Aero Vs Lokie
 

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plz no d/r
no crew
no hate

due date: anytime before 12am (midnight) canadian eastern time it's 1 28 now

gl to my opponent

I need like one more vote.. so check this and vote.. and I Will holla when this up in done http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118312

Sry Aero I forgot to say it's was 1:28pm when I posted this up gl I'm droppin in a minute.

Aero I peeped your last battle against decimal
It reminded me of felon’s they way u went down 5-0
K.O’d u must have been under pressure like Aerosol cans
Been here for 4 months and still can’t post an O-M
You couldn’t beat me with 8 months of practice
Cause I leave you soaring higher then Aero-batics
Shit Aero must think he got this height shit under lock,
But I’ll due this bitch worse then Em did Poppa Doc.
Fuck man ur lines stay stretched like Aero-bics
Trying the Michael Jackson thing eh I bet u like kids.
This battle reminds me of eviction notices the way I got you pinned
See I cut through (h)air* like a mustache trimmed.
Your win record remind me of cheerio’s the way I’m seein 0’s
See I’m a harder opponent to crack then the back of turtle’s
Think you studied flows like a professor of Aerodynamics
We’ll how the fuck can u spit when that mics alrdy damaged.

*- Aero means air, and anything to do with air like planes and aircrafts ect. also scissors cuts through hair like wings cut through air get it?

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...96&page=2&pp=15

^voted on that battle, and the 1 Gkillah dropped the link to alrdy in here

Dang forgot about this.. Thanks for the PM.. This is a very Rushed keystyle I gotta jet..

You'll get ripped in this once I claim you as a b*tch in this Hun
Crew name's fitting for a rate cuz as Lyricist you're getting A-1
Look how quickly it's done, swift when I run, to beat him well
I'd say Satan got you on a bench press, cuz you weak as Hell
You're meeting L's, losses, cuz I only drop wackness when slamming you
And you bring heat 24/7? Must of opened an all day tanning booth
I'm ramming dukes, ya mans and troops, will leave, they don't show patience
cuz the only way you can claim u above U.S. is by representing your Location
Leave ya cold-achin, and you put on a big Front like Carmen Electra
And I constantly push Low-Keys like Delete, Space bar and etcetra
Yup just trying to put filler bars I'm aware i'm ripping him bad
Had to lower his ego, his head gotten bigger than the kid in his av
Ya sh*t and it's sad, u look down on hip hop like O'reilly and his big mouth
and you only pulling guns when taking the smiley from ya sig out

AERo - started off strong and then started to slow down, good battle.

Best Line: You'll get ripped in this once I claim you as a b*tch in this Hun
Crew name's fitting for a rate cuz as Lyricist you're getting A-1

Worst Line: none.

Lokie - Good Battle man was feelin ya good flow and came hard wit the punches.

Best Line - Shit Aero must think he got this height shit under lock,
But I’ll due this bitch worse then Em did Poppa Doc.

Worst Line: none

OVERALL - Close battle but I gotta give it to Lokie, was feelin him more and thought he broght it harder. both had good punches just thought lokie flowed better. Step up on the flow Aero other then that good battle and nice punches.

Vote - Lokie

Can you plz vote her just need a couple more for the win - http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118312

^aight man thx for the vote...Aero u came nice with it feelin ur verse man had some nice punchs and good creativity gj nice battle dukes

yo can you hit up my battle now I only need a couple more votes..

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118312

Aero-nice structure,didnt really feel the multies,and since u rushed i can tell ur rhymes were a lil kiddy,ur punches still hit...hottest line is this
"I'm ramming dukes, ya mans and troops, will leave, they don't show patience
cuz the only way you can claim u above U.S. is by representing your Location"

Lokie-nice structure wasnt the best,punches did however land better than aero's..ur hottest line
"Shit Aero must think he got this height shit under lock,
But I’ll due this bitch worse then Em did Poppa Doc."
multies wasnt there at all but ur rhymes were more upped as in vocab wise...but didnt hit hard...

vote-lokie for harder punches and a better vocab structure...

*note to self work on battle multi's, and structure* thx for the vote

uppin

Gtbkm.............................................

My vote goes to Aero because he had some good personalls with the location and the sig thing, the punches were kinda tight though because both you had some good ones and some that felt pretty weak. The flow was pretty even, not much better on either side really, same with structure, multis, etc so Aero gets it for the better punches

Hit up my battles:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118554
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118568

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Tagv..............................................

aero that was a nice verse bit of a sketchy flow but ya punches were well spread
and ur ending bit did it 4 me, over all i think u were in control 5/10

loki had 2 very good punches, but in this game ya need more good outro
i think ya missed my vote by one punch, that ending was something

Think you studied flows like a professor of Aerodynamics
We’ll how the fuck can u spit when that mics alrdy damaged

that is great structure but gotta be reasonable, ya just didnt have it all
4/10

Vote Aero

Gracias.........................................Up

cool glad this is a better battle then what i thought it was going to be liek I said aero put up a nice verse 2-2 up and up we gooooooooo

Looks like I might have to step it up on this board. That was my 1st net-battle in like almost a year man good show gl to you again

1-2 Shadow didn't explain good enough... Whatever.

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can we get somemore votes on this plz????

yo im going with Lokie on this i enjoyed your punchlines and flow...

Originality:Lokie..
Complexity:Aero
Structure:Lokie
Flow:Lokie
Punches And PErsonals: Lokie

Vote:Lokie

Return the favour and drop an honest vote on my battle with disaster piece

Heres the link..
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118801

^ Explain that Better............................. 1-2 it will stand

^that was a wack vote aero u can get it dq'd if u like. I can't believe no1 is voting comeon peeps we need this battle closed not lingering on for days

Ok guys all u have to do is post a reply with good feedback drop ur links, and we'll reply back this battle is lingering on fo days how hard is it to get at most 9 ppl to vote on a battle properly comeon where all not stupid are we?

yo aero your flow was nice all line were equal but you got your ass served by lokie. he teared you a new ass with his punchlines and personals. lokie your best line was "Shit Aero must think he got this height shit under lock, But I’ll due this bitch worse then Em did Poppa Doc." that was hot boy. aero's best line was "Leave ya cold-achin, and you put on a big Front like Carmen Electra
And I constantly push Low-Keys like Delete, Space bar and etcetra" it sucks but its the best you got so, you no.

I give my vote to aero cuz come on..the truth is aero was good from beggining to the end

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

^ummm that vote should be dq'd, but do I have to go report it now or will it get dq'd by itself, and I hope u bastards fixed my damn record saying I have 1 loss when i ain't lose a battle yet

uppin I need 1 more vote to win this battle plz some1 come finish it for me thx pz

lokie takes this battle. both of you spit good verses but lokie i liked your multis a lot more the only problem is that im getting tired of everyone refering to that micheal jackson shit its getting so overplayed it sounds like a broken record. anyways good battle it was very close you both had good multis both had good structure but i felt lokies flow a lot more it kept on the same track the hole verse. i like the way that both of you are progressing and keep it up .