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Enygma Vs Juelz
Hereis the rules....
10-12 lines No crew, hate, or dr votes ONLY EXPLAINED VOTES!!!!! Blind Spit(No Feedin) I'll spit first |
I don't know why newbs keep on callin me out..........
Hello to Juelz......... Who Else could be so stupid// I'm Ruthless, Chew up your rhymes and remove em wit a Toothpick// Easy Win For Me no Mystery, for you it's a Tough Loss// Just Grin And Bear It, Even His Parents will have him Cut Off// Bitch from Squad Up, I Wish A Lot Of Luck, Kid You'll Need It// I've even Severed Limbs from Veterans, easily you've Been Defeated// Every one these cats are pussies, These bitches Can't Be Dudes// He posted a group pic so we could see his Family Juelz// All from Detroit, See the Point, they're Lame Intruders// In the Same Room wit the Same Dudes, postin on the Same Computer// He's Bein Abused, he'd Even Lose if we Battled In The Mo// I call this my Jerry Mcguire verse, dawg I Hd Him At Hello!!!!// |
lol............. This fag signed out as soon as I dropped and I ain't seen him in here since. Shouldn't have called me out........
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fuck this guy he think he sweet i aint runnin/ put my dick in his ear so he can hear me com,n/and fuck gunns cause i bringing the heat/ im so stong i could kill him by beating him with a sheet/he couldn't win if his whole crew voted againts me/and he dont bang he couldn,t shoot guns if he was with gunit poppin them things/after this he goin want a rematch/ get smaked with the mac and see more color then a uno pack/and he sick i seen his pic and his face look like the head of my dick/and u not it he beat his dick so much he got a print on his shit/he gay i dont think chick /so smoke a lil bit he better off taken hormone pills so he can suck his own titts
i went over a lil bit but dont talk shit i said 10-12 lines |
upin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!white ice vs kingz
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breakdown for enygma:
flow:flow worked no off spots good job 7/10 volcab:basic but nothing shitty 7/10 punches:not much here best line,"He posted a group pic so we could see his Family Juelz//" that was good aside from that just some vague disses 6/10 overall:20/30 not the best i've read from you but good none the less breakdown for juelz: flow:it was kind of choppy the punches really were longer then the filler and it broke up the flow 4/10 volcab:basic nothing to say 5/10 punches:you know i've heard the more you talk about your dick the less you actually have down there and with almost everyone people penis related i gotta think either your a female who hasn't had it in a long time or a guy who's wants out of the closet either way you didn't throw any lines that hurt him 3/10 overall:12/30 really not a good battle verse vote--enygma gets the vote |
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119386 |
i think Juelz won he had all the punches
enygma needs to get a better flow ill give structure to Juelz so overall my vote is for Juelz cause i was feeling his shit |
overll battle was aight but i got my nigga Juelz he straight y'all get at me...
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vote goes to juelz
better overall performance with all the strong punches from juelz enygma needs to get betta flow and structure and try to use more metaphors and personals vote on my battles plz franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374 franchiZe 1-3 Shadows edge http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290 franchiZe 0-4 $$upreme http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293 franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176 franchiZe 1-0 Ghost354 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
juelz: your verse was weak man... totally generic disses, the structure is annoying, not great fow really. no vocab, no originality..
"and fuck gunns cause i bringing the heat/ im so stong i could kill him by beating him with a sheet" ^ thats what I'm talking about... second line too long, totally overplayed line, weak punch. enygma: i've seen better from you. that "family juelz" personal was weak, i wasnt feeling it at all. the couple bars you had on the crew were pretty decent, and hell you could have won this battle with worse. honest votes on my battle vs. franchiZe. |
Uppin 4 Votes........................
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Uppin this shit for votes................ C'mon people, Don't sleep
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Whats up wit some votes?
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Uppin some more.................
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Uppin For Votes..........................................
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If you're gonna look at the verses, why not vote? Just post a few lines of who you think won and why........
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Uppin 4 Votes........................
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dam enygma lol u upped this shyt like 10 times aiight enygma had a nice verse i was feelin it a couple punches not too much...u should have came harder tho man i seen better from u just cause he a newb dont mean go easy your verse was alot of filler but overall it was nice....juelz the opener was sick i was feelin that...then ya style fell off but u caught it and hit a couple mroe good punches...just because of all the filler and hardly any punches/personals...my vote goes to juelz
~1~ enygma or juelz id appreciate it iff either of you voted on my battles with denounced or disasterpiece420 thx |
Aight...
enygma: I liked ur verse, but you need to throw harder punches. Structure was pretty good, and I liked some of ur metas. A couple of good personals about the crew. Keep elevatin'. Jeulz: Ur verse was weak. U need to pull better satructure for real, but you tried hard it seemed. Don't talk about urself so much. Keep elevatin'. Vote: enygma |
Lets get some more votes up in here.................
