yo ite man,

10 lines,
both spit within 30 mins,
no d/r hate or crew vote,
no feeding,
no freeposting,

....good luck.........pz

Yup checkin in, will post soon.................good luck

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reppin strong, wurdshizle

ite check this,

little politicle hoe..won't let shit go...fucking joker,
cause face it my lyrics are more cancerus....
.....................than a heavywight smoker.....
don't even no who you are..if you put out some shit i havn't heard-it,
a wanna be vet with guilty written all over his ass..as the verd-ict,
just like your avy..youre a maybe...but really non-exsitant,
and simular to a man with low sperm count...
.....................your flow is inconsistent...............
my verse diserve's a medel..im a thug, if your a rebel,
you aint shit man ive seen harder rock..comeing from a pebble,
you sucked extremes dick so much for your postion...affraid of rejection,
cause rebel gets poll'ed for less than bin laden,
....................standing for election......................

.........pz

Ok, things to know about him

Old name was "Oli Dogg"
Old crew was "Central"


Flow is persistent, got most wins from noobs, ur merkings are distant...
He was co-leader of Central.......and so the crew went down in an INSTANT!...
Ur nothing in my eyes, the loss I'll provide, this sickness is hard to revive...
.:K:. wanted to beat this............but couldn't find pussy in his hardrive!...
Like Schwartzinager being govenor, a win for you is an Impossible Mission...
This guy is definately ahead of the pack.........running away from competition!...
It's hard hittin from the start, the pains been given, constantly inflictin...
"It's a shame I can't type as big as Rebel" I'll leave him adMITTEN...
He claimed he was ill as Oli, "gimmie some respect" he constantly sobs...
I could teach u math in this battle, but it wouldn't help even the odds...


If you don't get the lines, don't vote. Good luck K....

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.....few bits of imformation wrong...but gd battle man.good luck.............................................. ..........pz

Upppin #1.............................. Leave a link and I'll hit it up

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reppin strong, wurdshizle

Sorry guys i fucking cant vote but it would go to daillestrebel
better punch lines and sounds better

Ummmm thanx for the feedback I guess...............

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aight i would have to go with k on this one for the simple fact that i thought that his punches connected better and hit harder

his flow and struture was better and i think he takes this

i can vote but can u please hit up my battles in the sig

v/k

I dont Know Both of yall ama Break this Down In Catagory.

Punches: K
Personals: ILL
Wordplay: K
Vocab: Ak
Creative: ILL
Structure ILL

Overal Vote: ILL

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=111683&page=2

(Vote Honest...Thnx)

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ok K took this one but barely and I stress Barely, ILL had some nice shit and standed out when he flowed his shit.............

Vocab and Wordplay=Tie, both came strong in this categorie and it showed in the battle it's self and I loved it......

Structure and Flow=Tie, both were using good structure and flow and both were easier to read

Punches and Personals=k barely, k had nice shit and I loved his shit and it was nice use of word play along wit his punches like a regular battle set up then punch....

overall=Punches wins battles and K took this category and that gives him the win.......

Vote=K

Since I took time on yours k and voted honestly, please give me feed back on my battle with Venom, please cause I took time on yours, juss drop a honest vote in it, please vote, HERE IS THE LINK< VOTE

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111608

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Ummmm I respect ur vote n everything n I'm not swayin votes, but can u explain how he took the category personals?


Anyway thanx for votin second upppppppin.......

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Uppppppppppppppppin #3.............................

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Let me first say I feel sorry to both of you for the half-ass, unexplained votes you got so far... you both deserve more than that.

Ok,

.:K:.- Good Opener, surprisingly, I haven't seen that one yet, niice. You were consistant, almost every line was set up right for the punches to deliver... though a few seemed like they were below the standard. Not a bad verse at all, and until I read DaIllest's verse, I thought you had it...

DaIllest - Another great Opener, the personal sting it had made it the best punch in the battle. The 'pussy in his hard drive' punch was wack, but other than that, straight fire man. The 'ahead of the pack' 'running away from competition' punch was fuckin dope. Much originality and creativity in your verse, enjoyed the read.

vote goes to DaIllest, very close though, props to both. Keep it up, battles like this make voting worth it. pz