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CounTREE Jay vs. Nope
No Recyclin'
5-10 bars, No d/r or hate votes 5-0 win 3-0 ko and drop at the same time Check in, then we can do this |
aight yo checkin in and droppin .......
AyoO.. Im'a "r.i.p." this kid like his crew is stated ... only 1 of the ppl from your crew is underrated.... the rest of yall might as well fall off and stop tryin to rhyme... cause puttin up a newb to battle you is a "waste of his time"... i looked back on some of your previous so called battles..... you seem to got a swollen head thinkin that you can "keystyle"... bitch it seemed half ya shyt was "written" learn how to "Freestyle"... Fuck Da R.I.P. I go solo.... Fuck yall you cant rhyme like me i got mad "flow"... Any one of yall who want to step to me bring it i got that new/old school flavor... i got the rhymes that you worship call me ya new found "savior".... "Da R.I.P." is weak and countreeJay is theyre problem... on a list of worst newbs hes on the "BOTTOm"... |
aight jay you need to check in when you get back from classes and drop sometime before 2 aight aight g/l and holla back
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Check 1-2, Check 1-2. Ima bout to do this shit man, i'll post in a few.
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You know, i'm CounTREE, so like the old west, I could make you famous,/
So when you come at the greatest they'll all remember what your name is./ It's nope, cause you can't cope that my style strictly sounds dope./ And the shit you wrote got your takin' career here swiftly downslope./ I know it's hard to believe that you were even concieved,/ But your momz secret garden, I planted that seed./ To bad you didn't get none of your daddy's good skillz./ Now you can never use this mc thing to pay the billz./ I shoulda said that's not mine in the begging and neva had contact again,/ I always said i'd disown my son if he grew up to like men./ So now i'll be like everyone else, cause nigga i don't know you./ But if you still wanna know how to be an mc, nigga let me show you./ |
TREE Jay Got This Shit' Right Off Hand' ... His Shit Was Nice, He Had Alright Stucture, Nice Vocab, Fair WordPlay, Lackin Personals, Nice Flow, Good Creativity, & Decent Character' .. So Thats Why Imma Give Him My Vote...
Nope.. Your Shit Was To Basic... Peice Of Advice' Chill Out On All The "......." Dots And Stick To Your Own Level Of MC's And Its All Good Vote: TREE Jay Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
Uppin' 4 votes. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Uppin' 4 votes. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Will someone fuckin' vote on this shit? Uppin'^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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countree got this shit easy...that secret garden thing waz funny...he basically had better personals...
Vote:counTREE jay.... return the favour and drop a vote on rollin_deep vs Ecko296 aiiiight |
JAY - good flow like always man, nice pnches and multi you came hard.
Best Line: So now i'll be like everyone else, cause nigga i don't know you./ But if you still wanna know how to be an mc, nigga let me show you./ (nice finisher) Worst Line: none Nope - good job, started off pretty good, and had some good punches and flow. Best Line: Da R.I.P." is weak and countreeJay is theyre problem... on a list of worst newbs hes on the "BOTTOm"... (nice finish) Worst Line: Any one of yall who want to step to me bring it i got that new/old school flavor... i got the rhymes that you worship call me ya new found "savior".... OVERALL - good battle but I got to give this too Jay, he came harder had funny punches and good flow. Keep at it nope were week in some places just step up on your flow and work on them punches. Vote - Jay Hit up mine peeps, I only need couple more votes to K-O this kat. |
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118312 there is the link... forgot it first time.
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yo this shit had got to go to count.
This line killed it: I know it's hard to believe that you were even concieved,/ But your momz secret garden, I planted that seed./ that line was hot. both ahd got flow but countrees punches hit a lil hard and overall he brought his A game count also had better multies. that was wot nope was lackin u both need a few more personals good battle tho vote count hit this battle pls http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118374 |
Uppin' 4 votes. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
People keep puttin' shit, but not hittin' the fuckin' vote botton at the top. Hit that shit!!!!!!!!! |
yoooo uppin and stop jut votin in here poll ya shyt too.......................
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yo jay you just weanna call this battle a tie or something since no ones voting?
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Lol, that looks like about where the fuck this shitz goin' too fam. Will someone fuckin' vote on this shit? Uppin'^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Uppppin on this shit ! people are voti but not pollin poll your votes! drop a link ill return the favor....
