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MetaPhysik vs. M.F.P
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no d/r votes no crew votes u spit first |
spit atleast 15 mins after me
checkin in start ya spit now cus i gotta make a new one also |
ok 15 -25 min i will so jus spit
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u betta hurry up or i won't be able to spit today might have to do it tomorrow
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122363 vote.............................................. .....
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shut the hell up we ain't votin right now!
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Boot Rit in the head like I kick knowledge to this wack cat..
.....After he spit.....I said what he said.. Quote:
Told Ritish he can eat my words....so he grabbed a spoon.. Only time you get the upper hand..is when its 12 o'clock noon.. Damn Rit, ya verse couldnt touchdown if ya fingered a clit.. End ya life quick.. like minute men fucking on first dates.. Ill state, you the facts with glue like im sealing your fate.. Im whipping and sipping this pussys clit in from spitten.. I bet you didnt understand that like stepping on prewrittens.. Damn kitten, you suck please consider quitting, ya entertainer.. Metallic holdin ya teeth like fill-ins and retainers.. My gat will leave you dusted like cremation in containers.. If you didnt know His name is Ritish And at home i call him kitten Also he has a retainer |
meta physik should be changed to mentally challenged.....
ur raps suc while mine are gettin acknowledged..... u suck dicks like ur in wonderland...... faster than i can look at my watch and count at the minute hands...... u hobo y don't u jus quit and go bak to ur trash can....... while ur readin this, somethin of urs is goin down, ur attention span..... even the fat kid started laughin wen he saw u...... but go figure cuz u go to a schoo where the fat ppl poo..... wat do u expect from a fuckin bitch whose favorite numba is 69....... u betta leave before u get a fine cuz this battle is mine...... |
o and also u broke the rules its supposed to be 13 lines max and u have 16
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Boot Rit in the head like I kick knowledge to this wack cat..1
.....After he spit.....I said what he said..2 Quote: Originally Posted by M.F.P wat kind of weak rap was that...... 3 Told Ritish he can eat my words....so he grabbed a spoon..4 Only time you get the upper hand..is when its 12 o'clock noon..5 Damn Rit, ya verse couldnt touchdown if ya fingered a clit..6 End ya life quick.. like minute men fucking on first dates..7 Ill state, you the facts with glue like im sealing your fate..8 Im whipping and sipping this pussys clit in from spitten..9 I bet you didnt understand that like stepping on prewrittens..10 Damn kitten, you suck please consider quitting, ya entertainer..11 Metallic holdin ya teeth like fill-ins and retainers..12 My gat will leave you dusted like cremation in containers..13 |
o those bottom stuff isn't part of ur rap?
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nope
upping for votes. drop links and we'll peep them honestly |
meta..callin him kitten lol i hope no pun intended.
but yea,...callin him kitten may even be a compliment lmao |
wow ive seen better out of u metaphysic alot better
overall 8/10 i kno u could do much better than that openerBoot Rit in the head like I kick knowledge to this wack cat..1 .....After he spit.....I said what he said..2 Quote: Originally Posted by M.F.P wat kind of weak rap was that...... 3 that was wack with bad structure sorry man but thats what i think aight ok heres my breakdown for the middle ok i give you a 7/10 on this Told Ritish he can eat my words....so he grabbed a spoon..4 Only time you get the upper hand..is when its 12 o'clock noon..5 Damn Rit, ya verse couldnt touchdown if ya fingered a clit..6 End ya life quick.. like minute men fucking on first dates..7 Ill state, you the facts with glue like im sealing your fate..8 Im whipping and sipping this pussys clit in from spitten..9 I bet you didnt understand that like stepping on prewrittens..10 ok closer it was good 8/10 Damn kitten, you suck please consider quitting, ya entertainer..11 Metallic holdin ya teeth like fill-ins and retainers..12 My gat will leave you dusted like cremation in containers..13 ___________________________ _______________ ____ ok mfp this is the best ive seen you do lol only batle i ever seen you in though opener your was better then metaphysics it was still a lil wack 7/10 better than his middle he got u on that 6.9 outa ten closer tie overall 8.3 outa ten maybe it was just luck im not sure but my vote goes to mfp sorry metaphysic |
Boot Rit in the head like I kick knowledge to this wack cat..
