Sten. Cell Vs. GB Killa
 

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Ill Prolly Drop Aftrer You Check In

here i am ill go first......................................

ill be right back you go first222222222222222222222'

ill spit my first line then send you to bed/
after my 2nd line you gana wish u wre dead/ then
come #'s 3 and 4/ ur the type of bitch to go out the back/
when i come in the front door/
this is an auction dog and you ant got no money for biddin/
thinkin u could beat me,
who the fuck were u kiddin/
wit a name like Sten. Cell.
I shouldn't have battled you/
just grabed u up and broke ur fucking back like a Pen. Cell.

See Wats Sad Is This Kids' Raps Seems Padded.../
Cause I Sleep On His White Sheets Like A Craft-Matic/
Ya Raps' Had It,I Drop "Dope Lines" Like A Bad Habit/
Brains You Lack Kid,YaCents Is Owed Like God Tabbed-It/
Im Dis-Carding Your Gestures Cause I Fear No Jokes/
He Strokes & Blows Off Cam Like Breaks In "Queer As Folk"/
Off Hand I Of-tan Cough And Blow Thru This Kid's Tissues/
So Ill Stop His Bad Writtens Like Cancelled Magazine Issues/

I Cut It Short.My Fault For Never Dropping.I Completely Forgot.

my vote
 

ok bar by bar breakdown....

ill spit my first line then send you to bed/
after my 2nd line you gana wish u wre dead/
weak punch...every1 always says ur gonna wish u were dead...2/10
then come #'s 3 and 4/ ur the type of bitch to go out the back/
when i come in the front door/
ZzZzZ...boring...1/10
this is an auction dog and you ant got no money for biddin/
thinkin u could beat me,
who the fuck were u kiddin/
Not a good punch...boring...2/10
wit a name like Sten. Cell.
I shouldn't have battled you/
just grabed u up and broke ur fucking back like a Pen. Cell.
HORRIBLE PERSONAL....0/10

Verse Score...
5/40

ok...work on everything...u need to use personals (correctly)....need to not stretch ya bars....use direct punches....elevate is all i can say....

See Wats Sad Is This Kids' Raps Seems Padded.../
Cause I Sleep On His White Sheets Like A Craft-Matic/
nice punch...good opener...8/10
Ya Raps' Had It,I Drop "Dope Lines" Like A Bad Habit/
Brains You Lack Kid,YaCents Is Owed Like God Tabbed-It/
Nice multi's and a hard hitting punch...like this line fasho...9/10
Im Dis-Carding Your Gestures Cause I Fear No Jokes/
He Strokes & Blows Off Cam Like Breaks In "Queer As Folk"/
Nice punch and meta....7/10
Off Hand I Of-tan Cough And Blow Thru This Kid's Tissues/
So Ill Stop His Bad Writtens Like Cancelled Magazine Issues/
Nice closer....good punch....8/10

Verse Score....
32/40

ok it was clear u were better n had the better verse....keep elevatin...no real advice jus suggest ya fix dat structure...."/"'s make u look like a newbie...
return the favor....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119160

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Again

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ok man Stencell took this battle by far ass hell the other dudes verse was shit!!!
compare to stencell the honest true i dont have to explain my self its ovious just
read the battle foks....

Vote=Stencell easyli took it

can u vote me-vs-pictureperfect-2


peace..........

aight, damn, sucky ass structure and everything to tha loser
haha, kinda:
See Wats Sad Is This Kids' Raps Seems Padded.../
Cause I Sleep On His White Sheets Like A Craft-Matic/
haha, foreal:
Im Dis-Carding Your Gestures Cause I Fear No Jokes/
He Strokes & Blows Off Cam Like Breaks In "Queer As Folk"/
kinda sophisticated:
Off Hand I Of-tan Cough And Blow Thru This Kid's Tissues/
So Ill Stop His Bad Writtens Like Cancelled Magazine Issues/

loser, elavate like a mothafucka

V/ Sten

aiight this wasnt a close battle at all sten. cell took this battle for his first bar....nice wordplay multis were sick punches was nice...gb killa ya need to work on ya structure a little man shyt was kinda hard to follow...and you had no wordplay..vocab was simple..on tha real thos GB killa go get a dictionary..might help ya verse

vote: sten. cell without a doubt

~1~

3-0 Me
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alright now.....

sten cell got this.

sten cell:
metaphors 9/10
rhyme 7/10
flow 8/10
punches 7/10
31/40
GB
metaphors 5/10
rhyme 7/10
flow 6/10
punches 4/10...they were ass.
22/40

overall winner was Sten cell he did good he's always good from what i notice.. he's a quality emcee he needs to go to the elevated front lines now

sten cell:
metaphors 9/10
rhyme 7/10
flow 8/10
punches 7/10
31/40
GB
metaphors 5/10
rhyme 7/10
flow 6/10
punches 4/10...they were ass.
22/40
^^^^I AGREE ...SOMEWHAT......GBKILLA WORK ON YO PUNCHES KID... PM IF YOU NEED HELP .....ON BATTLING......I GOT MAD LUV FOR ALL MC'S THIS AINT NO HATE VOTE....I JUS KEEP IT REAL... IM OUT