..10 lines
..no biting, feeding, d/r
..spit asap after checkin!
..best of 5


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Like eggs dis so called rapper as bin srammbled,
Like his small testicals my rhymes can't be handdle,/1
.Ill. spitting words dat sound bambled,
Hes bin surrounded,dis is lyrical bullying,/2
.ill. dnt fit in wid MC's surrounding,coz lyrical Mc Rhymes were Hip-hops Founding,
.ills. punches come cheeper than a Will Smith Feature,/3
da only difference being .ill. is an ugly creature,
he needs a verbale teacher,coz hes a bible precher,/4
But da way fings are shapping,he will need Gods hand to stop verbaly faking,
a puncher in his vocab gaping./5
Ill. hosts da a lyrical trashing at da hands of Lyrical MC,
Platium disc awaiting,u can av theses line on me/6
I host da victory,.Ill .rapping??
More chance a guy wid leperacy clapping/7
You Honering me is very flatering,
but wid verbs mirroring a bullet,/8
you betta fle,before i pull I Pull It (tiriger)/9

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This Lyrical MC Is Empty To the Point Of Exhaustion/
Use Caution, I'll Fuckin 'Clean Ya Out' As If I Was Flossin!/
Ya Genitals-Used!..Yur Composed Of 'So Much Pussy' Ya Leave 'Cannibals Confused'!/
Yur Under Federal-Review!… Cuz Ya 'Spank Yur Monkey' To The Extent Of 'Animal Abuse'!/

I Set Up A Battle And This Fucker Responds, WTF Is He On?/
Beating Me Is Impossible, Like Christopher Reeves Mowing Yur Lawn/
3-0 Dont Matter When They All Were Newbees/
Or Groupies, Now Sing Along As I Fluke Thee/

Soo...

.iLL. Winning Is Probable, This Kat Ain't Even An Obstacle/
His Spit Has Less Of A Plot Than Mission Impossible/

HoLLa BaCk YoUnGiN! ~

.......uppin for votes...............drop a honest vote and leave a link and i will hit u back!!!

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this was a preety close battle

ILL...you had a good flow and an aiight structure but your punches didnt really hit hard enough. I would have liked you to have more personals in your verse. This is the first of your stuff that i have seen but i reckon dat you need to practise a bit more.

Lyrical MC... you had a nice flow and a good structure but again your punches werent that hard hittin. You had some nice personals but i want to see some more from you.
This isnt the best that i have seen you produce but keep it up.

vote Lyrical MC

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Everyone In Frontlines ' Gives Up ' While Battling Me -Rappin' Master

I Have Roosters Going All Day Long Becuase I'm Rising - Grass Hopper

Kick Ur Arse To You U Say "stop,As My Gun Goes "POP"-lil jon

Do You Want This? Its Death And Now Theres No Suicicde - Genie

If your not a herb, you could see that this battle was NOT "pretty close"

Like eggs dis so called rapper as bin srammbled,
Like his small testicals my rhymes can't be handdle,/1
ehh…
.Ill. spitting words dat sound bambled,
Hes bin surrounded,dis is lyrical bullying,/2
what? Naaa….
ill. dnt fit in wid MC's surrounding,coz lyrical Mc Rhymes were Hip-hops Founding,
.ills. punches come cheeper than a Will Smith Feature,/3
no…
da only difference being .ill. is an ugly creature,
he needs a verbale teacher,coz hes a bible precher,/4
bad “punch”
But da way fings are shapping,he will need Gods hand to stop verbaly faking,
a puncher in his vocab gaping./5
Bad
Ill. hosts da a lyrical trashing at da hands of Lyrical MC,
Platium disc awaiting,u can av theses line on me/6
no…
I host da victory,.Ill .rapping??
More chance a guy wid leperacy clapping/7
no…
You Honering me is very flatering,
but wid verbs mirroring a bullet,/8
oh no no no
you betta fle,before i pull I Pull It (tiriger)/9
horrendous





This Lyrical MC Is Empty To the Point Of Exhaustion/
Use Caution, I'll Fuckin 'Clean Ya Out' As If I Was Flossin!/
Pretty Okay...
Ya Genitals-Used!..Yur Composed Of 'So Much Pussy' Ya Leave 'Cannibals Confused'!/
Yur Under Federal-Review!… Cuz Ya 'Spank Yur Monkey' To The Extent Of 'Animal Abuse'!/
Hehehe…decent
I Set Up A Battle And This Fucker Responds, WTF Is He On?/
Beating Me Is Impossible, Like Christopher Reeves Mowing Yur Lawn/
Pretty okay…
3-0 Dont Matter When They All Were Newbees/
Or Groupies, Now Sing Along As I Fluke Thee/
Weak…

Soo...

.iLL. Winning Is Probable, This Kat Ain't Even An Obstacle/
His Spit Has Less Of A Plot Than Mission Impossible/
heh, kindof okay…

Sorry, Lyrical. Hopefully your having a bad day, because that was horrendous. You need to work on structure and vocab. Using words like "lyrical" is fucking played and herbish. Get help with wit and wordplay.

iLL...you came pretty good for a noob. I liked your verse to some extent.

One sided battle...Ill wins...

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alrigth battle

Flow-Tie
Personals-Ill
Vocab-Ill

Not goin into anythin else

Lyrical ryhems were aight but didnt really feel em nd thought they were a lil confusin

Ill you were aight...which was really all u needed in this battle

Overall-Ill

Keep uppin

ThA Ce

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114182

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113988

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114112

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113893
Vote on those^^^

Pay back the favor

lyrical mc had the better wordplay in this battle.. and punchlines i felt like ill didnt try enough alot of your verse was filler il.. lyrical mc just came straight out with some pretty clever disses

i vote for lyrical mc on this one based on his punchlines and wordplay.. hey man can you hit this battle up with a vote man heres the link

it should be an easy ko for me

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114270

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single file, single files hoes come on in

^aaaiigth....uppin for votes ppl.......please vote.................

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Imma give this battle to umm Lyrical MC he got good punhcs he started of strong i like that the other MC was okay but he didn't do good enuff u know so V/lircal MC!! you got mah vote mayne!

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