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.:K:. Vs DaIllistReBel
yo ite man,
10 lines, both spit within 30 mins, no d/r hate or crew vote, no feeding, no freeposting, ....good luck.........pz |
Yup checkin in, will post soon.................good luck
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ite check this,
little politicle hoe..won't let shit go...fucking joker, cause face it my lyrics are more cancerus.... .....................than a heavywight smoker..... don't even no who you are..if you put out some shit i havn't heard-it, a wanna be vet with guilty written all over his ass..as the verd-ict, just like your avy..youre a maybe...but really non-exsitant, and simular to a man with low sperm count... .....................your flow is inconsistent............... my verse diserve's a medel..im a thug, if your a rebel, you aint shit man ive seen harder rock..comeing from a pebble, you sucked extremes dick so much for your postion...affraid of rejection, cause rebel gets poll'ed for less than bin laden, ....................standing for election...................... .........pz |
Ok, things to know about him
Old name was "Oli Dogg" Old crew was "Central" Flow is persistent, got most wins from noobs, ur merkings are distant... He was co-leader of Central.......and so the crew went down in an INSTANT!... Ur nothing in my eyes, the loss I'll provide, this sickness is hard to revive... .:K:. wanted to beat this............but couldn't find pussy in his hardrive!... Like Schwartzinager being govenor, a win for you is an Impossible Mission... This guy is definately ahead of the pack.........running away from competition!... It's hard hittin from the start, the pains been given, constantly inflictin... "It's a shame I can't type as big as Rebel" I'll leave him adMITTEN... He claimed he was ill as Oli, "gimmie some respect" he constantly sobs... I could teach u math in this battle, but it wouldn't help even the odds... If you don't get the lines, don't vote. Good luck K.... |
.....few bits of imformation wrong...but gd battle man.good luck.............................................. ..........pz
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Upppin #1.............................. Leave a link and I'll hit it up
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Sorry guys i fucking cant vote but it would go to daillestrebel
better punch lines and sounds better |
Ummmm thanx for the feedback I guess...............
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aight i would have to go with k on this one for the simple fact that i thought that his punches connected better and hit harder
his flow and struture was better and i think he takes this i can vote but can u please hit up my battles in the sig v/k |
I dont Know Both of yall ama Break this Down In Catagory.
Punches: K Personals: ILL Wordplay: K Vocab: Ak Creative: ILL Structure ILL Overal Vote: ILL Return Fav: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=111683&page=2 (Vote Honest...Thnx) Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Token |
ok K took this one but barely and I stress Barely, ILL had some nice shit and standed out when he flowed his shit.............
Vocab and Wordplay=Tie, both came strong in this categorie and it showed in the battle it's self and I loved it...... Structure and Flow=Tie, both were using good structure and flow and both were easier to read Punches and Personals=k barely, k had nice shit and I loved his shit and it was nice use of word play along wit his punches like a regular battle set up then punch.... overall=Punches wins battles and K took this category and that gives him the win....... Vote=K Since I took time on yours k and voted honestly, please give me feed back on my battle with Venom, please cause I took time on yours, juss drop a honest vote in it, please vote, HERE IS THE LINK< VOTE http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111608 |
Ummmm I respect ur vote n everything n I'm not swayin votes, but can u explain how he took the category personals?
Anyway thanx for votin second upppppppin....... |
Uppppppppppppppppin #3.............................
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Let me first say I feel sorry to both of you for the half-ass, unexplained votes you got so far... you both deserve more than that.
Ok, .:K:.- Good Opener, surprisingly, I haven't seen that one yet, niice. You were consistant, almost every line was set up right for the punches to deliver... though a few seemed like they were below the standard. Not a bad verse at all, and until I read DaIllest's verse, I thought you had it... DaIllest - Another great Opener, the personal sting it had made it the best punch in the battle. The 'pussy in his hard drive' punch was wack, but other than that, straight fire man. The 'ahead of the pack' 'running away from competition' punch was fuckin dope. Much originality and creativity in your verse, enjoyed the read. vote goes to DaIllest, very close though, props to both. Keep it up, battles like this make voting worth it. pz |
ite coo.........thx for the feedback yall........................................uppin( 1).....pz
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little politicle hoe..won't let shit go...fucking joker, cause face it my lyrics are more cancerus.... .....................than a heavywight smoker..... not too bad, 6/10 don't even no who you are..if you put out some shit i havn't heard-it, a wanna be vet with guilty written all over his ass..as the verd-ict, agen not too bad, 5/10 just like your avy..youre a maybe...but really non-exsitant, and simular to a man with low sperm count... .....................your flow is inconsistent............... lol, nice, 7/10 my verse diserve's a medel..im a thug, if your a rebel, you aint shit man ive seen harder rock..comeing from a pebble, wording let u down here, 6/10 you sucked extremes dick so much for your postion...affraid of rejection, cause rebel gets poll'ed for less than bin laden, ....................standing for election...................... not too bad, 6/10 overall 30/50 DaIllistReBel Flow is persistent, got most wins from noobs, ur merkings are distant... He was co-leader of Central.......and so the crew went down in an INSTANT!... nice personal, 7/10 Ur nothing in my eyes, the loss I'll provide, this sickness is hard to revive... .:K:. wanted to beat this............but couldn't find pussy in his hardrive!... wtf, not hardhitting at all, 3/10 Like Schwartzinager being govenor, a win for you is an Impossible Mission... This guy is definately ahead of the pack.........running away from competition!... i thought 'Schwartzinager' was governer, any way weak, 4/10 It's hard hittin from the start, the pains been given, constantly inflictin... "It's a shame I can't type as big as Rebel" I'll leave him adMITTEN... nah, this didnt wrk, decent attempt, 4/10 He claimed he was ill as Oli, "gimmie some respect" he constantly sobs... I could teach u math in this battle, but it wouldn't help even the odds... bad wording weak punch, 4/10 i was generous, although u had a nice opener, overall 22/50 my vote .:K:. |
thx alot man......................coo...............uppin(2 )...............................pz
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K took this with the "smoker" line, the "pebble" line, and the closer...
