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Art Official -|[v]|- Lethal
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10-18 lines no crew, d/r, hate, etc. votes you spit first i guess... check in... my check... peace... |
You say you lethal injection, I'll Give you a sexually transmitted infection/
Cuz I spit sick shit like a HIV Dick./ That's Why Im no one to fuck wit. (Get It?) You Ran Into Me, So you ran outta luck quick. Yo Ryhme style simple like One Two Buckle My Shoe. I Stay wit the lyrical .22 Buckin you punk foo's Dont Trip if My Bars Aint Right, Cuz All da RB voters know my flow still tight. And Even Tho Im just gettin my feet wet/ Ill still drown you in your vaginal fluids/ And keep a steady motion like pussy when I get into it/ Im like a veteran, Cuz theres no one i aint better than/ Four Year starter,and this rap shit is what im letterin' In. |
Sup Cuddy dis is nelly that shit was WACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!......naw jus fuckin it was koo
i wanna see what he says |
Man this nigga need to hurry up man how you gon need 24 hours to write 10 lines
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..|Murded ^ 101|..
Check..1..2.. Here It Goes.. Looks Like Art Official Is Trying To Diss An Elite..| But, I'm The One Who Slays Fake Ass Emcees..||* Aint Gotta Say Much Cause This Bitch Isnt Worth It..| Claimin He Can Spit, But Actually His Rhyme Was Shit..|| Has Three Open Battles, But Still Aint Elevatin..| Gonna Be 0-3, Cause You Cant Earn A Win..|| Joined On The 31st And Has 17 Posts A Day..| Gotta Another Damn Herb From Californ-yay..|| Art Aint Play Lethal Like An Un-Plugged Radio..| Lethal vs Art, Year 2000 And 4, Also Our Voting Ratio..|| Callin Me Whack Bitch! But To My Game Your No Where Near..| Watch Me Drop This Canadian Sin Like Catholic Mountaneers..|| eh.. wasnt worth a real battle... * - check his occupation |
Breakdown
Art's Verse You say you lethal injection, I'll Give you a sexually transmitted infection/ Cuz I spit sick shit like a HIV Dick./ Wack Opener That's Why Im no one to fuck wit. (Get It?) You Ran Into Me, So you ran outta luck quick. Another Wack Line Yo Ryhme style simple like One Two Buckle My Shoe. I Stay wit the lyrical .22 Buckin you punk foo's .........Followed by another wack line Dont Trip if My Bars Aint Right, Cuz All da RB voters know my flow still tight. And Even Tho Im just gettin my feet wet/ No Flow on these lines Ill still drown you in your vaginal fluids/ And keep a steady motion like pussy when I get into it/ Blah Im like a veteran, Cuz theres no one i aint better than/ Four Year starter,and this rap shit is what im letterin' In. Best Line of the Whole Verse Lethal's Verse, Looks Like Art Official Is Trying To Diss An Elite..| But, I'm The One Who Slays Fake Ass Emcees..||* Wack Opener Aint Gotta Say Much Cause This Bitch Isnt Worth It..| Claimin He Can Spit, But Actually His Rhyme Was Shit..|| Another Wack Bar Has Three Open Battles, But Still Aint Elevatin..| Gonna Be 0-3, Cause You Cant Earn A Win..|| Blah Joined On The 31st And Has 17 Posts A Day..| Gotta Another Damn Herb From Californ-yay..|| Wack Art Aint Play Lethal Like An Un-Plugged Radio..| Lethal vs Art, Year 2000 And 4, Also Our Voting Ratio..|| That's more like it, pretty nice Callin Me Whack Bitch! But To My Game Your No Where Near..| Watch Me Drop This Canadian Sin Like Catholic Mountaneers..|| Dope Finisher My vote goes to Lethal. Both emcees came wit wacked out verses but the two punchlines at the end of Lethal's verse got him the win. You guys really need to elevate. *Constructive Criticism* POLL VOTE ON MY BATTLE http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?p=1143453 |
thanx for the vote... uppin number one for some POLL votes... oh, drop a link AFTER YOU POLL and ill hit it up...
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lethalz verse was better all around.he had better punches, flo, metaphors, structure.
His closure was hard tho. art official was stright just need some elevatin can yall hit this up: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111056 |
Lethal took most catergorys with relative ease..