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i will battle any bitch on dis site.8-12 bars rite now.whoop anyone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Votes? Votes?........Anyone got some votes?
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damm i dont know whut da fukk battle ya niggaz was lookin at lol
structure-enygma...juelz shit was all ova punchlines-enygma again....juelz had a few but they were played multis-enygma personals-enygma..da family juelz lines enjoyed-enygma....he took all da catagories hands down no hate or nothin juelz ya verse was cool but u was spittin some played shit my vote-enygma http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118364 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118442 ^^^^ THERE GO 2 OF MY BATTLES RETURN DA FAVOR PLEEZ....WUN! |
enygma gets my vote. other dude posted recycled rymes i have seen on a few different sites. "stick my dick in your ear so you can hear me cummin" has to have been used by every netcee in history at one point in time or another. that's like the universal generic line. enygma's shit kind of made me laugh a few times as well. his structure and flow was better....for textcee'in and all. ain't a hate vote, it's just who i think won.
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Uppin again...........................................
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like flow intell said, enygma lacked personals and punches, too many battles go on were the cats aint battlin....
Every one these cats are pussies, These bitches Can't Be Dudes// He posted a group pic so we could see his Family Juelz// All from Detroit, See the Point, they're Lame Intruders// In the Same Room wit the Same Dudes, postin on the Same Computer// He's Bein Abused, he'd Even Lose if we Battled In The Mo// I call this my Jerry Mcguire verse, dawg I Hd Him At Hello!!!!// ^^^ look, the only thing that stands out is the crew diss, but u aint against his crew r u?.... my vote goes to juelz simply because he had more personals/punches on enygma... u both need to elevate alot.... 1... |
whats the shit about i need 100+ posts to vote this battle?oh well if a poll vote is still needed i'll hook it up wen i get the 100....
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Quote:
I knew that retards wouldn't get my shit. Look at the first word in my verse. HOLY SHIT.......... could the first word be HELLO? I think it is.......... fuckin retard. Now do you get it....... I had him at hello.......... Kinda witty if you think about it....... |
Uppin for more votes..............What The Fuck People?
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Votes votes votes...........we need some more votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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check it i did vote on this but had my vote took off and honestly i didnt really read the spits. now that i have i actually have to give my vote to enygma.
juelz u had sum good flow but ure punches were not as good as i first thought. enygma ure punches were good with a few decent direct hits. juelz u need to get some originality in there and elevate ure rhymes cuz they are 2 basic. enygma u can do better so u need to elevate ure shit also but it was gud enuff this time to beat juelz Vote - enygma |
Thanks for the input............. uppin for more votes........
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Uppity upp upp uppin.................................
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okay here is my vote...my opinion...
well first off good verse from enygma...some original shit..i liked the flow...it was smart and not all gun and i 'm going to kill you bs...ya dig... best line.... Hello to Juelz......... Who Else could be so stupid// I'm Ruthless, Chew up your rhymes and remove em wit a Toothpick// overall good everything to enygma except personals and metas they werent' that strong.... worst line...All from Detroit, See the Point, they're Lame Intruders// In the Same Room wit the Same Dudes, postin on the Same Computer// but this was okay because this line after was tight He's Bein Abused, he'd Even Lose if we Battled In The Mo// I call this my Jerry Mcguire verse, dawg I Hd Him At Hello!!!!// i don't really want to comment on juelz verse...wow so played....bad line after bad line...there weren't any personalls... you didn't use his name or anything against him...it was too generic...the g era is over people... vote enygma |
Just need that one last vote..........................
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C'mon, Lets get some Fuckin Votes in here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ma vote goes to enigma.
he had some nice metaphors and multis feelin his flow too. needs to use wider vocab tho nice job fav line: Every one these cats are pussies, These bitches Can't Be Dudes// He posted a group pic so we could see his Family Juelz also i have heard juelz line b4 fuck this guy he think he sweet i aint runnin / put my dick in his ear so he can hear me com,n no proof no beef, u need to define ya lines vote enigma |
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