SnypeR-vs-Chalk Clorox
 

no crew votes,
no d/r..under 25 bars
no bitin'
no recyclin.............

verse due at 10:00 bitch.............check in.....................

I got off to eat...........not to pre-write.....I didn't see this til I got back........but anywayz...........checkin in..............you see the rules...I hope you not all talk.........you post first since you so real...........be4 ten.............

where u at? I know you not ghostin like everyone else...............

I'm Eastern...............10:00 is in 15 mins dawg...........post in 30 mins........

^^^^true.......................................... .......................

check-it................off-da-dome too.................
its too late to run, i “drop heavy”...the bomb-is-sent..., look at Clorox’s record beating him wont even be an accomplishment/1
this'll stomp-and-dent with calm-intent, fucking slap your face in with your own hand until you palm-is-bent/(damn!)2
fuck this Clorox faggot...”victory” is like vasaline on Clorox's dick cus Clorox can't seem ta grab it/3
get hold of your “CD” and stab it...just to claim i left you dead in the tracks you dike...your rhymes are like “vet prostitutes” no where near “tight”/4
still wack right? i thought you'd get past-this-phase, battling me you need all the luck you can get like a year full of St. Patric's-Day's/5
homo, i see you’ve gone back-to-your-ways, ya verse leaves me thinking words like tragic-and-waste..not to mention ya crews prolly full of faggets-and-gays/6
Clorox cant handle a verse-of-mine..still unable to disperse-a-line, but you know like anxious shoe cleaners im always "first-to-shine"/7
say shit that'll burst-your-mind, is it just me or is this person-blind?../8
Ya lifes-reversed cause you flowin like baby-when-spittin, im amazingly-gifted and crazy-when-hittin you cant see me cus ya visions is hazy-and-slippin/9
When i serve-flame my word-play will crush ya bird-frame, Clorox needs to be “straight” with the people of RB and let em know he's turned-gay/10
cus you couldn't spit "fresh" if you brushed w/ "crest" and gargled a bottle of "scope/11
shit...even if "Marijuna" was on your back you still wouldn't be "dope"/12
Scope this my lyrics are lethal, you dont "add up" to my skills so how is it that we're still "equal"?/13

Yo, this kid was a ll talk. I aint voting just sayin that if ya wanna run with big cats grow some claws Chalk... Nice verse SnypeR.. Should get this without a doubt

vote chalk clorox cam wit a better flow snyper seem like he was tryin to hard wit his played out punchlines that werent even nice and the extra coments after ur bars was no need for that u was tryin hype up a corny verse

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man thas a straight hate vote man but its nutin though snyper still gonna take this..........every1 knows damn well snyper took this..............

I reported it already...............cause that's an outright hate vote...........




^^^*written by Clorox*

..........come on...........that has so much flow..............be 4real..............HATER!!!!!!!

one question.............what do I have to prove to you? I could care less how sick you think I am, or if I wrote this in an hour or not......If I gave you a day you couldn't match my verse..........I reported the hate vote...........and it it will be deleted.............(no beef.....just real)

Im not dickriding but yeah I think sniper won. Yours (Chalk) lacked substances and wasnt long enough for me, I liked the war references. A bit more practice would be good for you I'd say but a GREAT start. Also try to make your rhymes easier to read.


Good work on both accounts, but Im voting Snipes.

you got kilt chalk this was no where near to even.........chalk you waas usin osme muties but theywere not even that good you need to battle some more newb's before you battle any one else...you need to work on your meta4s and punches....but i guess oyu was alrite for a newb..........5/10

you kilt this nigga this was not even a challenge......this battle speaks for its self....i shouldnt even have to explain my self.....i was loven all the gay jokes....but you could have done betta but i gueesss thats all you needed to beat this weak cat...all in all good battle......7/10

may the best man win

oh yeah if you get a chance can you guys vote on this because its been out there for hella long and just needs to end
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115635

yo snyper ya came with a wicked flow - i was feelin it!

this'll stomp-and-dent with calm-intent, fucking slap your face in with your own hand until you palm-is-bent/(damn!)

that was a quality line - eminem wud have had trouble matching that
i give ya 8/10 son -good son

chalk ya sound like a garage mc - i wasent feelin' ya flow or ya lyrics
try and be more pseronal next time homie - 4/10

vote: snyper

honest vote on these battle pls
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116302
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116230

Chalk man you a pussy... You gon say his shit was pre written just cause it ripped the fuck outa you. And a lot of anyones punchlines are already thought of... They just remember them so they can stick them in rhymes. Calm your herb ass down and learn to spit... or else ya gon end up.

yo man you can think whateva you want...............look at all of snipers battle n tell me they aint tight whether from his first to last.............. afta you do tell em if you still think that what he writes is prewritten..........

uppin............................................. .....

yo ya'll that clorox bitch wuz exactly that bitchen cuz he got riped tha fuck out
yo snipes wurr tha fuck have u been..tha rap world need u son....your shit iz off tha chain...yo i'm tryna git wit TRAY-SIX and i need someone to holla at me...fuck this clorox wuz az good az a no sho...VOTE SNYPER
votes for me vs lyrical chick...and don't b mad clorox cuz i wuzn't nice above
votes votes votes

Clorox............you need to elevate some..........work on extended you bars so that you punches will hit harder, and also work on your verse structure..........if you do that, then rest will follow................

Snyper..........your verse was nice..........just don't overdue the punches vs. wordplay to much............it makes the verse a lil choppy.............

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- Cprogress

Crew Votes for Tray Six - Toon and d.j em sce removed. Currently 3-1 SnypeR.

My vote goes to Snyper, I thought Chalk had it wrapped up but Snyper had some real good punches like "its too late to run, i “drop heavy”...the bomb-is-sent..., look at Clorox’s record beating him wont even be an accomplishment/1" Thats a real good opener, there were a couple others as well. Perhaps if Chalk had a few more lines, with some one or two real good punches, but hats off to both of you cause against alot of other emcees those were both winning verses.

Da Vinci,

Oh, and P.S I gotta battle open, hopefully you guys can peep it, like I peeped this.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116046

thanx^^^^^^^^^^^^uppin............................ ..................

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umm quick question why did toon answer for snyper saying he was on eastern time and then snyper said true right below you cats both have the same ip in the same crew vote on each others battles you have been suspected off having two names and dickriding like a son of a bitch its only time befoe you get banned the mods know this shit is here now i cant beleive you toon aka snyper its cats like you that disgrace this fucking site you muther fucking fagget

"dont get mad or hate me its not my fault your mom tried to rape me"
Krackmittens

I'm gonna give this one hands down, hands clapping, and hand it right to SNYPER. He killed this one so bad I actually forgot what the other guy said...lol. But trust me it wasn't much. Wait...don't get me wrong. The other dude totally had ridiculous amounts of rhymin skill...for real, for real...very sick. But yo - YOU NEED TO THROW PUNCHES....you know disses, not just threats. Keep it up ya'll.

UBR