Did Rebel fuck up that Schwarzenegger line? Cuz it isn't impossible, Arnie became governor...I'm lost. Anyway, ANYTHING MISSION IMPOSSIBLE-ISH IS PLAYED TO DEATH. Starting to see too many "Central" and "Instant" disses as well... But, I guess they were fitting, just not very original. Yet, through all that... He put out some nice lines... "Ahead of the pack" was very good and witty. The "Odds" closer was creative and nice. But, I just thought Oli had the most quotables. Even though "heard it/verdict" wasn't one of them... I did forget to mention that I liked the "inconsistent flow" line from Oli as well. More quotables, more impact, better punches. But pretty close, gentlemen. Peace |
.thx alot man..............................uppin(3)......... ..............pz
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uppin(4)............thx for the votes every1 and feedback.................................pz
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Yeaaaaa thanx for taking the time to read the verses much appreciated. Good battle K btw.
Uppin #4 |
Oh about that Schw. line since it was unclear to some. Arnold had no shot of doin well being gov. My point wasn't so much that he is governor, the fact that he wasn't g2 do well gov. was my point. Blaaaaaah w/e a poor attempt at a similie lol.
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^werd noice dogg..............uppin(5)........................ .......pz
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Flow-Tie
Structure-.:K:. had better Wordplay-Neither Punches-Tie Personals-DaIllistRebel Vocabulary-.:K:. edged it Originality-DaIllistRebel Creativity-.:K:. .:K:. I've seen you come alot harder before Your punches were decent.. some what hard hitting Personals were lacked..... wordplay was ... not really seen Honestly, i dont think you showed effort... DaIllistRebel I haven't really seen anything from you Your personals were good.... Punches were somewhat ok.. not great Wordplay was... blah... flow was good. But.. your punches didn't hit as hard as K's V/.:K:. He edged this one.. It was pretty close tho... |
little politicle hoe..won't let shit go...fucking joker,
cause face it my lyrics are more cancerus.... .....................than a heavywight smoker..... nah don't even no who you are..if you put out some shit i havn't heard-it, a wanna be vet with guilty written all over his ass..as the verd-ict, nope just like your avy..youre a maybe...but really non-exsitant, and simular to a man with low sperm count... .....................your flow is inconsistent............... cool my verse diserve's a medel..im a thug, if your a rebel, you aint shit man ive seen harder rock..comeing from a pebble, nope you sucked extremes dick so much for your postion...affraid of rejection, cause rebel gets poll'ed for less than bin laden, ....................standing for election...................... nope I've seen you come iller. This was a dissapointing verse. Flow is persistent, got most wins from noobs, ur merkings are distant... He was co-leader of Central.......and so the crew went down in an INSTANT!... cool, even though i used an istan line kinda similar on GaZeeBo Ur nothing in my eyes, the loss I'll provide, this sickness is hard to revive... .:K:. wanted to beat this............but couldn't find pussy in his hardrive!... decent flip on an old concept Like Schwartzinager being govenor, a win for you is an Impossible Mission... This guy is definately ahead of the pack.........running away from competition!... lol, nice It's hard hittin from the start, the pains been given, constantly inflictin... "It's a shame I can't type as big as Rebel" I'll leave him adMITTEN... nope He claimed he was ill as Oli, "gimmie some respect" he constantly sobs... I could teach u math in this battle, but it wouldn't help even the odds... eeeeh, ok i guess Decent verse. Pretty consistant. Some nice punches. Good job. My vote goes to ill because of better punches and consistantsy. Please return the favor...i really need votes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=111341&page=1 |
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took this with the "smoker" line, the "pebble" line, and the closer...
Did Rebel fuck up that Schwarzenegger line? Cuz it isn't impossible, Arnie became governor...I'm lost. Anyway, ANYTHING MISSION IMPOSSIBLE-ISH IS PLAYED TO DEATH. Starting to see too many "Central" and "Instant" disses as well... But, I guess they were fitting, just not very original. Yet, through all that... He put out some nice lines... "Ahead of the pack" was very good and witty. The "Odds" closer was creative and nice. But, I just thought Oli had the most quotables. Even though "heard it/verdict" wasn't one of them... I did forget to mention that I liked the "inconsistent flow" line from Oli as well. More quotables, more impact, better punches. But pretty close, gentlemen. Peace K Did u try? Lol, u had some ok lines..but i expected far more from u.. DIB Good opener..so-so from there of.. Vote goes to K for better punches & what Btk said basically. I would break this down but everything has been said really |
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