FlOw InTeLLiGeNt vs Shady1132
 

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I hope I get better luck this time.Check in flow.

checkin in keyin now

aiight check it....

newbie votes and simple rhymin wont get you far in life//
dumass nigga think playin in a puddle is a deep sea dive//
im the viral fungus that attacks your vital functions//
have you jumpin like bungee cords attatched to spinal junctions//
my hilarious spirits are laughing at ya lyrics//
Shady beating me....HA.... u cant be serious//
how this nigga coming at me like i could be beat//
ill tie ya ankles to ya hands and ya wrists to ya feet//
blood drops on ya keys as u try to attack with fingers detatched//
ill chop you from shin to waist and have ya feet touchin ya back//
u see how im tearin apart ya body makin u feel smaller than ever//
i cant stop "cummin at ya" like usin tape to hold a split condom together//
i seperate real cats from strays dont get it twisted like white kids wit braids//
i mean your smart..like dicks in brains..hit with whips and chains//
u must be insane..cuz i cant see u in a fight like blind kids in gangs//

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ight.
here we go

Flow intellegent,you can't rhyme for shit/
u suck,like ur mom,when I shoved it in her clit/
Take ur skills as a guide,you shouldn't be here/
Log off and never come back,because the end is near/
When u look at me....the only thing I see ,is fear/
Flow tear me apart?...nigga fight like a woman by pullin hair/
U beating me......... is like Justin beating Em in a rap battle/
You like a horse who don't know when to leave the saddle/
Your winning a battle......is like a kid beating up shaq /
It just can't happen...leave rap battling alone n never come back/

uppin 4 some votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I have to give this shit to shady cuz his shited flowed well and it rymed, Shady you had some good punches in there.. you still need to work on some shit but that was iight, yo flow man.. you had OK punches and OK flow.. and some of your lines didnt even ryme come on man you can do better then that, work on that shit. vote - shady

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119893

^ which ones did not rhyme.But anyway,thanx for the vote.I'll vote in ur battle.Not saying I'm voting for you though.It good to hear all those times of reading tutorials have finnaly paid off.

nice verse shady i dont see where mine didnt rhyme neither but this man gkillas votes against me on all of my battle but u can keep your vote nice shyt uppin

thanx man,you r verse was hot too,man.But you should have stated GKillaz is a hater at the start.Then his vote would not have counted.

Uppinn 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

iight man, I PM'd you, with what I thought if you have a problem wit it, then tell me but dont call me a hata

Upppin 4 votes agian!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Imma give dat 2 Flow intelligent just cause hes simply 'Sick' like a cancer patian...lol na but imma give dat 2 flow cause he had a betta 'Flow'..Much props to Shady doe....

Vote: Flow intelligent

^thanx for voting

Need more votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

aGAIN,uPPIN FO MO VOTES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin for votes

Upppin for more votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i givin this one to shady,his flow jus better.i think it all rhymed.u know wot it like when typin.evry1 make spellin mistakes,uz ur common sense people when read the battles.

vote-shady

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^^^Thanx for voting

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no way


flowintelligent won on everylevel off this battle punchs vocab personals all that shit belongs to flow intelligant didnt see much of anything i aitn seen befroe from shadys verse just work on bein original an try an cut out that moma shit been played since momma jokes and flow dont slack on your opponents thats what gets you beat when you spit first

vot flow intel

uppin for votes

this is a fuckin joke i cant believe shady got two votes on flow j/k anyways
i think flow gots this....reasoons....shady u need to elevate ur shits to simple work on ur wordplay and maybe it would seem like ur spittin something and not just throwing out words that rhyme overall 5/10 ur shits to simple elevate...no on to flow...iliked ur wordplay but if ur opponet was someone else i dont know u probably lose u need to elevate use punchlines that hit harder good battle though overall 7/10 vote goes to flow

Alright, return the favour gent's: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120460

Anyways, sorry to say this didn't really seem like a close battle, Shady ya need to swtich ya shit up, and maybe make it a little longer so ya can throw more punches. Only time I drop a shorter verse is if I know for sure I got hard hits in it.

Multi-s- wasn't really a whole lot either way so I give this a tie
Punches- Actually I revied both again, and withdraw my statment up there /\/\/\/\ I still give it to F.I cause he had more, but not many more and Shady you had some good ones.
Flow, I give that to F.I cause...well just cause it flowed better.

Any questions bout my vote p.m I'll explain it more.

Nice battle boys,

votin
 

yo this is how i see it look flow had some ill shit straight out of the dome which was way better i should call him vocabulary when he spit i could actually see him chopping you up in my head but when i read your rhymes it took me a while to picture his mom lol vote goes to flow