Better punches, flow and creativity.. some tight lines.. but also some wack ones.. Art.. the structure was seriously lacking.. tey and get all the bars the same length kinda... punches were hardly connecting... few good attempts but nothing that stood out and impressed... Overall.. weak battle.. but for the creativity.. of the one bar even.. Vote - Lethal |
aight... uppin numero dos for some poll votes... drop a link and ill hit it up... peace
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Uppin for votes. Take into consideration that I dropped my verse within 15 min. and Lethal slept on his shit and didn't post till the next morningl. Anyhow my first real battle since joining I made the mistake of not coming as hard as i should. What the fuck does he mean "by herb"
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ay Art Official had this battle by a long run. Lethals style was wack i couldnt even understand half his shit cuz he doesnt explain it atleast Art's shit was clean and understandable. Lethals rhymes were elementarty (literally). lethal won this purely by luck cuz he sorry.
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i wish those voted would count but i dont see how official had it by a long run, but oh well. this is the third uppin FOR SOME POLL VOTES! NO POSTS WITH PEOPLE UNDER 100+ POSTS!!!!!
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One two buckle my shoe....
Guess who's wack... Official It's YOU... ne ways....^^couldnt resist^^ Lethal Merked the Kid... Even tho He's a Bitch an DQ'd me after I 5-0'd him for 6 Up's... Lethal had alot better meti4's and punches.... There wasnt much else to go off in here, neither had flo... So I guess thats basicly thats all I can really say here... Both Elevate.... Punches won this one... vote - Lethal |
My vote goes to Lethal Injectionz, Art had the cheek to say mt rhymes were shyt when his ent better. Soz dude, don't mean to hate, but check yourself.
Vote = Lethal Injectionz. Easy Win Bruh. Can peeps check my shit please? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...202#post1145202 |
My vote goes to Lethal because he ate Art's whole verse with a half assed battle. Lethal had the better Flow,metas,punches pretty much everything.Art's structure was fucked up cause his lines werent long enough and his bars came way to simple. if Art put more effort into his punches he might of had a better chance of not losing so bad.
VOTE_LETHAL Open Battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111055 |
bITCH ASS, REMIXX LEARN HOW TO FUCKIN SPELL NO WONDER YOUR RYHMES SOUND LIKE A KINDERGARTNER TYPED THEM.
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uppin number 4 for 1 MORE VOTE!!! please just one more vote, ill hit ur battles up..
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dude....how the hell? lol...I don't know either of you, but really I think a lot of people are voting on structure...Lethal Injectionz had a pretty looking verse with good structure but it was wack as hell....I mean, a lot of lines barely rhymed...I can't stand when people rhyme to words that have like 3 syllables, but the only part that rhymes is the last syllable....such as "elevatin" and "earn a win".....that doesn't really even rhyme..neither does Emcee and Elite....Lethal didn't have punches either...atleast none that I saw...+ his vocab was just as low as Arts...
Art had a pretty weak verse too...but he atleast had decent rhymes at some parts...n a few semi-punchlines...altho most of his punches were played he atleast had them... my vote goes to Art Official, and to me it seems one sided.... vote- Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...359#post1145359 can someone hit this up for me? shit's been open for like 2 weeks and I'm up 1-0...that's pretty fucking gay.. peace |
vote = lethal - got the lethal + mic = illness shit right..
No Hate on Art - Cheers for the Vote... |
art official - structure was ok at times........flow fell off........vocab was pretty basic.........multis were pretty wack.......poor attempt at wordplay.........most of the punches missed by a gigantic portion..........no personals........best bar -
Im like a veteran, Cuz theres no one i aint better than/ Four Year starter,and this rap shit is what im letterin' In. lethalnjectionz - structure was good........flow was on target........vocab was ok........some of the multis were aight.........wordplay was good at times.........some of the punches hit hard........ok personal........best bar - Callin Me Whack Bitch! But To My Game Your No Where Near..| Watch Me Drop This Canadian Sin Like Catholic Mountaneers..|| conclusion - lethalnjectionz takes this in structure, flow, wordplay, punches, and personals so he gets my vote......... VOTE - LETHALNJECTIONZ yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion id appreciate if u two did the same........ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110019 thanx........ |
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