.....After he spit.....I said what he said.. Quote: Originally Posted by M.F.P wat kind of weak rap was that...... 8...that was a strong opener u feel me, got the quote in there and everything showin sum gud creativity, that's the kinda stuff i like to see. Told Ritish he can eat my words....so he grabbed a spoon.. Only time you get the upper hand..is when its 12 o'clock noon.. 7...strong punch, the punch didnt really go wit the setup line but it still worked. Damn Rit, ya verse couldnt touchdown if ya fingered a clit.. 6...this a gud punch, one line punches are harder to do i think but u pulled it off well. End ya life quick.. like minute men fucking on first dates.. Ill state, you the facts with glue like im sealing your fate.. 5...probly ure weakest punch, rather basic i think thats where u lost the points on that punch. Im whipping and sipping this pussys clit in from spitten.. I bet you didnt understand that like stepping on prewrittens.. 6...aight punch, another kinda basic punch but u pulled it off again, sort of fallin off in the middle ure verse is. Damn kitten, you suck please consider quitting, ya entertainer.. Metallic holdin ya teeth like fill-ins and retainers.. My gat will leave you dusted like cremation in containers.. 7...strong finisher, gud to see a spit where u opened strong and finished strong!! meta physik should be changed to mentally challenged..... ur raps suc while mine are gettin acknowledged..... 5...weak opener, rather basic and u the rhymin was off, u barely managed to get a little rhyme in that shit. u suck dicks like ur in wonderland...... faster than i can look at my watch and count at the minute hands...... 4...wtf??? weak punch, the structure was well off in that line, and too basic. u hobo y don't u jus quit and go bak to ur trash can....... while ur readin this, somethin of urs is goin down, ur attention span..... 5...started off gud, but in a way that last line is dissin ureself, i mean ppl cud take that as his attention span goin down cuz this shit just so boring. even the fat kid started laughin wen he saw u...... but go figure cuz u go to a schoo where the fat ppl poo..... 2...bleh!! dont know what u were tryin there, but it didnt work!! wat do u expect from a fuckin bitch whose favorite numba is 69....... u betta leave before u get a fine cuz this battle is mine...... 4...wack finisher!! just straight bleh!! Meta, overall gud performance. Ure flow and structure was on u hit hard wit ure punches, opened and closed strong, only flaw was that u cud do better i think, u fell off in the middle i think with some lines kinda basic. MFP, u need to elevate a lot. ure flow was probably ure best point, ure structure was not the best and ure punches were wack. u opened and closed weak and through the middle u were spittin basic shit, beef up ure punchlines and get creative, use personals and multis in ure spit, check out ure opponents previous battles and posts and their profile, a little research so u can have some ammo to use against him!! V/ - Meta |
uppin for more votes
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v/ Meta.
Much more effective personals.. consistantly hard hittin punches.. some decent concepts.. a couple of wack 'sex' lines but didnt drag ya verse down.. nice use of flow.. multies were effective.. not much to criticise.. Quote:
And you got a vote?? nothin worth mentionin in your verse.. jus a bunch of vague inewffective impersonal disses.. didnt attack your opponent.. all your concepts were weak.. like the "your favorite number is 69" line.. wtf was that?! its not even an insult.. Blowout. |
uppin for mo votes
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Punches: Meta
Personals: Meta Flow: Meta Creativity: Meta Structure: Stretcheeeeeeeeeed None Overall Verse: M V/M Why: Cuz he had betta punches and personals thats what killed the other cat. The other cat started good ended fucked. And Stayed with basic punches...elevate. |
ok meta u couldve dun betta then dat u a vet right?? dat was kinda lame it sounded more like a open mic
mfp u had a nice drop wit a nice flow and good stuff 2 read bestline-meta physik should be changed to mentally challenged..... ur raps suc while mine are gettin acknowledged..... nice start worsteline-faster than i can look at my watch and count at the minute hands...... u hobo y don't u jus quit and go bak to ur trash can....... stretched punches-mfp flow-meta structure-mfp open-mfp close-meta winner-mfp meta u shouldve took dis seriously |
^^oh my word
hes mad cus i voted against him in his battle lmao |
Dj Ludacris91: hey
Dj Ludacris91: can i ask u a favor Jae Cyph: yeah Dj Ludacris91: can u drop a vote on me? Jae Cyph: link Dj Ludacris91: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122439 Jae Cyph: who u want me to vote fo nigga? Jae Cyph: ? Dj Ludacris91: me? Jae Cyph: whatchur name son Jae Cyph: MFP right> Dj Ludacris91: yeah Jae Cyph: aight Dj Ludacris91: thanx Heh .. |
^^gangsta
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wat the fuck y didn't u put the whole conversation down i said "no never mind don't do that drop an honest vote"
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fuckin bastard's jus tryin to get me in trouble
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good battle but meta took this no doubt...his punches were ill some filler...wordplay and multies were sick....good metas...good structure and flow..nice drop
overall: 8/10 m.f.p. had a good verse too but i dont think he came hard enough to take this battle..the opener sucked on the real fam wasnt hott at all but the rest of your verse was aiight... a couple good punches some wordplay structure was off but the flow of it was good.... overall:7/10 vote:meta...overall his verse was all around better in every category nice shyt from both but meta takes my vote ~!1!~ |
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