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Lyrical MC =vs= .iLL.
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Like eggs dis so called rapper as bin srammbled,
Like his small testicals my rhymes can't be handdle,/1 .Ill. spitting words dat sound bambled, Hes bin surrounded,dis is lyrical bullying,/2 .ill. dnt fit in wid MC's surrounding,coz lyrical Mc Rhymes were Hip-hops Founding, .ills. punches come cheeper than a Will Smith Feature,/3 da only difference being .ill. is an ugly creature, he needs a verbale teacher,coz hes a bible precher,/4 But da way fings are shapping,he will need Gods hand to stop verbaly faking, a puncher in his vocab gaping./5 Ill. hosts da a lyrical trashing at da hands of Lyrical MC, Platium disc awaiting,u can av theses line on me/6 I host da victory,.Ill .rapping?? More chance a guy wid leperacy clapping/7 You Honering me is very flatering, but wid verbs mirroring a bullet,/8 you betta fle,before i pull I Pull It (tiriger)/9 |
This Lyrical MC Is Empty To the Point Of Exhaustion/
Use Caution, I'll Fuckin 'Clean Ya Out' As If I Was Flossin!/ Ya Genitals-Used!..Yur Composed Of 'So Much Pussy' Ya Leave 'Cannibals Confused'!/ Yur Under Federal-Review!… Cuz Ya 'Spank Yur Monkey' To The Extent Of 'Animal Abuse'!/ I Set Up A Battle And This Fucker Responds, WTF Is He On?/ Beating Me Is Impossible, Like Christopher Reeves Mowing Yur Lawn/ 3-0 Dont Matter When They All Were Newbees/ Or Groupies, Now Sing Along As I Fluke Thee/ Soo... .iLL. Winning Is Probable, This Kat Ain't Even An Obstacle/ His Spit Has Less Of A Plot Than Mission Impossible/ HoLLa BaCk YoUnGiN! ~ |
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this was a preety close battle
ILL...you had a good flow and an aiight structure but your punches didnt really hit hard enough. I would have liked you to have more personals in your verse. This is the first of your stuff that i have seen but i reckon dat you need to practise a bit more. Lyrical MC... you had a nice flow and a good structure but again your punches werent that hard hittin. You had some nice personals but i want to see some more from you. This isnt the best that i have seen you produce but keep it up. vote Lyrical MC |
If your not a herb, you could see that this battle was NOT "pretty close"
Like eggs dis so called rapper as bin srammbled, Like his small testicals my rhymes can't be handdle,/1 ehh… .Ill. spitting words dat sound bambled, Hes bin surrounded,dis is lyrical bullying,/2 what? Naaa…. ill. dnt fit in wid MC's surrounding,coz lyrical Mc Rhymes were Hip-hops Founding, .ills. punches come cheeper than a Will Smith Feature,/3 no… da only difference being .ill. is an ugly creature, he needs a verbale teacher,coz hes a bible precher,/4 bad “punch” But da way fings are shapping,he will need Gods hand to stop verbaly faking, a puncher in his vocab gaping./5 Bad Ill. hosts da a lyrical trashing at da hands of Lyrical MC, Platium disc awaiting,u can av theses line on me/6 no… I host da victory,.Ill .rapping?? More chance a guy wid leperacy clapping/7 no… You Honering me is very flatering, but wid verbs mirroring a bullet,/8 oh no no no you betta fle,before i pull I Pull It (tiriger)/9 horrendous This Lyrical MC Is Empty To the Point Of Exhaustion/ Use Caution, I'll Fuckin 'Clean Ya Out' As If I Was Flossin!/ Pretty Okay... Ya Genitals-Used!..Yur Composed Of 'So Much Pussy' Ya Leave 'Cannibals Confused'!/ Yur Under Federal-Review!… Cuz Ya 'Spank Yur Monkey' To The Extent Of 'Animal Abuse'!/ Hehehe…decent I Set Up A Battle And This Fucker Responds, WTF Is He On?/ Beating Me Is Impossible, Like Christopher Reeves Mowing Yur Lawn/ Pretty okay… 3-0 Dont Matter When They All Were Newbees/ Or Groupies, Now Sing Along As I Fluke Thee/ Weak… Soo... .iLL. Winning Is Probable, This Kat Ain't Even An Obstacle/ His Spit Has Less Of A Plot Than Mission Impossible/ heh, kindof okay… Sorry, Lyrical. Hopefully your having a bad day, because that was horrendous. You need to work on structure and vocab. Using words like "lyrical" is fucking played and herbish. Get help with wit and wordplay. iLL...you came pretty good for a noob. I liked your verse to some extent. One sided battle...Ill wins... |
