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NoLost4Rhymes Vs. Krackmittens
Alright..these are the rules
10-20 lines (max) no crew r/d none of that shyt....alright..only 15 minutes to spit...if thats find wit u...then start writtin now...i'll start the fifteen minutes once I get a reply from u alright..then in like a minute the battle will be ready go spit first...then after u put ur spit..tell me wen ur done..then u could time me wen i pm u back..or just tell me on the post.. |
just go check in wen ur ready alright...hurry up dawg...
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im checking in not sure about the 15 minute thing cause my phone wont stop ringing but if you give me like 30 minutes im coool wit that
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yea..alright then..sure..30 minutes..but hurry up man
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nolostforrhymes shit i think you lostyourmind
battling me kid is like a incurable disaese ill have you looking stupid like jin speaking chinese or swinging on my dick like i was ja and you ashanti spit ill type verses leaving you wit welts on your body peel out on your spit like i was on a ducati two wheeled bikes one mic still training this dike battles are like a fight and im not prepared to lose im a walking bomb without a trigger or a fuse krackmittens laying down lyrical minefields step up to the mic and feel how my rhymes feel ok some more wack shit cause i have mad shit going on but whatever |
lolz alright dawg..here's my spit....just gimme ten minutes
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Kitten!while your family is mourning, I'm preparing to send them pieces of you...
Cause theres no of you keeping your 'shit together' like 'melted feces and glue'... Facial hair, we all know thats something you wont be getting soon... So fuck a close shave cause the only thing im trimming down is your squad's platoon... You aint the cream of the crop, plus your shit aint hot... And your careers like 'Biker T-Shirts' cause ''If you can read this the bitch fell off'... I 'grind canvases' just to prove that i'll 'pound your frame'... cause your careers like removin' sink strainers the way its...down the drain... I feed off anger and rage, one bar will leave your brain on the page... I got you uncomfortable like little kids in rooms with strangers and gays... I can easily blind you with a slight stare, I don't fight fair... another pointless battle, NoLost vs. who the fuck on this site cares... |
wtf you feeding ass you kept pming me to hurry up and you didnt write your a bitch on the real
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wow who loves prewritten^^^^ fucking herbs
uppin this bullshit |
can someone jst vote on this shyt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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nolose4rymes won this 1 but both were pretty beat punchlines were weak and it didnt flow that well
vote rymes Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
KcrackMittens' Your Shit Was All Over The Place' Lost Me In A Couple Spots' .. And Most Of Your Lines Didn't Rhyme Worth Shit!! .. Sorry But Imma Have To Give It To LostRhyMes' ..
CheCck TheSe LinEs For a GoOd PuNch: I 'grind canvases' just to prove that i'll 'pound your frame'... cause your careers like removin' sink strainers the way its...down the drain... ^^Nice Punch Right There' ... 9/10 But You Both Could Work On All Category's.... Punches/Multies/Creativity/ Structure/ Flow/Vocab/Wordplay.. & Etc; |
thanx girl
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Alright, Rhmyes won this won easily. Krack, most of your stuff didn't rhmye that well. Especially your opener. Your punches were also very weak. Rhymes, you had a ok opener, and a good flo. It wasn't the best verse, but it was enough to get a win in this one.
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hi i wana battle anyone, whoever they b gona get beat
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yo my opinion on this battle krackmittens i cant understand what the fuck your saying your shit jumped all over the place. i am sure that it had structure and flow but i cant identify which is which.nolost4ryhmes u did do a bit of feeding and your ryhmes were pretty basic. there werent any real crazy punches but it hit hard enouph that u got the vote
i would like to see a rematch between the both of you where u both bring your entire vocab and deck of skills to the keyboard. i know that u can both flow better than u did and i want to see it done again. v-nolost4ryhmes. ok battle but nothing spectacular |
I don't think he could have possibly fed, seein' as he posted like 6 mins after you. anyway. Lost took this easily.
flow- no vocab-no multis- don't remember any punches- no creativity- no Nigga came real nice, i liked the lil' kids and strangers and gays line. Otha kat, seemed like you just didn't give a fuck and came madd heartless. Just take niggaz seriously i think. Vote: no lost |
This battle was onsided...but imma break it down like dis.
Vocab:Nolost Punches:Nolost Flow:Tie...kinda got lost on both yall verses Creativity:NoLost Multis:didnt see any Structure:Tie Opener:Nolost Closer:Nolost Personals:didnt see any Overall Vote:NoLost...even tho nothin in this battle bad me say "Damn" imma give it to u kuz ya put more work into ur verse. |
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