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Uppin this is some bullshit what you want to do jay we aint gettin ne votes on here no ones pollin and im tired of havein to keep checkin up on it and uppin and shit ............ holla
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countree got this easily, both of you had decent structure. Nope....i honestly didn't like your verse. No disrespect, but your punches wern't there, you hardly had any metaphors, you didn't have any multies and no personals. Countree, you had personals(not that strong) but they were there, you had multies, a few of the multies i really liked. i don't remember being metaphors, but there could of been. All in all, countree got it easy, but i am pretty confident you both could do better...no disrespect tho cause thats how it works. Much love and respect to everybody
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DAT WAS A HOT BATTLE BUT COUNTREEJAY PUNCH LINES WAS OFF DA CHAIN/ DA GARDEN THANG GOT ME LAUGHIN OUT OF MY SKINS// KEEP BATTLIN AND KEEP REPPIN
YO NOPE USE MO ACTION VERBZ WORDS MAN U USIN BASIC LIKE U IN KINDERGARDEN CLASSES// KEEP BATTLIN AND KEEP REPPIN u must not no i got da HARBOR-LOCKED/i be cuttin up heads i'm bout to open a BARBOR-SHOP/i'ma a mine so watch where ya STEP/i'll throw ya LUNGs in da air 2 see if u can CATCH ya BREATH |
aight good l;okin start polin i want this shit closed! soon people uppin for votes
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Im'a "r.i.p." this kid like his crew is stated ...
only 1 of the ppl from your crew is underrated.... Not really a good opener... the rest of yall might as well fall off and stop tryin to rhyme... cause puttin up a newb to battle you is a "waste of his time"... You kinda helped him out wit that line... i looked back on some of your previous so called battles..... you seem to got a swollen head thinkin that you can "keystyle"... bitch it seemed half ya shyt was "written" learn how to "Freestyle"... Not really a punch... Fuck Da R.I.P. I go solo.... Fuck yall you cant rhyme like me i got mad "flow"... Once again, where's the punch? Any one of yall who want to step to me bring it i got that new/old school flavor... i got the rhymes that you worship call me ya new found "savior".... Could have been worded better "Da R.I.P." is weak and countreeJay is theyre problem... on a list of worst newbs hes on the "BOTTOm"... Not a bad closer... You know, i'm CounTREE, so like the old west, I could make you famous,/ So when you come at the greatest they'll all remember what your name is./ Ehh....needs to be reworded... It's nope, cause you can't cope that my style strictly sounds dope./ And the shit you wrote got your takin' career here swiftly downslope./ Not bad... I know it's hard to believe that you were even concieved,/ But your momz secret garden, I planted that seed./ Ok, but kinda played... To bad you didn't get none of your daddy's good skillz./ Now you can never use this mc thing to pay the billz./ Ok, you kinda turned it on him a bit... I shoulda said that's not mine in the begging and neva had contact again,/ I always said i'd disown my son if he grew up to like men./ Gettin better... So now i'll be like everyone else, cause nigga i don't know you./ But if you still wanna know how to be an mc, nigga let me show you./ Not a great closer, but it'll do... Overall this was an ok battle. They were almost evenly matched, but I think Countree had a little bit more experience and it showed in his punches and flow. Could use some work on his wordplay and metas. Nope seemed to have a hard time even throwin a punch. Most of his shit wasn't even directed toward his opponent. He lacked wordplay and metas as well. I gotta give this one to Countree cause he obviously spit the better verse.... Vote: CountreeJay |
Hit me up wit some votes on one of my battles............. vote fairly.......
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Will someone fuckin' vote on this shit? Uppin'^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Uppin' 4 votes. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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^^^^this shits been open too long Uppin for votes ^^ i need this shit closed wanna say you win by Ko since you have a 3 - 0 lead??Upppin for vptes holla drop a link or 2 ill return da favor
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That's what i was just about to say, It's a 3-0 Ko. Hopefully the modz catch that shit. Good battle though.
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peeps goin on about the mama line bein one of the best, but mama punches r played out more than 'yeah' by 'usher'.....
heres my 2 pennys.... nope - in my eyes his verse was better, i felt the flow more and i liked the punches more.... jay - verse was ok, lacked creativity and strong punches but had ok flow... winning line..... you seem to got a swollen head thinkin that you can "keystyle"... bitch it seemed half ya shyt was "written" learn how to "Freestyle"... ^^^^^ i think that was the best punch in the whole battle so thats what swayed ma vote.... so ma vote goes to nope..... 1.. Krysis... |
Fuck jay styll wanna get the 3-0 shit even thoufhg sum1 voted for me???????????????????? uoppin
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I dunno, if the mods fix it, I guess. But if you get the votes and win it, that's cool too, I ain't gonna bitch or anythin', you had a nice spit no doubt. So either way, someone vote, or someone close this shit. Hollatchaboy.
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it was a good battle
jay punches-8/10 structure-8/10 vocab-9/10 flow-9/10 closing-8/10 overall-9/10 nope punches-8/10 structure-8/10 vocab-8/10 flow-9/10 closing-8/10 overall-8/10 |
umm nice battle......
STRUCTURE-countree PUNCHLINES-countree WORDPLAY-nope PERSONALS-nun ENJOYED-countree MY VOTE-COUNTREE JAY RETURN DA FAVOR NIGGAZ!!!! |
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