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Due By Tom. Midnight

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Ill Prolly Drop Aftrer You Check In

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here i am ill go first......................................

ill be right back you go first222222222222222222222'

ill spit my first line then send you to bed/
after my 2nd line you gana wish u wre dead/ then
come #'s 3 and 4/ ur the type of bitch to go out the back/
when i come in the front door/
this is an auction dog and you ant got no money for biddin/
thinkin u could beat me,
who the fuck were u kiddin/
wit a name like Sten. Cell.
I shouldn't have battled you/
just grabed u up and broke ur fucking back like a Pen. Cell.

See Wats Sad Is This Kids' Raps Seems Padded.../
Cause I Sleep On His White Sheets Like A Craft-Matic/
Ya Raps' Had It,I Drop "Dope Lines" Like A Bad Habit/
Brains You Lack Kid,YaCents Is Owed Like God Tabbed-It/
Im Dis-Carding Your Gestures Cause I Fear No Jokes/
He Strokes & Blows Off Cam Like Breaks In "Queer As Folk"/
Off Hand I Of-tan Cough And Blow Thru This Kid's Tissues/
So Ill Stop His Bad Writtens Like Cancelled Magazine Issues/

I Cut It Short.My Fault For Never Dropping.I Completely Forgot.

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ok bar by bar breakdown....

ill spit my first line then send you to bed/
after my 2nd line you gana wish u wre dead/
weak punch...every1 always says ur gonna wish u were dead...2/10
then come #'s 3 and 4/ ur the type of bitch to go out the back/
when i come in the front door/
ZzZzZ...boring...1/10
this is an auction dog and you ant got no money for biddin/
thinkin u could beat me,
who the fuck were u kiddin/
Not a good punch...boring...2/10
wit a name like Sten. Cell.
I shouldn't have battled you/
just grabed u up and broke ur fucking back like a Pen. Cell.
HORRIBLE PERSONAL....0/10

Verse Score...
5/40

ok...work on everything...u need to use personals (correctly)....need to not stretch ya bars....use direct punches....elevate is all i can say....

See Wats Sad Is This Kids' Raps Seems Padded.../
Cause I Sleep On His White Sheets Like A Craft-Matic/
nice punch...good opener...8/10
Ya Raps' Had It,I Drop "Dope Lines" Like A Bad Habit/
Brains You Lack Kid,YaCents Is Owed Like God Tabbed-It/
Nice multi's and a hard hitting punch...like this line fasho...9/10
Im Dis-Carding Your Gestures Cause I Fear No Jokes/
He Strokes & Blows Off Cam Like Breaks In "Queer As Folk"/
Nice punch and meta....7/10
Off Hand I Of-tan Cough And Blow Thru This Kid's Tissues/
So Ill Stop His Bad Writtens Like Cancelled Magazine Issues/
Nice closer....good punch....8/10

Verse Score....
32/40

ok it was clear u were better n had the better verse....keep elevatin...no real advice jus suggest ya fix dat structure...."/"'s make u look like a newbie...
return the favor....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119160

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

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Again

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ok man Stencell took this battle by far ass hell the other dudes verse was shit!!!
compare to stencell the honest true i dont have to explain my self its ovious just
read the battle foks....

Vote=Stencell easyli took it

can u vote me-vs-pictureperfect-2


peace..........

aight, damn, sucky ass structure and everything to tha loser
haha, kinda:
See Wats Sad Is This Kids' Raps Seems Padded.../
Cause I Sleep On His White Sheets Like A Craft-Matic/
haha, foreal:
Im Dis-Carding Your Gestures Cause I Fear No Jokes/
He Strokes & Blows Off Cam Like Breaks In "Queer As Folk"/
kinda sophisticated:
Off Hand I Of-tan Cough And Blow Thru This Kid's Tissues/
So Ill Stop His Bad Writtens Like Cancelled Magazine Issues/

loser, elavate like a mothafucka

V/ Sten

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Murdered:

LGB FreeYayo

A.K.A. Lil Nae2

ChYld
Vote on:
vs violation-to-Va
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119107
vs PreZidict
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=182770

Lyrical Crook

aiight this wasnt a close battle at all sten. cell took this battle for his first bar....nice wordplay multis were sick punches was nice...gb killa ya need to work on ya structure a little man shyt was kinda hard to follow...and you had no wordplay..vocab was simple..on tha real thos GB killa go get a dictionary..might help ya verse

vote: sten. cell without a doubt

~1~

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