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plz no d/r
no crew
no hate

due date: anytime before 12am (midnight) canadian eastern time it's 1 28 now

gl to my opponent

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I need like one more vote.. so check this and vote.. and I Will holla when this up in done http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118312

Sry Aero I forgot to say it's was 1:28pm when I posted this up gl I'm droppin in a minute.

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Aero I peeped your last battle against decimal
It reminded me of felon’s they way u went down 5-0
K.O’d u must have been under pressure like Aerosol cans
Been here for 4 months and still can’t post an O-M
You couldn’t beat me with 8 months of practice
Cause I leave you soaring higher then Aero-batics
Shit Aero must think he got this height shit under lock,
But I’ll due this bitch worse then Em did Poppa Doc.
Fuck man ur lines stay stretched like Aero-bics
Trying the Michael Jackson thing eh I bet u like kids.
This battle reminds me of eviction notices the way I got you pinned
See I cut through (h)air* like a mustache trimmed.
Your win record remind me of cheerio’s the way I’m seein 0’s
See I’m a harder opponent to crack then the back of turtle’s
Think you studied flows like a professor of Aerodynamics
We’ll how the fuck can u spit when that mics alrdy damaged.

*- Aero means air, and anything to do with air like planes and aircrafts ect. also scissors cuts through hair like wings cut through air get it?

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http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...96&page=2&pp=15

^voted on that battle, and the 1 Gkillah dropped the link to alrdy in here

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Dang forgot about this.. Thanks for the PM.. This is a very Rushed keystyle I gotta jet..

You'll get ripped in this once I claim you as a b*tch in this Hun
Crew name's fitting for a rate cuz as Lyricist you're getting A-1
Look how quickly it's done, swift when I run, to beat him well
I'd say Satan got you on a bench press, cuz you weak as Hell
You're meeting L's, losses, cuz I only drop wackness when slamming you
And you bring heat 24/7? Must of opened an all day tanning booth
I'm ramming dukes, ya mans and troops, will leave, they don't show patience
cuz the only way you can claim u above U.S. is by representing your Location
Leave ya cold-achin, and you put on a big Front like Carmen Electra
And I constantly push Low-Keys like Delete, Space bar and etcetra
Yup just trying to put filler bars I'm aware i'm ripping him bad
Had to lower his ego, his head gotten bigger than the kid in his av
Ya sh*t and it's sad, u look down on hip hop like O'reilly and his big mouth
and you only pulling guns when taking the smiley from ya sig out

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AERo - started off strong and then started to slow down, good battle.

Best Line: You'll get ripped in this once I claim you as a b*tch in this Hun
Crew name's fitting for a rate cuz as Lyricist you're getting A-1

Worst Line: none.

Lokie - Good Battle man was feelin ya good flow and came hard wit the punches.

Best Line - Shit Aero must think he got this height shit under lock,
But I’ll due this bitch worse then Em did Poppa Doc.

Worst Line: none

OVERALL - Close battle but I gotta give it to Lokie, was feelin him more and thought he broght it harder. both had good punches just thought lokie flowed better. Step up on the flow Aero other then that good battle and nice punches.

Vote - Lokie

Can you plz vote her just need a couple more for the win - http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118312

^aight man thx for the vote...Aero u came nice with it feelin ur verse man had some nice punchs and good creativity gj nice battle dukes

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yo can you hit up my battle now I only need a couple more votes..

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118312

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Aero-nice structure,didnt really feel the multies,and since u rushed i can tell ur rhymes were a lil kiddy,ur punches still hit...hottest line is this
"I'm ramming dukes, ya mans and troops, will leave, they don't show patience
cuz the only way you can claim u above U.S. is by representing your Location"

Lokie-nice structure wasnt the best,punches did however land better than aero's..ur hottest line
"Shit Aero must think he got this height shit under lock,
But I’ll due this bitch worse then Em did Poppa Doc."
multies wasnt there at all but ur rhymes were more upped as in vocab wise...but didnt hit hard...

vote-lokie for harder punches and a better vocab structure...

*note to self work on battle multi's, and structure* thx for the vote

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uppin

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Gtbkm.............................................

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My vote goes to Aero because he had some good personalls with the location and the sig thing, the punches were kinda tight though because both you had some good ones and some that felt pretty weak. The flow was pretty even, not much better on either side really, same with structure, multis, etc so Aero gets it for the better punches

Hit up my battles:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118554
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118568

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