Weapon MC vs. Mentality
 

10-16 lines
Due 12 am tomorrow
No hate, crew, D/R votes
No feeding (wouldn't be fair)
Good luck

u might wanna make this a battle thread if u want any votes for it

sorry, when i checked this, it was a regular post

aight checkin in to this and i will drop soon
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yo cant drop tonight but will drop tomorrow as soon as i get home from school

sorry just ran out of time tonight

OK, I'm here to check in, even though it's late. Time to get this show on da road.

aight ima drop soon.....i was waitin for you to check into this

gl

Battlin me haha, you aint dropin dimes, you must of lost the loot
Cuz everybody knows this kid bites more than an inexperienced prostitute
It dont take me spittin on boats to get you to see sinkness
You be dickless, when i have you screamin like Dj’s doin Remixes
Kid does text, cuz his voice is horse from saddlin dicks, leave you afraid of battlin hicks
Cuz i’ll throw baby toys down your throat just to rattle your spits
Got a low record so dont be boastin bee, when im the one toastin g’s
Cuz only time he's readin ill shit in his post is when you quotin’ me
I’ll be stoned in this battle, while you try to rock this
But you cant pull off a win like dysfunctional fry boxes
You couldn't touch me, even if you gave me a back rub, just watch me attack scrubs
Kid's like a mom overstuffin kid‘s with dessert, you know he packs fudge
Like new electricians i’ll spark your keys leave you in tha dark with these
You’ll end up with cuts on your face, to match the ones on your knees

u just got ripped
sorry but thats the way it goes

E-yo, u think u can defeat me but ur in the wrong Mentality
There's a place where I merk all wack bitches; it's called reality
As I roll thru Rapbattles I attract all the wack bitches hate
Cause I'm the Lethal Weapon, the enemy of ur mental state
This nigga has no avy cause he can't express his wackness
Battlin' this faggot Mentality is an insult to my blackness
You call yourself a free agent but you never played a minute
Hype over ur battle with Flash, here u thought u could win it
Battlin' Weapon was a bad chess move for an army of pawns
The strength of my punches will never let ya see the dawn
I spit crazy heat like volcano fire, torching ur pre-written page
With a newborn rage, I kick your ass and take over the stage
Get your wack ass up outta here cause this site is for real
It's not a place for a little retard on lyrical training wheels
Stupid dumbass, tryin' to ride in RB; you can't even steer
Just give up, cause your show was over before the premiere.

Later

Hey, there are some kinda codes to get battle links in ur sig, right? Yo Mentality, can you tell me what they are? Thanks. Okay, good battle. Uppin #1

Mentality took this...

he had good rhymes....not too great flow....a few nice punchlines...I liked these lines from Mentality..



^ nice opener....



^ it seems like I've seen that line before, but I'm not sure...either way I like that...

overall ur verse was pretty strong...stayed consistent with the rhymes, n the punches stayed decent throughout...

Weapon MC...your verse had a nice flow to it..and decent rhymes...but ur punches weren't even close...and ur rhymes weren't even too close to Mentalitys.....this was kinda one sided in my opinion...

vote- Mentality

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111721

^ hit that up with some votes yo..

peace

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style-mental
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wordplay-weapon
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personals-tie
overall-mental

I think mental came with a strong flow, and some ok witty punches. while weapon had an ok flow too, but not many strong punches, couple aight ones and an aight ender. But mental's punches were more advanced. i see potential in weapon though, just needa work on the punches, fix the style a lilttle...nah mean vote-mental

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Yo, Mentality, what are those codes? I wanna get it in my sig the way you got it there. Please tell me. Uppin #3

ayo

both had the same flow, multies and punches go to mentality, structure goes ta weapon mc because his was mostly the same amount of letters each time makin it easier ta read, but over all i think this has ta go to mentality as his was more creative

vote - mentality

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vote just dont look faggots

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Uppin #5

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u people suck at voting
seriously....

drop a link

ok this was a pretty good battle

mentality had some good shit
but weapon also had some good shit

it was a very close battle but

mentality had the flow ..lines were long but thats aight cuz ur punches hit very hard
i like the line about the baby toys...that was hott
i liked ur flow and ur punches and personals

weapon had a good verse but it didnt flow that good in my opinion
his punches were good but they werent as hgard as mentalitys

great battle but im gonna give this to mentality
i think we might have some newbs wit some talent

peace
vote mentality

mentality was good long punches that were good decent flow hard core multies loved em no personals great strutcure flowed great vocab a lil weak 1-5 sacle 4.3
now 4 wepon u are good need to elvate a lil better flow and vocab multies are week and but great personal great stutcure bad ass flow yea nigga 4.1 very fuckin close battle real my vote mentality no hate ur both good nigga 1

i need votes on thease battles i cant up no more the links in my sig please vote please

OK this was a suB wack battle........mental you had the right idea but didnt really word it like i thought i would have been done..you had ightt structuer..didnt see 1 personal...and punches were OK...........


wepon same thing but i thought your structuer was alittle better and i was feelin your verse alittle more...........you need to work on stronger punches and personals....you need to diss the person you are VSing..and not really talk about your self ion your verse this go's 4 the both of you..I can on say 1 word....ELEVATE....
but in my eyes this one go's ta weapon...............
v/weapon MC

flow-mental
--multis helped here, atta boy
style-mental
--always mixed up the rhyme schemes and the punches
punches-weapon
--"Get your wack ass up outta here cause this site is for real
It's not a place for a little retard on lyrical training wheels"--think ive heard it, but good shit
wordplay-mental
--nuf sed there, every bar had somethin intelligent in it
creativity-mental
--jus cuz of the word play
personals-weapon
overall-mental

Mental won this, because of the word play and flow, pretty much. The punches were there too, but this is where he shined. Weapon, you've gotsta switch up the schemes a bit throughout, ya hear? Good battle, peace.