Hereis the rules....

10-12 lines
No crew, hate, or dr votes
ONLY EXPLAINED VOTES!!!!!
Blind Spit(No Feedin)
I'll spit first

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I don't know why newbs keep on callin me out..........

Hello to Juelz......... Who Else could be so stupid//
I'm Ruthless, Chew up your rhymes and remove em wit a Toothpick//
Easy Win For Me no Mystery, for you it's a Tough Loss//
Just Grin And Bear It, Even His Parents will have him Cut Off//
Bitch from Squad Up, I Wish A Lot Of Luck, Kid You'll Need It//
I've even Severed Limbs from Veterans, easily you've Been Defeated//
Every one these cats are pussies, These bitches Can't Be Dudes//
He posted a group pic so we could see his Family Juelz//
All from Detroit, See the Point, they're Lame Intruders//
In the Same Room wit the Same Dudes, postin on the Same Computer//
He's Bein Abused, he'd Even Lose if we Battled In The Mo//
I call this my Jerry Mcguire verse, dawg I Hd Him At Hello!!!!//

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lol............. This fag signed out as soon as I dropped and I ain't seen him in here since. Shouldn't have called me out........

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fuck this guy he think he sweet i aint runnin/ put my dick in his ear so he can hear me com,n/and fuck gunns cause i bringing the heat/ im so stong i could kill him by beating him with a sheet/he couldn't win if his whole crew voted againts me/and he dont bang he couldn,t shoot guns if he was with gunit poppin them things/after this he goin want a rematch/ get smaked with the mac and see more color then a uno pack/and he sick i seen his pic and his face look like the head of my dick/and u not it he beat his dick so much he got a print on his shit/he gay i dont think chick /so smoke a lil bit he better off taken hormone pills so he can suck his own titts

i went over a lil bit but dont talk shit i said 10-12 lines

upin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!white ice vs kingz

breakdown for enygma:

flow:flow worked no off spots good job 7/10

volcab:basic but nothing shitty 7/10

punches:not much here best line,"He posted a group pic so we could see his Family Juelz//" that was good aside from that just some vague disses 6/10

overall:20/30 not the best i've read from you but good none the less

breakdown for juelz:

flow:it was kind of choppy the punches really were longer then the filler and it broke up the flow 4/10

volcab:basic nothing to say 5/10

punches:you know i've heard the more you talk about your dick the less you actually have down there and with almost everyone people penis related i gotta think either your a female who hasn't had it in a long time or a guy who's wants out of the closet either way you didn't throw any lines that hurt him 3/10

overall:12/30 really not a good battle verse

vote--enygma gets the vote

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hey guys..if you vote on this link down here...then i'll return a favor!!!

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119386

i think Juelz won he had all the punches
enygma needs to get a better flow
ill give structure to Juelz
so overall my vote is for Juelz cause i was feeling his shit

overll battle was aight but i got my nigga Juelz he straight y'all get at me...

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vote goes to juelz
better overall performance with all the strong punches from juelz
enygma needs to get betta flow and structure and try to use more metaphors and personals

vote on my battles plz
franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374
franchiZe 1-3 Shadows edge
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290
franchiZe 0-4 $$upreme
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293
franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176
franchiZe 1-0 Ghost354
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

juelz: your verse was weak man... totally generic disses, the structure is annoying, not great fow really. no vocab, no originality..

"and fuck gunns cause i bringing the heat/ im so stong i could kill him by beating him with a sheet"

^ thats what I'm talking about... second line too long, totally overplayed line, weak punch.

enygma: i've seen better from you. that "family juelz" personal was weak, i wasnt feeling it at all. the couple bars you had on the crew were pretty decent, and hell you could have won this battle with worse.

honest votes on my battle vs. franchiZe.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

Uppin 4 Votes........................

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Uppin this shit for votes................ C'mon people, Don't sleep

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Whats up wit some votes?

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