alrigth battle
Flow-Tie Personals-Ill Vocab-Ill Not goin into anythin else Lyrical ryhems were aight but didnt really feel em nd thought they were a lil confusin Ill you were aight...which was really all u needed in this battle Overall-Ill Keep uppin ThA Ce http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114182 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113988 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114112 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113893 Vote on those^^^ Pay back the favor |
lyrical mc had the better wordplay in this battle.. and punchlines i felt like ill didnt try enough alot of your verse was filler il.. lyrical mc just came straight out with some pretty clever disses
i vote for lyrical mc on this one based on his punchlines and wordplay.. hey man can you hit this battle up with a vote man heres the link it should be an easy ko for me http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114270 |
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Imma give this battle to umm Lyrical MC he got good punhcs he started of strong i like that the other MC was okay but he didn't do good enuff u know so V/lircal MC!! you got mah vote mayne!
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ill wins.............................................. ..
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leave a honest vote........leave links and i will hit u bac....please vote!!!!!!aaaiiggghhtttt!!!!
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rite cnt comment much on this battle,
but ill givew as much feedback as i can, to start with lyrical merked here with punches, and his flow and wordplay was alot better, both yall had wak strucutre here, but ill your verse didnt hit atall hard man....soz, but you gota work on ur punches..... v-lyrical........... no hate...........plz plz hit this up now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114468 thx alot........... |
hahahahahah u fucken idiots im on everysite and ive seen ills verse before so ill im given you a chance to confess before i get ur bitin lyrics from rapdogs dot com bitch
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Lmao....
Lyrical-ok wordplay your rhyme scheme sucks though.... you had a few punches nothing great though...,neither of you got into personals really so wusnt a good battle... you need to elevate in personals n meta4's... Ill-Better punches that were more consistant...they just hit harder, you had a few meta4's nothin' great either, but you had some that I noticed... ok wordplay and, you had a good rhyme scheme along with flow/structure... therefore... My V/Ill....hit up the links in my sig (SyaNidal Vs. Assassin) and (SyaNidal \v/ Diverse) with honest votes.... |
!!!!!leave links and i will hit u bac....uppin 4 votes ppl...please vote....aaaiiggghhttt!!!
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i left a link so hit it back wtf?
they are in sig it reads as I said SyaNidal Vs. Assassin and SyaNidal \v/ Diverse Hit them up... |
Yur Under Federal-Review!… Cuz Ya 'Spank Yur Monkey' To The Extent Of 'Animal Abuse'!/
that shit cracked me up.. lyrical, way too simple of a flow, no punches to make up for it, a few good disses, didnt do much damage.. a mediocre verse.. iLL, not much more complex of a flow, but a better one, much better wording and better punches, disses were about equal but the punches and flow took this match, vote iLL |
This Was A Close One But I Give My Vote To Lyrical Mc His Punches Were A Little Better I Like The Rhyme "like His Small Testicles My Rhymes Cant Be Handled"
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lyricall mc - 6/10- i liked ya flow and punches, that was hot
ill - 5.5/10 - good try - need better punches vote=lyrical mc vote on my battle pls http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115505 |
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