10-16 lines
Due 12 am tomorrow
No hate, crew, D/R votes
No feeding (wouldn't be fair)
Good luck

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Weapon MC vs. Mentality
Weapon MC vs. killaconcepz

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u might wanna make this a battle thread if u want any votes for it

sorry, when i checked this, it was a regular post

aight checkin in to this and i will drop soon
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yo cant drop tonight but will drop tomorrow as soon as i get home from school

sorry just ran out of time tonight

OK, I'm here to check in, even though it's late. Time to get this show on da road.

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Weapon MC vs. Mentality
Weapon MC vs. killaconcepz

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aight ima drop soon.....i was waitin for you to check into this

gl

Battlin me haha, you aint dropin dimes, you must of lost the loot
Cuz everybody knows this kid bites more than an inexperienced prostitute
It dont take me spittin on boats to get you to see sinkness
You be dickless, when i have you screamin like Dj’s doin Remixes
Kid does text, cuz his voice is horse from saddlin dicks, leave you afraid of battlin hicks
Cuz i’ll throw baby toys down your throat just to rattle your spits
Got a low record so dont be boastin bee, when im the one toastin g’s
Cuz only time he's readin ill shit in his post is when you quotin’ me
I’ll be stoned in this battle, while you try to rock this
But you cant pull off a win like dysfunctional fry boxes
You couldn't touch me, even if you gave me a back rub, just watch me attack scrubs
Kid's like a mom overstuffin kid‘s with dessert, you know he packs fudge
Like new electricians i’ll spark your keys leave you in tha dark with these
You’ll end up with cuts on your face, to match the ones on your knees

u just got ripped
sorry but thats the way it goes

E-yo, u think u can defeat me but ur in the wrong Mentality
There's a place where I merk all wack bitches; it's called reality
As I roll thru Rapbattles I attract all the wack bitches hate
Cause I'm the Lethal Weapon, the enemy of ur mental state
This nigga has no avy cause he can't express his wackness
Battlin' this faggot Mentality is an insult to my blackness
You call yourself a free agent but you never played a minute
Hype over ur battle with Flash, here u thought u could win it
Battlin' Weapon was a bad chess move for an army of pawns
The strength of my punches will never let ya see the dawn
I spit crazy heat like volcano fire, torching ur pre-written page
With a newborn rage, I kick your ass and take over the stage
Get your wack ass up outta here cause this site is for real
It's not a place for a little retard on lyrical training wheels
Stupid dumbass, tryin' to ride in RB; you can't even steer
Just give up, cause your show was over before the premiere.

Later

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Weapon MC vs. Mentality
Weapon MC vs. killaconcepz

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Hey, there are some kinda codes to get battle links in ur sig, right? Yo Mentality, can you tell me what they are? Thanks. Okay, good battle. Uppin #1

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Weapon MC vs. Mentality
Weapon MC vs. killaconcepz

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Mentality took this...

he had good rhymes....not too great flow....a few nice punchlines...I liked these lines from Mentality..



^ nice opener....



^ it seems like I've seen that line before, but I'm not sure...either way I like that...

overall ur verse was pretty strong...stayed consistent with the rhymes, n the punches stayed decent throughout...

Weapon MC...your verse had a nice flow to it..and decent rhymes...but ur punches weren't even close...and ur rhymes weren't even too close to Mentalitys.....this was kinda one sided in my opinion...

vote- Mentality

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111721

^ hit that up with some votes yo..

peace

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I think mental came with a strong flow, and some ok witty punches. while weapon had an ok flow too, but not many strong punches, couple aight ones and an aight ender. But mental's punches were more advanced. i see potential in weapon though, just needa work on the punches, fix the style a lilttle...nah mean vote-mental

Uppin #2

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Weapon MC vs. killaconcepz

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