-|[RuleZ]|-

10-18 lines

no crew, d/r, hate, etc. votes

you spit first i guess...

check in...

my check...

peace...

You say you lethal injection, I'll Give you a sexually transmitted infection/
Cuz I spit sick shit like a HIV Dick./
That's Why Im no one to fuck wit. (Get It?)
You Ran Into Me, So you ran outta luck quick.
Yo Ryhme style simple like One Two Buckle My Shoe.
I Stay wit the lyrical .22 Buckin you punk foo's
Dont Trip if My Bars Aint Right, Cuz All da RB voters know my flow still tight.
And Even Tho Im just gettin my feet wet/
Ill still drown you in your vaginal fluids/
And keep a steady motion like pussy when I get into it/
Im like a veteran, Cuz theres no one i aint better than/
Four Year starter,and this rap shit is what im letterin' In.

Sup Cuddy dis is nelly that shit was WACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!......naw jus fuckin it was koo
i wanna see what he says

Man this nigga need to hurry up man how you gon need 24 hours to write 10 lines

..|Murded ^ 101|..

Check..1..2..
Here It Goes..

Looks Like Art Official Is Trying To Diss An Elite..|
But, I'm The One Who Slays Fake Ass Emcees..||*
Aint Gotta Say Much Cause This Bitch Isnt Worth It..|
Claimin He Can Spit, But Actually His Rhyme Was Shit..||
Has Three Open Battles, But Still Aint Elevatin..|
Gonna Be 0-3, Cause You Cant Earn A Win..||
Joined On The 31st And Has 17 Posts A Day..|
Gotta Another Damn Herb From Californ-yay..||
Art Aint Play Lethal Like An Un-Plugged Radio..|
Lethal vs Art, Year 2000 And 4, Also Our Voting Ratio..||
Callin Me Whack Bitch! But To My Game Your No Where Near..|
Watch Me Drop This Canadian Sin Like Catholic Mountaneers..||

eh.. wasnt worth a real battle...

* - check his occupation

Breakdown

Art's Verse
You say you lethal injection, I'll Give you a sexually transmitted infection/
Cuz I spit sick shit like a HIV Dick./
Wack Opener

That's Why Im no one to fuck wit. (Get It?)
You Ran Into Me, So you ran outta luck quick.
Another Wack Line

Yo Ryhme style simple like One Two Buckle My Shoe.
I Stay wit the lyrical .22 Buckin you punk foo's
.........Followed by another wack line

Dont Trip if My Bars Aint Right, Cuz All da RB voters know my flow still tight.
And Even Tho Im just gettin my feet wet/
No Flow on these lines

Ill still drown you in your vaginal fluids/
And keep a steady motion like pussy when I get into it/
Blah

Im like a veteran, Cuz theres no one i aint better than/
Four Year starter,and this rap shit is what im letterin' In.
Best Line of the Whole Verse


Lethal's Verse,
Looks Like Art Official Is Trying To Diss An Elite..|
But, I'm The One Who Slays Fake Ass Emcees..||*
Wack Opener

Aint Gotta Say Much Cause This Bitch Isnt Worth It..|
Claimin He Can Spit, But Actually His Rhyme Was Shit..||
Another Wack Bar

Has Three Open Battles, But Still Aint Elevatin..|
Gonna Be 0-3, Cause You Cant Earn A Win..||
Blah

Joined On The 31st And Has 17 Posts A Day..|
Gotta Another Damn Herb From Californ-yay..||
Wack

Art Aint Play Lethal Like An Un-Plugged Radio..|
Lethal vs Art, Year 2000 And 4, Also Our Voting Ratio..||
That's more like it, pretty nice

Callin Me Whack Bitch! But To My Game Your No Where Near..|
Watch Me Drop This Canadian Sin Like Catholic Mountaneers..||
Dope Finisher


My vote goes to Lethal. Both emcees came wit wacked out verses but the two punchlines at the end of Lethal's verse got him the win. You guys really need to elevate. *Constructive Criticism*


POLL VOTE ON MY BATTLE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?p=1143453

thanx for the vote... uppin number one for some POLL votes... oh, drop a link AFTER YOU POLL and ill hit it up...

lethalz verse was better all around.he had better punches, flo, metaphors, structure.
His closure was hard tho.

art official was stright just need some elevatin

can yall hit this up:


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111056

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IM UNSTOPPABLE
LIKE 50 IM UNPOPPABLE/
ILL PUT MORE WOOD IN YA GIRLS MOUTH THAN A POPSICKLE/

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Lethal took most catergorys with relative ease..

Better punches, flow and creativity.. some tight lines.. but also some wack ones..
Art.. the structure was seriously lacking.. tey and get all the bars the same length kinda... punches were hardly connecting... few good attempts but nothing that stood out and impressed...
Overall.. weak battle.. but for the creativity.. of the one bar even..

Vote - Lethal

aight... uppin numero dos for some poll votes... drop a link and ill hit it up... peace

Uppin for votes. Take into consideration that I dropped my verse within 15 min. and Lethal slept on his shit and didn't post till the next morningl. Anyhow my first real battle since joining I made the mistake of not coming as hard as i should. What the fuck does he mean "by herb"

ay Art Official had this battle by a long run. Lethals style was wack i couldnt even understand half his shit cuz he doesnt explain it atleast Art's shit was clean and understandable. Lethals rhymes were elementarty (literally). lethal won this purely by luck cuz he sorry.

i wish those voted would count but i dont see how official had it by a long run, but oh well. this is the third uppin FOR SOME POLL VOTES! NO POSTS WITH PEOPLE UNDER 100+ POSTS!!!!!

One two buckle my shoe....
Guess who's wack...
Official It's YOU...

ne ways....^^couldnt resist^^
Lethal Merked the Kid...
Even tho He's a Bitch an DQ'd me after I 5-0'd him for 6 Up's...

Lethal had alot better meti4's and punches....
There wasnt much else to go off in here, neither had flo...
So I guess thats basicly thats all I can really say here...
Both Elevate....
Punches won this one...

vote - Lethal