Alright..these are the rules

10-20 lines (max)
no crew r/d
none of that shyt....alright..only 15 minutes to spit...if thats find wit u...then start writtin now...i'll start the fifteen minutes once I get a reply from u alright..then in like a minute the battle will be ready

go spit first...then after u put ur spit..tell me wen ur done..then u could time me wen i pm u back..or just tell me on the post..

just go check in wen ur ready alright...hurry up dawg...

im checking in not sure about the 15 minute thing cause my phone wont stop ringing but if you give me like 30 minutes im coool wit that

yea..alright then..sure..30 minutes..but hurry up man

nolostforrhymes shit i think you lostyourmind
battling me kid is like a incurable disaese
ill have you looking stupid like jin speaking chinese
or swinging on my dick like i was ja and you ashanti
spit ill type verses leaving you wit welts on your body
peel out on your spit like i was on a ducati
two wheeled bikes one mic still training this dike
battles are like a fight and im not prepared to lose
im a walking bomb without a trigger or a fuse
krackmittens laying down lyrical minefields
step up to the mic and feel how my rhymes feel


ok some more wack shit cause i have mad shit going on but whatever

lolz alright dawg..here's my spit....just gimme ten minutes

Kitten!while your family is mourning, I'm preparing to send them pieces of you...
Cause theres no of you keeping your 'shit together' like 'melted feces and glue'...
Facial hair, we all know thats something you wont be getting soon...
So fuck a close shave cause the only thing im trimming down is your squad's platoon...
You aint the cream of the crop, plus your shit aint hot...
And your careers like 'Biker T-Shirts' cause ''If you can read this the bitch fell off'...
I 'grind canvases' just to prove that i'll 'pound your frame'...
cause your careers like removin' sink strainers the way its...down the drain...
I feed off anger and rage, one bar will leave your brain on the page...
I got you uncomfortable like little kids in rooms with strangers and gays...
I can easily blind you with a slight stare, I don't fight fair...
another pointless battle, NoLost vs. who the fuck on this site cares...

wtf you feeding ass you kept pming me to hurry up and you didnt write your a bitch on the real

wow who loves prewritten^^^^ fucking herbs

uppin this bullshit

can someone jst vote on this shyt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nolose4rymes won this 1 but both were pretty beat punchlines were weak and it didnt flow that well

vote rymes

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

KcrackMittens' Your Shit Was All Over The Place' Lost Me In A Couple Spots' .. And Most Of Your Lines Didn't Rhyme Worth Shit!! .. Sorry But Imma Have To Give It To LostRhyMes' ..

CheCck TheSe LinEs For a GoOd PuNch:

I 'grind canvases' just to prove that i'll 'pound your frame'...
cause your careers like removin' sink strainers the way its...down the drain...

^^Nice Punch Right There' ... 9/10

But You Both Could Work On All Category's.... Punches/Multies/Creativity/ Structure/ Flow/Vocab/Wordplay.. & Etc;

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thanx girl