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Kingz vs Threatz
threatz to spit first
10-12 lines no crew no hate no feedin no d/r due as soon as poss |
checkin in
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You coulden't be a King, if you played 4 Sacramento
couldent spit flamez if you had a torch in ya dental so if you think your hot.. check your A/C pick it up a notch.. then step to face me I bring Major Pain, but i ain't talkin bout a movie i'm talkin bout a stain on your T from my Uzzi leave ya brains on tha passanga seat of ya whoopti I shake MC's.. spit fire an burn'em like blank CD's you couldent be hard if you was a tit i win, so Game Over nigga like that song 4rm Lil Flip |
Whenever your ready 2 drop yo verse, N you better not bust a no-show
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mayn you got till tommorow my nigga, i ain't gonna be havin all dis waitin cuz your takin yo tyme type of shyt
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well if you checked you would realise i werent online wen u dropped
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Dog why u challenging me…you ain’t even a ‘threat’
I aint gonna stop…im’a ‘keep it comin’ like ‘keith sweat’ ‘Death Threat’?…if you received one…we know you will give in Your life aint worth a ‘film’…the only ‘trailer’ you got you live in U couldn’t ‘pose’ threatz ‘taking pictures’ with terrorists Dog desist…if ya were admitted to hospital u still wudnt be on tha ‘sick list’ this pussy a gangster?…ha….forget the ‘guns’ he claims to hold, like Michael Jackson…he is touching a ‘nine’ but…that’s a nine year old the reason you only wrote ten lines…is cos of ya small vocabulary the only votes you ‘cop’…are from ya local ‘constabulary’ so to beat ya son..i don’t even need a good finishing line when it comes to it…the voters are gonna go past you like a ‘street sign’ |
weak spit but im rele busy at the moment uppin....................
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not the strongest battle. Props to both for tryin'. I liked the flo for both of you. So in that category, you would be tied. In punches, you guys were pretty much tied to. The rhmying is what it comes down to. The last 4 lines was where threatz's rhyming got messed up. So my vote, jus barely, goes to Kingz.
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uppinn............................................
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This Was A Fairly Tied' Battle Verse' .. NO Doubt But Im Going To Have To Go With KingZ On This Shit' Because His Punches Hit Harder .. He Had The Better Flow - With Consistant WordPlay' - Not Much But Enough To Get My Vote' ...
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
Haha.. pulling for votes. Whatever, I give this one to threatz. King's rhymes were stretched out, pretty bad flow. Also, anything with MJ is just tired by this time.. try some new stuff. threatz's punches weren't much better.. same thing throughout basically, but at least the flow is pretty decent and consistent.
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Haha.. Whatever, I give this one to threatz. King's rhymes were stretched out, pretty bad flow. Also, anything with MJ is just tired by this time.. try some new stuff. threatz's punches weren't much better.. same thing throughout basically, but at least the flow is pretty decent and consistent.
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kingz gets this,his personals where funny as fuck and his flow was aight...
threatz persionals just werent as tight... aight my vote goes to kingz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
ok fair comment. no need to post twice tho. na'mean?
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^^^^that was ment for shadows edge...................
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yo kingz did you put the vote on mine because the scores the same....................................
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yeah i know.. not sure what happened there ... sorry bout that
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dont matter dawg its gone up now............................................... ...........................
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no worries. uppin..................................
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uppin............................... come on ya'll dont sleep on this
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threatz - nice verse, structure was consistant. you had a nice personal in ur opener, the opener has to go to you.
You coulden't be a King, if you played 4 Sacramento but i think this is the line that one it for kingz ‘Death Threat’?…if you received one…we know you will give in Your life aint worth a ‘film’…the only ‘trailer’ you got you live in it made me laugh. it was a very good meta kingz also had a nice multi too U couldn’t ‘pose’ threatz ‘taking pictures’ with terrorists Dog desist…if ya were admitted to hospital u still wudnt be on tha ‘sick list’ again this showed quality my vote go's to kingz simple but effective |
uppin............................................. ......
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uppin diz
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118632
yo, this was closer than what yall cats are sayin, the shit was evened out. Ok, on punches, i give this to threatz, on personals, tie, on metaphors, funny shit that made sense, i give it to kingz, and the rest basically goes to threatz in ma opion, though i like kingz jackson line. v/threatz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
uppin diz.. letz get some more votez
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not very good from the both of you kingz you had good rhymes i especially liked that Micheal jackson spit but you still could have stuck it to him alot harder overall a good battle tho.
overall not bad but both of you could use a tuneup on syllables even so my vote goes to Kingz i liked his spit and they gave me a good laugh good job both of you |
Kingz takes this one one his flow was better and his lyrics were funny this was a good battle for the both of u but u both need a tuneup on how to use syllables good job but u both can do better
Kingz- u had good flow and ur ryhmes were funny but u could have brought more to the tablegood lyrics though Threatz-your spit was tight but i really didnt get the point that u were trying to get across but good battle. |
vote king
he came harder threats u had some wack shit threatz work on vocab personals and multis king work on personals good battle i d like 2 c a rematch |
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lol@wack shit.. yous a hater.. all you gotta do iz vote ain't nobody tryin 2 hear shit else from you |
my vote is to kingz dat nigga had good verbalz// and good punch lines// and threatz had good rhymes put weak ass punch lines no good vocabulary in der// so my vote goes to kingz
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uppin diz... leave a link 2 ya'llz battlez after you vote.. an i'll scoop yo shyt
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Pucnhes: same
Personals :Kingz Flow : same Metas : same Kings took this by the skin of his teeth. It was a pretty equal battle for the most part good job to both of you, like to see some more |
uppin yo............................................
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uppin
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0k heres the breakdown i gotta give this one to Kingz
this battle wasnt very good i expected more from the both of u i know that u can both step it up to a higher level Kingz-u need to focus more on evening out your syllables the lines dont flow together all that great. you started out strong but i wanted to see a crazy finish u left the battle open by the way u ended Threatz-i like ur flow and ur lines rhyme good the only problem is that ur lyrics are average there not bad but there not great its just stuff ive heared a million times before. Overall-a good battle but i would like to see a rematch where the both of you really step it up to the level i know ur both capable of good job both of you |
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