%
Young P 5 62.50%
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Old 01-30-04, 03:56 PM   #1
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Young P vs Game Time

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Aight like I said before.

Around 10 Lines. I'll match you.

Or w/e. Just don't go overboard.

Drop when your ready.

Good luck.
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Old 01-30-04, 04:26 PM   #2
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well im just checkin in...i'll drop whenever i sit and key..late
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Old 01-31-04, 03:56 AM   #3
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blah......


You Set yaself up from the Very Beginning to get Destroyed
Hence..
Quote:
Originally Posted by Young P
Fuck dat...i didnt bite nuttin
nigga!.......................................

...these Very Strong words from such a Young White Boy..
their Goes your End..career folds to that Quotes Extent
u Had a Chance to Swing back...
.................................till u Chose to Garment a Dress
check P's Battles..he's truly Taken on that Feeding Touch..
Quote:
Originally Posted by Young P
So I Am Voting For Chrit, And No I Am Not "DOWN WIT HIM SUCKIN HIS DICK"...

I Eat His Asscrack Out...

You're right....
......U don't Really suck but You Sure Do Eat a Bunch..
I searched and searched to see if Kid was Worthy to Throw Down
Discovered his Signature Move...
.....................................When no Skill was Found....
So all in all...I guess He gon' Drop some Shit to Try to Match..
I'll be waitin on his Verse...
.............................Till he gets his Hand Out that Rhino's Ass..
Now Thats diggin deep..So take ya Precious Time with No Rush..
so "Drop when your ready" and Uhh......"Good Luck"...-Young P



If You Don't Understand Don't Vote
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Old 01-31-04, 08:16 PM   #4
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I don't understand that first quote. Where'd you get that from?

Well I mine as well just ask you on AIM. I'm doing that right now.

I'll drop in a bit.
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Old 01-31-04, 08:19 PM   #5
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Is this a battle? Game Time Only about two of your lines ryhmed it sounded like you were just talkin Get off God Son's Dick and create your own style.
 
Old 01-31-04, 08:30 PM   #6
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the quote is real....

and goodbye art official....
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Old 01-31-04, 09:14 PM   #7
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damn...the beauty of dropping second..your whole game-plan changed didnt it..
drop...soon please
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Old 01-31-04, 09:16 PM   #8
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Bye GameTime. *Waves*

Game doesn't even return favors anymore, like he got an easy dickride pass.
So when I said I'll squash ya hopes, I shoulda expected a poke in the ass!
I'm scared. This is one time I might not even be able to match Game's shit.
Cause I asked him about his structure...

nasisthebestever: ?

.................................................. .....And even he couldn't explain it!!
You lame with those rymes, no position, so ...dick... you tend to straddle.
Told him to search for real skill... And he went back to my first battle!!
And to think that I almost mistook you for a member of Deja Vu...
Not because of your talent...

nasisthebestever: my first verse ever was gayness!

....................And damn, you didn't think that your last one was too?!
This is your fault, right?, cause you planned to battle me, it's a due stop.
Its not just RB, even your avatar wasnt lookin forward to what u dropped!
I don't search for my disses, so I was suprised to find this with my luck...
Now I'm letting everyone in on the big secret, it's true...
.................................................. ...................GAMETIME SUCKS!!

Last edited by Young P : 01-31-04 at 09:18 PM. Reason: Fucked One Line Up...
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Old 01-31-04, 10:57 PM   #9
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Vote you fucking fuckers.

Special fuck you to feeble for warning me.

Asshole.

Lol.

But he's at 100%, im at 73%!
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Old 01-31-04, 11:30 PM   #10
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You Set yaself up from the Very Beginning to get Destroyed
Hence..
Quote:
Originally Posted by Young P

Fuck dat...i didnt bite nuttin
nigga!.......................................


...these Very Strong words from such a Young White Boy..
their Goes your End..career folds to that Quotes Extent
^good use of a quote....get him on some eminem type shit...
u Had a Chance to Swing back...
.................................till u Chose to Garment a Dress
check P's Battles..he's truly Taken on that Feeding Touch..
Quote:
Originally Posted by Young P

So I Am Voting For Chrit, And No I Am Not "DOWN WIT HIM SUCKIN HIS DICK"...

I Eat His Asscrack Out...


You're right....
......U don't Really suck but You Sure Do Eat a Bunch..
^well this was an intrestin quote but the punch was pretty weak...
I searched and searched to see if Kid was Worthy to Throw Down
Discovered his Signature Move...
.....................................When no Skill was Found....
^i like it lots of dots^eheheheh
So all in all...I guess He gon' Drop some Shit to Try to Match..
I'll be waitin on his Verse...
.............................Till he gets his Hand Out that Rhino's Ass..
^play off the avy its all good....Ok punch
Now Thats diggin deep..So take ya Precious Time with No Rush..
so "Drop when your ready" and Uhh......"Good Luck"...-Young P
^ok closer....another quote type thing....lol to the man who said his shit didn't rhyme... 17/20



Game doesn't even return favors anymore, like he got an easy dickride pass.
So when I said I'll squash ya hopes, I shoulda expected a poke in the ass!
^meh.....you coulda opened better
I'm scared. This is one time I might not even be able to match Game's shit.
Cause I asked him about his structure...

nasisthebestever: ?

