No Recyclin'
5-10 bars,
No d/r or hate votes
5-0 win
3-0 ko
and drop at the same time

Check in, then we can do this

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aight yo checkin in and droppin .......
AyoO..

Im'a "r.i.p." this kid like his crew is stated ...
only 1 of the ppl from your crew is underrated....
the rest of yall might as well fall off and stop tryin to rhyme...
cause puttin up a newb to battle you is a "waste of his time"...
i looked back on some of your previous so called battles.....
you seem to got a swollen head thinkin that you can "keystyle"...
bitch it seemed half ya shyt was "written" learn how to "Freestyle"...
Fuck Da R.I.P. I go solo....
Fuck yall you cant rhyme like me i got mad "flow"...
Any one of yall who want to step to me bring it i got that new/old school flavor...
i got the rhymes that you worship call me ya new found "savior"....
"Da R.I.P." is weak and countreeJay is theyre problem...
on a list of worst newbs hes on the "BOTTOm"...

aight jay you need to check in when you get back from classes and drop sometime before 2 aight aight g/l and holla back

Check 1-2, Check 1-2. Ima bout to do this shit man, i'll post in a few.

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You know, i'm CounTREE, so like the old west, I could make you famous,/
So when you come at the greatest they'll all remember what your name is./
It's nope, cause you can't cope that my style strictly sounds dope./
And the shit you wrote got your takin' career here swiftly downslope./
I know it's hard to believe that you were even concieved,/
But your momz secret garden, I planted that seed./
To bad you didn't get none of your daddy's good skillz./
Now you can never use this mc thing to pay the billz./
I shoulda said that's not mine in the begging and neva had contact again,/
I always said i'd disown my son if he grew up to like men./
So now i'll be like everyone else, cause nigga i don't know you./
But if you still wanna know how to be an mc, nigga let me show you./

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TREE Jay Got This Shit' Right Off Hand' ... His Shit Was Nice, He Had Alright Stucture, Nice Vocab, Fair WordPlay, Lackin Personals, Nice Flow, Good Creativity, & Decent Character' .. So Thats Why Imma Give Him My Vote...

Nope.. Your Shit Was To Basic... Peice Of Advice' Chill Out On All The "......." Dots And Stick To Your Own Level Of MC's And Its All Good

Vote: TREE Jay

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

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Uppin' 4 votes. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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Uppin' 4 votes. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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Will someone fuckin' vote on this shit? Uppin'^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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countree got this shit easy...that secret garden thing waz funny...he basically had better personals...

Vote:counTREE jay....

return the favour and drop a vote on rollin_deep vs Ecko296 aiiiight

JAY - good flow like always man, nice pnches and multi you came hard.

Best Line: So now i'll be like everyone else, cause nigga i don't know you./
But if you still wanna know how to be an mc, nigga let me show you./
(nice finisher)

Worst Line: none

Nope - good job, started off pretty good, and had some good punches and flow.

Best Line: Da R.I.P." is weak and countreeJay is theyre problem...
on a list of worst newbs hes on the "BOTTOm"... (nice finish)

Worst Line: Any one of yall who want to step to me bring it i got that new/old school flavor...
i got the rhymes that you worship call me ya new found "savior"....

OVERALL - good battle but I got to give this too Jay, he came harder had funny punches and good flow. Keep at it nope were week in some places just step up on your flow and work on them punches.

Vote - Jay

Hit up mine peeps, I only need couple more votes to K-O this kat.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118312 there is the link... forgot it first time.

yo this shit had got to go to count.

This line killed it:

I know it's hard to believe that you were even concieved,/
But your momz secret garden, I planted that seed./

that line was hot. both ahd got flow but countrees punches hit a lil hard and overall he brought his A game

count also had better multies. that was wot nope was lackin

u both need a few more personals

good battle tho

vote count

hit this battle pls
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118374

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Uppin' 4 votes. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

People keep puttin' shit, but not hittin' the fuckin' vote botton at the top. Hit that shit!!!!!!!!!

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