10-15 lines

I hope I get better luck this time.Check in flow.

checkin in keyin now

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aiight check it....

newbie votes and simple rhymin wont get you far in life//
dumass nigga think playin in a puddle is a deep sea dive//
im the viral fungus that attacks your vital functions//
have you jumpin like bungee cords attatched to spinal junctions//
my hilarious spirits are laughing at ya lyrics//
Shady beating me....HA.... u cant be serious//
how this nigga coming at me like i could be beat//
ill tie ya ankles to ya hands and ya wrists to ya feet//
blood drops on ya keys as u try to attack with fingers detatched//
ill chop you from shin to waist and have ya feet touchin ya back//
u see how im tearin apart ya body makin u feel smaller than ever//
i cant stop "cummin at ya" like usin tape to hold a split condom together//
i seperate real cats from strays dont get it twisted like white kids wit braids//
i mean your smart..like dicks in brains..hit with whips and chains//
u must be insane..cuz i cant see u in a fight like blind kids in gangs//

~1~ 15 bars match it

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ight.
here we go

Flow intellegent,you can't rhyme for shit/
u suck,like ur mom,when I shoved it in her clit/
Take ur skills as a guide,you shouldn't be here/
Log off and never come back,because the end is near/
When u look at me....the only thing I see ,is fear/
Flow tear me apart?...nigga fight like a woman by pullin hair/
U beating me......... is like Justin beating Em in a rap battle/
You like a horse who don't know when to leave the saddle/
Your winning a battle......is like a kid beating up shaq /
It just can't happen...leave rap battling alone n never come back/

uppin 4 some votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I have to give this shit to shady cuz his shited flowed well and it rymed, Shady you had some good punches in there.. you still need to work on some shit but that was iight, yo flow man.. you had OK punches and OK flow.. and some of your lines didnt even ryme come on man you can do better then that, work on that shit. vote - shady

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^ which ones did not rhyme.But anyway,thanx for the vote.I'll vote in ur battle.Not saying I'm voting for you though.It good to hear all those times of reading tutorials have finnaly paid off.

nice verse shady i dont see where mine didnt rhyme neither but this man gkillas votes against me on all of my battle but u can keep your vote nice shyt uppin

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thanx man,you r verse was hot too,man.But you should have stated GKillaz is a hater at the start.Then his vote would not have counted.

Uppinn 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

iight man, I PM'd you, with what I thought if you have a problem wit it, then tell me but dont call me a hata

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Upppin 4 votes agian!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Imma give dat 2 Flow intelligent just cause hes simply 'Sick' like a cancer patian...lol na but imma give dat 2 flow cause he had a betta 'Flow'..Much props to Shady doe....

Vote: Flow intelligent

^thanx for voting

Need more votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

aGAIN,uPPIN FO MO VOTES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!