.................................................. .....And even he couldn't explain it!!
^hehe nice punch.....good stuff bitch move to use the aim convo though
You lame with those rymes, no position, so ...dick... you tend to straddle.
Told him to search for real skill... And he went back to my first battle!!
^hmm.....i didn't like it............
And to think that I almost mistook you for a member of Deja Vu...
Not because of your talent...

nasisthebestever: my first verse ever was gayness!

....................And damn, you didn't think that your last one was too?!
^nice punches off of the quotes.....still abitch move...
This is your fault, right?, cause you planned to battle me, it's a due stop.
Its not just RB, even your avatar wasnt lookin forward to what u dropped!
^meh this is like the punch in LLL rearranged....create son create......
I don't search for my disses, so I was suprised to find this with my luck...
Now I'm letting everyone in on the big secret, it's true...
.................................................. ...................GAMETIME SUCKS!!
^lol ok enough dots....?.....weak closer sorry i don like....it....gonna go with gametime on this one nice punches off of the aim quotes though...16/20

hit up one of the many slept on....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111163
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111150
^up in Frontlines....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111170
^topical in Elevated......peace
 
Old 02-01-04, 12:15 PM   #11
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Oh come on man.

I would've payed you double what Game payed you.

Lol.



Uppin again.
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Old 02-01-04, 12:35 PM   #12
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Oh yea. And if your kinda not sure on a few lines, I meant on line 2 that his only hopes is d/r, so to squash his hopes, i'd havta sit on his dick. Get it.

Also, when I said he went back to my first battle...thats where he got that quote from.
The first one he used.

Shouldnt have to do this, but herbs these days are.

So herbish.

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Old 02-01-04, 12:39 PM   #13
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quick vote coz i gotta go somewhere but basically i think young p just pulled it off.. by a hair... gametime came good for a newb but young p managed to just edge it with the quoteable line flip........ but young p for pitys sake PLEASE SORT OUT YOUR STRUCTURE.. your lines are as stretched as fat kids on bungee ropes fortunatly your punches were just good enough to take this.. JUST... next time you may not be so lucky.....
 
Old 02-01-04, 12:43 PM   #14
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Thanks for the advice and vote Com.

.................................................

Out for now...
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Old 02-01-04, 06:25 PM   #15
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...these Very Strong words from such a Young White Boy..
their Goes your End..career folds to that Quotes Extent
u Had a Chance to Swing back...
.................................till u Chose to Garment a Dress
check P's Battles..he's truly Taken on that Feeding Touch..
nah...most of this dont rhyme...It's not very hard hitting at all
You're right....
......U don't Really suck but You Sure Do Eat a Bunch..
I searched and searched to see if Kid was Worthy to Throw Down
Discovered his Signature Move...
.....................................When no Skill was Found....
aight, the end of this was ok
So all in all...I guess He gon' Drop some Shit to Try to Match..
I'll be waitin on his Verse...
.............................Till he gets his Hand Out that Rhino's Ass..
Now Thats diggin deep..So take ya Precious Time with No Rush..
so "Drop when your ready" and Uhh......"Good Luck"...-Young P
wasn't feeling the rhino line....not really feeling the closer either

I just wasn't feeling much of this verse. Weird rhyme scheme, weird structure, and not very hard hitting punches.


Game doesn't even return favors anymore, like he got an easy dickride pass.
So when I said I'll squash ya hopes, I shoulda expected a poke in the ass!
nope
I'm scared. This is one time I might not even be able to match Game's shit.
Cause I asked him about his structure...

nasisthebestever: ?

.................................................. .....And even he couldn't explain it!!
slight smile...this was aight
You lame with those rymes, no position, so ...dick... you tend to straddle.
Told him to search for real skill... And he went back to my first battle!!
ok, this was cool
And to think that I almost mistook you for a member of Deja Vu...
Not because of your talent...

nasisthebestever: my first verse ever was gayness!

....................And damn, you didn't think that your last one was too?!
this was eeh, the streched lines and structure softened the punch...Could have been alot better
This is your fault, right?, cause you planned to battle me, it's a due stop.
Its not just RB, even your avatar wasnt lookin forward to what u dropped!
nah, this is just a flip on the line that .:K:. used on Wise Ways
I don't search for my disses, so I was suprised to find this with my luck...
Now I'm letting everyone in on the big secret, it's true...
.................................................. ...................GAMETIME SUCKS!!
wack

this had a couple decent punches...a couple nice concepts that should have been used better though.Also hade that weird structure.

I've gotta go with P on this one, for better punches and concepts

Vote: P


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